Weave Your Cage with Death

How can I put it... The character description of the characters is pretty good, especially the heroine, well... It can be seen that the author is very loyal, and the writing style is very similar to that book, but I think the heroine is a bit crazier than that one... And it's kind of scary... Using the system's props to talk in the protagonist's ear... (Any further words will be spoilers) Hmm... I quite like this part ~ Anyway, come on, author, don't stop, don't stop, don't stop, say important things three times! If you continue to write like this, it will become moderately high even if it is not popular... (Subjectively, for reference only)

I bought it. The author wrote the book very carefully and there are many pictures! It's really good to use AI to paint. Xia Ying and Su Muchin's portrayal is good, not as completely morbid and high-pressure as Nian Nian Yanke, and sometimes the smell of Xiao Cheng from the past can be seen in the protagonist. All in all, it's delicious! Xia Ying: Inheriting the will of my predecessor (Xiaocheng Niannian), I can't lose [angry]

Eat lavishly, rare fine chaff The plot is non-routine, the transitions are natural and smooth, and the climax of the conflict is very tense. The emotional descriptions of the characters are delicate. If you want to compare (in my personal opinion), the two protagonists are better written than Xiao Cheng's book. The author's writing style is quite good, and occasionally one or two sentences make people's eyes shine. The author usually responds frequently in the comment area and updates quickly. I hope the author will take care of his health. After all, it is very tiring to update every day and reply to readers [send heartfelt] If it needs to be improved, I personally think the author can improve the quality of the book from the perspective of supporting characters.

The beginning feels a bit similar to the one in 🍊, but the later part is quite novel (at least I haven't seen it in 🍅). I think the first plot is average, but the more I read later, the more I like it. Finally, there is a yandere story with different offensive and defensive potential (*σ´∀`)σI hope Su can train Xia Kouya hard (*≧▽≦)

Fat Chang Hao Magazine [Giving Heart] can be regarded as one of my favorites [Gifting Heart] The knives are also very beautiful, it reminds me of the feeling I had when watching Lin Niannian [Crying] It makes my heart feel a little uncomfortable when I think of these knives, I feel a sense of powerlessness and it makes me happy [Adoration] (Maybe... Should... Maybe it has the attribute of adoration? [Thinking]) There are not many books that feel like this. After they are finished, I have no choice but to read [Crying][Crying][Crying]

It's a very good yandere novel that made me roll on the bed [covering my face]. When compared horizontally with the Orange book, there are really many aspects that can match or even surpass it. The only shortcoming is the lack of description of the supporting characters. It can be seen that the author has a very exciting plot outline, and there needs to be a more detailed supporting character to highlight the protagonist's image and promote the development of the plot. I feel like the author is always stuck. Is it because there are no available characters to advance the story? But it doesn't hurt. After all, readers only need to read the book, and the author has much to think about. In short, the author must be a tonic for tj. Such a beautiful article must be completed [crying] This book will definitely get a 9.5 In my mind, it just lacks a chance to become popular. Come on, author, I like you [shy] It took me a few days to catch up on the updates, and it's definitely worth a look. Hardly toxic (to me). If you are still hesitating, start reading now. If a book is not good enough, you have to give it a try yourself.

Good looking meow! The first few chapters borrowed a little bit from the two books Xiaocheng and Nian Nian, but then I slowly made my own way and there was basically no similarity with those two books. It can be said to be great. The author's writing is also very strong. He did not forget the setting and psychological description of the protagonist when it was sweet. Dao It's indeed easy to get an impression. If you don't like the yandere setting, you can just treat it as a daily change. In my guess, the system setting is a bit like the mastermind behind the scenes or the original protagonist of the previous life. I don't dislike this setting. The heroine He doesn't rely too much on his ability to retrace his own death to complete his revenge, and his IQ is very high. At present, it seems that the protagonist does not use yandere to achieve his own goals, but seems to show all of himself to the heroine. Great writing and a sense of redemption, overall. After testing, it can be said that it is a masterpiece of Lily Yandere. I hope it can be written down. I feel that the author really wants to write it down. Finally, I hope that the author and teacher will also pay attention to his physical condition. I have been stupid and rebellious several times, and then I just come on, and when will I counterattack! No more high attack and low defense!

