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Ah~ This short article of 170,000 words is really only enough to take one bite and then be gone QAQ... The main plot is mainly about the family. After the second time travel, the logistics team worked hard to raise Xiaosi, and raised Xiaosi very well. The originally happy training career was ruined by the nose. Under the threat of high pressure, Xiaosi worked hard to improve himself, just to no longer be a protected being. Now, I want to walk side by side with Gong... After encountering many crises, the two of them finally succeeded in getting rid of Fushimi's nose together, and then another hidden knife was hidden in this wave, so the nurturing game started again (laughing, the husband and wife are nurturing each other, right?) But sweet! Cute! ! Good luck! ! ! The timeline in the article goes by so fast~ It focuses on describing the state of a certain stage and then follows the time: a few years later... However, although the timeline is stretched very quickly, the specific content does not feel sloppy. I can only say that the details are appropriate, and the details are really delicate and sincere, which is really annoying! The conflict between the two and Fumi Nose also stems from the special life form that attracts covetousness, which is logically ✓; as well as saving Lily and Harry (yes, James is dead); Harry, who has a biological mother, is obviously well-raised (well-raised, he just missed blowing off the roof of Hogwarts with the twins)... There is only one biggest pain point: from the beginning to the end of Gonghe Sisi's car, I can barely see the exhaust fumes. I hate it! It is necessary to increase the fertility rate without letting people watch the cars, but it is invisible and anti-intellectual｡◔‸◔｡… Finally, here's my strong recommendation ~ A rare masterpiece by Simon ~ (*ෆ´ ˘ `ෆ*)♡

Let's just say, no matter how you write it, it's delicious. Especially this one, the writing is good and the emotions are natural. The older man allowed Si Jiao to see his feelings clearly step by step with indulgence. From shallow to deep, every stage of change originated from Felix. There was no over-protection, only just the right amount of help to help Snape grow up more smoothly, give him the confidence to fight against people with malicious intentions, and make him no longer regard the warmth he encountered as a boy as his only salvation. Lily still surrounds Snape like a little sun, but compared to the sun, the little bat already has a ghost that is exclusive to him. He is no longer alone, because Felix will be by his side, and they will eventually become the most important person to each other.

The writing style is relatively bland, but the two stay together for a long time, which is really beautiful! ! ! ! Who knows the lethality of Ruinian's upward attack? The cultivation system is the sixth. My dear Rael also survived, so excited, so excited, so excited! ! ! ! ! !

Very nice! ! Each of the big books has its own characteristics. In this book, the two of them nurture each other so well! ! ! The main thing is that the male protagonist raises Sif, allowing him to avoid bad things and giving him a bigger stage. There is a knife in the later stage, but I don't think it is a knife, and it soon becomes sweet! The plot logic is great [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

It's a very warm development story. In the future, travelers will become someone's soul. From the end of the year to the end of the year, they will finally eat it after fifteen years of raising it (well, I said too much, it is suspected of being a spoiler. [Learned]) The development of daily life + fighting against the main line of LV. The relationship is relatively low, and it belongs to the type of watering and sowing fertilization first, waiting for it to slowly sprout? It's a pity that it's too late and there are so many extras that I can't watch them all. The ending is very beautiful, so don't worry.

Reading cookies before bed! Beautiful This article is set in the original generation, but uses a lot of time jumps to unfold only the essence of the plot. It is suitable for reading before going to bed. The setting of the plot is also very reasonable, and the extended plot of the sub-generation in the extra chapter can even see a happier Xiao Ha (with the main CP, it's really nice to have such a mutually dependent relationship)😗 The teacher is really suitable for writing this kind of ocss that works hand in hand. It makes me so happy🥺🥺…

It's a light daily heart-warming story, with some accidents interspersed in the middle, but it comes back together in the end. Maybe it's fast-paced because it's not long, but everything is explained clearly, which is very good⁄(⁄⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄⁄)⁄

Halfway through, I discovered that the author had also read another book and liked it! Author, we love you!

Awesome, the only Sri Lankan textbook that I have read in its entirety

Very warm and good, I like this ending very much

The plot is reasonable, there is nothing cool about Long Aotian, it feels like they really exist in the magical world, which is great! ! !

Not bad, it's a 98.9% Sweet article. In terms of rating, strictly speaking it is around 8.8 To 8.9. It can be regarded as a professor fanfic that satisfies most of the fantasies and expectations without any mistakes, and since the interference started in the pro era, the character of the professor in this article does not appear to be OOC, which is reasonable.

Overall, it's good and looks good.

Looks good, Severus was raised well It would be nice if the relationship between Phoenix and Silver could be described more delicately.

Beautiful, the text is very comfortable

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

This is my preference! ! !

Very nice, recommended

I like it, it looks good

I love watching Si teach being favored! ! !

Really good! Stayed up late to read it!

I really like this kind of training system

Okay, just average

It's bland but heavy, probably due to the times. The emotional development is quite delicate, and it can be rated around 8.3 Points.

It's a good read, sweet story, the last chapter is going to make me laugh to death.

The low rating is just because there are not enough readers. It is an absolute treasure novel. It deserves more than 9 points from me. The writing is good.

A very delicious article! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!