The Brave Man Failed to Draw the Holy Sword

It's a rare two-protagonist plot, both written well. One is the son of prophecy but failed to pull out the holy sword and ran away from home to take risks; the other is a brave man who has taken the template of Joan of Arc and has justice in his heart but is growing up. I look forward to the two meeting each other. (By the way, why do the introduction and the title of the book only include the Arthur part? This may cause readers to find that it is different from what they imagined, and then be persuaded to leave. I hope it can be changed 😂)

It can be seen that the author wants to write a double line, but the introduction only introduces Arthur, so most people come in to see Arthur. This will make it uncomfortable [Thinking]

As of July 31st, evaluation of Chapter 8 of Volume 2. 1. Theme format: Japanese-style Western fantasy novel-dual protagonists 2. Content introduction: This book begins with the failure of the last crusade against the Demon King and the death of the brave man. A new prophecy gave birth to a new hero, but this carefully cultivated hero was not recognized by the Holy Sword. Instead, the onlookers who rushed into the ceremony pulled out the Holy Sword in order to protect their family from punishment (actually, the reason for pulling out the Holy Sword was quite funny). The story of this book unfolds from this point, and revolves around two protagonists, a brave man who has not drawn the holy sword and a new brave man who has drawn the holy sword to protect his family. The subject matter is novel and the content is not cliché. 3. Brief comment on the writing style: Among the authors of Tomato, the sentences are smooth and logical, and they can get passing marks. The overall story is not impetuous, not brainless, not Long Aotian, nor plain as water, nor does it deliberately show off the writing style and use gorgeous rhetoric. It's not a fun article, nor is it a sad article (a slight setback). It has just been started. I will add additional comments when there is new content in the future.

The Arthur line is good, but to be honest, I basically won't watch Jeanne. Coming here is more for Arthur.

Interestingly, Jeanne is the protagonist of the classic royal RPG, but as a reader, I was attracted by the title of the book, and what attracted me even more was the male protagonist's mental journey (the failure of the Holy Sword to be selected negated the belief/motivation of the male protagonist for more than ten years, and what the male protagonist will do and what kind of person he becomes is what attracts readers). So, promise me, will you give the male protagonist more plot? Volume 2 Chapter 18 and 19 Arthur is annoying The author's idea is good. Several of Arthur's recent pictures introduce the power of the demons, but this is quite boring.

Nice! I just finished reading it and updated it to chapter 37. At the beginning, the setting gave me a feeling similar to that of Simmel, who did not draw the holy sword but completed the heroic act. After reading it and thinking about it, since there are two protagonists (Arthur and Jean), it feels a bit like the iron broken teeth for Inuyasha and the natural teeth for Sesshomaru. The obvious difference between Arthur and Jean is that one is powerful but confused, and the other is determined but has no strength. What's a bit uncomfortable to watch is that it gets stuck at a critical point when switching perspectives (from Arthur to Jean). The description of the battle is too detailed (this is a matter of opinion, whether some battle descriptions can be more condensed) My personal suggestion is to finish writing a complete paragraph before switching. And it's also based on me personally, I prefer to see Arthur's perspective. Above It's rare that I have the motivation to read a book and feel in the mood to post a review. After reading the update, it was a bit rushed to be with Vivian and then die. The little girl Lily didn't handle the knife well here. Human emotions are complicated. If you are not decadent, you will become a wooden person by doing nothing. It is normal to feel confused, but how to deal with it so that the character can truly have a soul needs to be thought about carefully. For example, Guo Jing in The Legend of the Condor Heroes had a plot when he was growing up. He was confused about the meaning of practicing martial arts, and came up with the idea that everyone could avoid killing by not practicing martial arts. Later, he was dispelled by Hong Qigong, and his ideological realm was sublimated and he became a true chivalrous man. The author may be confused during this period, so he can refer to many classic techniques. Anyway, keep up the good work💪 I'm just a reader, and the reference I can give is limited. It's not always the case that a good work will hit a bottleneck.