I have read a lot of yandere novels, and I feel that this one is among the best. This book answers my long-standing doubts, that is, if the stress-resistant heroine is stronger, can she suppress the yandere heroine who still has rationality? After all, I think if a yandere truly loves you, why should you rely on escape to force her to change? Isn't it better to directly use this affection to put pressure on her and force her to change? Both heroines have high IQs and EQs. Even if they are yanderes, even if they are pushed by the system, their kind nature should not be forgotten. This kind of rational restraint in plot catharsis makes this article a well-deserved sweet article on the theme of yanderes. No matter what twists and turns occur between the two heroines, you can believe that the love between them will last forever.

All works that understand what a true yandere is are worthy of a five star! ! ! Different from other similar novels, this 680,000-word book only mainly describes four characters: Su Moqin, Xia Ying, System, Ying, and Yingqin. The emotional lines are handled well. The plot is compact, the pace is a little fast, and the logic does not have too many loopholes. The only drawback... Maybe it is a little embarrassing? Some of the lyrical descriptions are a bit too straightforward, such as She is the light in life and I could have endured the darkness if I had never seen the light, etc... It is a bit too straightforward and repeated too much. It is a bit embarrassing for those who know how to express feelings. I think that at the climax of expressing emotions, I should use a more roundabout way of expression and narration and not repeat the same elements too much. It is a bit boring for those who know how to express my feelings. What surprises me is the reversal of the system. I have never been interested in this byd. I think her death should be the best ending. After all, after torturing the two heroines, I personally can't accept it. However, in the last 20 or so pictures, the author spent a lot of pen and ink to describe Qin Ying's feelings and transformation, which will indeed make people change their minds. In the early stage of the system, I personally think it is a bit flat. However, as the plot develops, the character becomes fuller. In terms of writing style and rhythm, I feel that the author seems to be a newcomer? (Of course I'm not sure, don't slap me if I'm wrong.) If this book is the author's debut, it would indeed be considered good to portray the characters to this extent.

To briefly evaluate the narrative of this book, it is quite good. It is considered excellent among online articles. However, since there are too many books on this subject, there is inevitably some homogeneity. I hope the author can continue to develop his own style. I can look forward to the future.

(Spoiler alert ) So red, so good-looking But wasn't Su Moqin trying to find the murderer behind Xia Ying's control? Although it seemed that Xia Ying planned it herself, what if the system had ulterior motives? [Thinking][Thinking] Moreover, their relationship has heated up, so Xia Ying's mysterious power needs to be explained. Of course, it is also possible that Su Moqin will not force Xia Ying to tell her, but she may tell her near the finale. The following plot may be that Xia Ying helps Su Moqin complete her revenge through the system. Of course, it is also possible that the system is broken and the two female protagonists are fighting against the system. Of course, I prefer that the system has its own purpose, because the system itself often deceived Xia Ying through illusions in the past. The following plot will probably go like this (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* All in all, the author did a great job. If you want to see Su Moqin being counterattacked, you can check out the extra plot at Station B. I'm also looking forward to the author's follow-up plot. Come on [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] It looks good and the ending is hehe. All the pits dug before have been filled in. It is a relatively unique Lily novel. I saw the comments I wrote before and look forward to counterattack. It seems that only the system's Ying is counterattack. After living a happy life, I must buckle Su Moqin hard. It was so bad in the early stage, so I must buckle hard [punch out] [punch out]

The plot is still the same old system task of playing a yandere, but the pitfalls and emotional aspects are handled very well. The yandere is a real yandere, and the feelings are real feelings. There is redemption and hurt. The concept of love is well established. Pathological love is not acceptable after all, and two-way running is what makes people yearn for it. The ending is average. It is really not easy to conceive of temporarily giving him to the system. Still pretty good for the whole day.

Highly productive and easy to explode! ! ! I would be sorry if I didn't give it five stars. Let's just say, so far, in my heart, it's actually prettier than Xiao Cheng, Yu Xi and Nian Nian (●°u°●) "

The best writing style of the same type, whether it is the foreshadowing or the design of the plot, I never comment on the novel, but the author is really good, and there are many small settings that make people feel comfortable. For example, there is no fixed number for the strategy value, and the backtracking can take a long time if you go back for an hour. The original setting of the protagonist is not surprising. Wu, I have always been myself, and the settings are slowly revealed. There is no such thing as a panel. That kind of thing is told to you all at once, which really affects the perception. The plot is of course very smooth. The outline and framework are definitely well established. The emotions of the characters are very delicate. I have never written a book review before and I have read it for so long. It is very good.

It's a fairy tale. I read two hundred chapters in one day. It's the first time I've read a Lily novel after Never Love Peach. I can only say that the writing is incomparable. In some places, I always worry about Hajisha being exposed, but the fairy heroine is really tolerant and smart enough to see through her acting skills. , The logic is quite harmonious. The emotional line of the old man has always been clearly around Sister Qin. This kind of insecure yandere is simply a fairy. I am so moved that I want to give all my pension to the author [crying]. Author, I am willing to call you the leader of Lily.

It was so beautiful. Men were menstruating and women were going crazy. It was the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It was so good that the five-guaranteed household in the village missed and loved the widow. It was so good that tears flowed from the corners of the mouth and flooded the Qiantang River. It was so beautiful. It was God who was my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran away, jumped hard, and danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I couldn't stop crying. [Laughing evilly] [Review] Huh? Yunduo☁️😄, da↘da↗da↘da↗da↘, I really want to play Genshin Impact😨, clouds☁️Genshin Impact😙, dang dang dang dang 😊, watch the wonderful things 👍🎊😆, Yun☁️Genshin Impact😄, woo woo woo hoo, I really want to play Genshin Impact😭😭😭Yun☁️Genshin Impact, my friends are here😊😃😆, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun☁️Genshin Impact! Ahhhhhhhhh😙, I really want to play Genshin Impact😙Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, hahahahaha🤣🤣🤣, play Genshin Impact together, Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, think about it, 🤩I want to play Genshin Impact😋Web cloud, low power consumption and no distortion😌, WiFi network cable 🥰, all can be 60 frames 😍, come, come, come 👏, enter the cloud ☁️Original God This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong, If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. However, he was tempted by foreign persimmons on the way and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma got angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta Map with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Generation of Flame Emperor. The road to Shu is difficult and dangerous 😨 How to transport grain and grass 🤔 The Northern Expedition is a waste of national power 😔 It is better to imitate Soochow 🤓 There is only one person left among the Five Tigers 😭 Who dares to be the pioneer of the Northern Expedition 🤔 Why not 😡 Since we have inherited the legacy of the late emperor 😏 How can we be stuck in the situation 😡 Uh-huh~ Ha! ! 😡😡Me! ! 😡Wei Yan😡Only advance, never retreat! ! ! 😡😡If Wei Kou takes one hundred thousand Yan to annihilate his lord 😡👊 and lets Cao Cao's thieves invade the world 👊👊👊😡 Yan can also refuse to retreat with all his strength to defeat the enemy 👊 😡😡: Your Majesty! 🤓 👋😡 😡: Why did you break the Ultra Key? 🤓: It doesn't matter if the key is broken, do you think it's still an Astra? 🤓👉⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️😱 😱→😈 😡: Your Majesty, why did you turn Astra into a Babar star? The old top duel field is difficult and dangerous, how can ANBU get to the top? It is better to imitate youth than to waste gold coins with clever tricks. There is only one person left in Da Yin, who dares to be a mad dog and bite him? Why not! Since I have inherited the legacy of Quan Nai, how can I be trapped and unable to move forward? I, Ma Ban, can only advance but not retreat! ! ! If 3000 defeat the three Yin people in a round, Madara will be the one to wipe them all out for the Lord. Even if the underworld brings the Black Zetsu to attack, Madara can also fight with all his strength to refuse to retreat for the Lord to defeat the enemy. Like a fish drinking from water, Komama Madara is here! How dare you!