[I just saw the hero leading Vivian to break out, and the hero killed the governor] Two main lines run in parallel, the hero's own adventure and the change and progress of the female hero Jeanne. Both main lines are quite interesting. But now in this paragraph of text, too many descriptors give me a feeling that it is difficult to swallow. A bunch of unnecessary descriptors are piled into a paragraph. If you can change this situation where a paragraph is stacked with unnecessary descriptors, it will feel much better when you read it. Of course, this may also be my own feeling, a matter of personal taste [Stack a Armor] So give it a four-star review

Continuing with what I just said (Chapter 2 of the second chapter), as a brave man, she fought against the evil forces and saved others. It is understandable that she did this. However, the subsequent plot and the counterattack against the powerful enemy did not give me a very good sense. If it were not for the holy sword, her behavior would only lead herself into the abyss of death. Without thinking about other factors, if the brave men in other works did not have such a strong backing, she would not even be able to get out of the first city. , I can also see her efforts in the author's description, but in just this little time, she was able to grow quickly and rival (the wording is a bit unclear, let's say confrontation.) Strong men who are several levels higher than him, most things in this world cannot be compensated by hard work. . . . . That's all I want to say for now. I feel pretty good about the male protagonist's line in this novel, but the heroine's sexual handling is a little bad. The above is just my personal opinion. If other readers or authors have any different opinions, you can put them forward. Please discuss rationally and don't curse. If you really want to curse, please don't affect my family. Maybe my understanding of the female protagonist is so lacking, mainly because the early stage processing was very good, so I didn't read the subsequent female protagonist very carefully. If you have any other details, please let me know. . Overall, the author Dada wrote a pretty good book. I hope you can support it and I gave you a small gift.

Can there be more lines about Arthur? Isn't it a male channel? Why am I looking at women?

After looking at it, I saw that there are two storylines unfolding. In fact, most people came here for Arthur. As a result, Arthur's story line is less than that of the other protagonist. Although Jeanna's writing is also good.

It's very well written, there's not much to say, and it's very informative. For me as a "reader" It's hard to wait for one protagonist to finish before watching another, but I just prefer to watch Arthur's main plot. (Changing the protagonist back and forth is actually not a good experience for most readers) I think I can try writing two books, but it would be best if the timelines can be synchronized. (It feels convenient to write them separately) This also increases the freedom of readers to choose what to look at. At the beginning, the real "protagonist" will default to the male protagonist, which is difficult to change. For situations like two protagonists in one shot, you can use ""male protagonist, female protagonist + title"" to publish it in two books. (I can't think of anything else, just a comment)

More of Arthur's

To be honest, I feel good. I have only read less than 12 chapters now. I will catch up later. Now I will just guess the plot. The following are my personal opinions and all are guesses. Arthur grew up in an empire, and his teacher was also the best teacher. He did not feel the suffering of the people at the bottom, and he did not have the consciousness to change the world (here I am not talking about simply defeating the devil, but changing the world so that the civilians can live a happier life), so in 16 He was not recognized by the Holy Sword when he was 18 years old (or maybe Jeanna recast the Holy Sword and Arthur used the Holy Sword), but he still ran away (went to another path). He could not accept such a big sense of gap, because the knowledge he had been instilled in him since he was a child was that you are the child of prophecy, and you will pull up the Holy Sword in the future. Let's talk about Jeanne. After reading the comments, many people said that she is a kingly protagonist. I'm not sure if it's because I don't know much about this, but judging from the plot of chapters 1 to 12, it seems that the class conflict here is quite serious, and Jeanne is from an ordinary village. So she is at the bottom. She is still young and may not understand what class contradiction is, but with gradual experience, she will understand the contradictions and the deeper darkness better, so it looks very easy in the front, but it will definitely become more and more difficult in the future. So in general, I think Arthur is the one who killed the devil, and Jeanne is the one who changed the world and brought equality to everyone, and their fate will definitely be entangled in the future, so it won't work without one of them. The above are all personal opinions.

I don't know why, but the male protagonist is very able to arouse emotions. But the female protagonist is relatively dull. In fact, I personally have a lot of filters for Joan of Arc templates. But the contrast between the two heroic lines of the male and female protagonists from the cross perspective is very strong. The male protagonist has been fighting a life-or-death battle from beginning to end, while the heroine's journey has been too smooth, and there are strong rescuers in major crises. External recognition of the heroine also comes too quickly. In comparison, the heroine's plot is much boring. I think that if you want to write a traditional hero's growth path like the heroine, you need to draw more words to portray the image. How teammates build up with the heroine also needs more space to show, and even how everyone identifies with the heroine can be a separate chapter. But now that there are two protagonists, it is impossible to paint so many words and inks to shape the heroine. So maybe more ink should be devoted to the male protagonist. The female protagonist can be interspersed with several chapters as interludes after each plot. Like now, half the male protagonist and half the female protagonist, when the perspective of the climax is switched, the emotion disappears instantly

So far, the writing is very good. Although I hardly watch the Jeanne line, but as far as the Arthur line is concerned, it is very interesting.

It's well written. It's difficult to write novels with dual protagonists like Jeanne and Arthur, especially the timing of the switch and the different portrayal of images. But Jeanne belongs to the traditional brave novel. The routine is completely guessing what the follow-up process will be from the beginning. I hope to write more about Arthur. Now Arthur is almost always on the run. I feel that there is growth, but there is not much description. Jeanne's growth plot can be slightly away from the traditional formula. Otherwise, it still feels a bit boring.

Although the two protagonists are good-looking and have their own characteristics, I still prefer Arthur. Please write more about Arthur.

So wonderful! Jeanne's transformation and Arthur's growth, the two-line structure is just right and makes people look forward to the follow-up. Personally, I like Arthur's part better! The son of the prophecy failed to pull out the holy sword, but... It is not that the one who uses the holy sword is the brave, but the sword held by the brave is the holy sword! Hateful! With such delicate and three-dimensional character descriptions, addictive plot, and amazing battle details, it's so beautiful! Why is the rating so low? So few people are watching? ! It feels a bit like Lord of the Rings and Fleur Lian Buried. Three views are super correct!

[Facepalm] Arthur is so miserable. Compared to being a brave man, I feel that Arthur is walking the path of a king. Wherever he goes, people get hurt. I hope Jeanna will speed up and the two of them will meet soon.

It looks good, I hope Arthur can become the King of Heroes instead of being dragged down by the past of the Brave Man and the Brave Sword.

Four stars given, I feel pretty good. Jeanne, France, Jeanne D'Arc, Joan of Arc, right? Arthur is King Arthur of England, Arthur Pendragon, a native of Camelot, changed his surname to Lorraine (Lorraine region of France?) An anti-routine hero or a traditional hero are both okay.

Both lines are very good, one is the heroic line of Joan of Arc, and the other is the heroic line of Knight Arthur. However, I feel that the content of the plot depends on the author's own pacing arrangement. If it affects the portrayal of the female warrior in order to take care of the readers, it will be more than worth the gain.

It is a rare novel with two protagonists, both lines are well written. The two lines are different story templates. The Jeanne line is like a classic wasted warrior, shouting justice, partner, and then violently upgrades, taking the Holy See route. The Arthur line is still at a low point. In order to pay for the trip, he took on a mission and fell into various crises. It is estimated that he finally took the folk route and integrated various forces to fight against the devil. I saw the constant conflicts in the latest chapter, which is very interesting. Come on, the author👏

The suffering is not enough, and the time in the fortress has been passed by in one stroke, and I feel that something is missing. The suffering is not enough. How about letting Arthur be the main swordswoman, and directly using the knife to make the character more three-dimensional, knife, knife, knife, knife, knife, knife, knife.

Book title "Legendary King of Resistance-Arthur"

How did you, Osman, become the devil? [Laughing], how did you, the son of a duke, run from Lorraine to Krakow in a few days [what], how did you, Matthias, become the Hungarian orthodoxy [thinking]

In fact, I just want to give it four stars. This is a decent hero novel. Five stars because the author tried a dual-line narrative storytelling method that I had imagined. Just in time to see what the final effect will be. There are no obvious flaws in the writing, nor is the style childish, and I hope it won't be a eunuch.

Jeanne still hasn't written enough. A meeting and heart-to-heart talk between two generations of brave men can be arranged later, which I think will be very exciting. Mainly Jeanne is still a little bit, how should I put it? Catch the duck and put it on the shelf. Still not as pleasing to the senses as Arthur. (The reason may be that the plot is a bit too rushed, that is, the demons are pressing harder and harder, and Jeanna has no time to develop. There should be civil strife among the demons in the future. It would be much better if I take the opportunity to write more chapters about Jeanne.)

It's so delicious, it's the mouth teeth that I want to see. (Only refers to the Arthur part) A brave person is one who is upright and magnificent, goes all out when encountering problems, lives towards death, and finds a glimmer of hope in despair [lick screen]

The writing is really good so far, very traditional but very interesting. I look forward to the day when the two of them grow up and meet each other.