It looks good in terms of look and feel, and there is no big problem logically. The author also said that the beginning is indeed a bit popular, but the plot after that is quite good. Come on, author, come on, author [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

The emotional tension of the characters is perfectly rendered, and the expressions are good, allowing readers to clearly enter the character's perspective (I even cried once). Moreover, this article is different from the other articles I have read. The title of this article says that they are under the control of being reduced to a yandere, but in fact they are all under each other's control. Although the protagonist here is sick, her beauty is extraordinary. All in all, I like and recommend this book very much 👍

After reading it, I felt deeply and it is very worth watching. The description of the yandere is very profound, and the grasp of emotions is very precise. But there are still some poisonous points, and the logic is confusing, such as the transition from student to company controller, the time machine that spans time and space, and Ying's resurrection. It is too blunt and cannot withstand deep thought, and because a certain rationality is abandoned for the sake of the plot, the description is a bit stiff, and some parts are a bit like a composition. It is not... But... There are too many sentence patterns. Moreover, some of the climaxes are not fully exciting, the ending is a bit stiff, and the logic completely breaks down, but there is really no better way to write he. In fact, it can be seen that many parts are borrowed from Xiao Mo's book, which is understandable, and Xiao Mo's book pays more attention to pressure, while this book takes yandere to a higher level, but the logic and except for the emotional description, other descriptions are stiff and unnatural, and many parts sacrifice a lot of rationality for the plot. All in all, it is worth reading. I wish the author good luck and write the most satisfying work. "Excellent work of inferior quality"

I found a book today and spent the whole night reading it. It's so good. The climax of the film intersects with the foreshadowing, the depressing atmosphere is simply invincible, the daily moments of relaxation are also written just right, the plot is perfectly arranged, the tension and collapse of the emotional line are written with full tension, and the characters are also smoothed. I am really at my wits end, I enjoyed watching it. The systematic part of the sub-part is very quiet. After knowing Qin Ying's past, this chapter is the finishing touch and grasped very well. The feeling of obsession, the feeling of pain, and the feeling of change are all beautifully written and can really grab people's hearts. The sudden calmness and profound changes after experiencing the previous story made me cry and choke, and I burst out my little pearls more than once. I really think this book is so good, thank you to the author for bringing us this crazy yet gentle story.

The wife, the wife, the wife, the wife is so naked. The part in the hospital was so comfortable. It made me stand still. Qin 1. The black-faced stuff is so cute. Su Muqin, you must cosplay with Xia Ying! (Dare you suddenly update 100 chapters? It scares me to death [laughs][laughs]

The general feeling is pretty good, but there are some problems in some places, such as the setting problem. The heroine could clearly cook the dishes that Yao Qin likes to eat before, but later in the plot, the heroine made dark food, or the first few dozen before the love line, gave me a feeling of a pair of invisible big hands pushing the love line. For example, I don't know why, this sentence appears more frequently, so I hope that the above can be improved to avoid the above situations, and I hope to do better. However, the system settings are still quite novel. Oh, by the way, there is also the issue of chapter order [laughing evilly]

I caught up with the big army [crying] It is really well written, the literary talent is very good, the emotions are full of emotions, and the emotional lines are also very delicate. It is really unique compared with other works. In fact, I'm quite worried that this book will never be finished (after all, it's so unique and the author is very careful, I don't think it should have this ending). The popularity is a bit too low (maybe because the system in the front is quite annoying and the protagonist is a bit cruel, although the pitfalls are filled in later, But people who abandon the book halfway through the book will not come back, the environment is like this [crying]) When I read it myself, I only felt the sadness of "someone come and save Xia", but rarely the joy of "finally being together" (purely a personal opinion) I don't know if I can help the author. When I saw the hasty ending, I really felt my heart drop. Fortunately, the author decided to finish it. I really admire the author. Now that the knife is done, it's time for the candy [cool]. I hope the author can believe in himself and stay enthusiastic, but don't be too tired. It's really scary to see the author working five or six times a day (it's really tiring and it kills enthusiasm when the grades are not good). I hope Xia and Su can have a HE. I also wish the author can write a book that satisfies him and achieve the results he wants. Come on. (This is the first time I write a review after ten years of reading. If it makes the author feel bad, just pretend that I haven't read it.)

The author is really orange, this article is really delicious, sweet but not too sweet, there is a knife in it, it is very good, and the various descriptions of the two people in the middle are very good, the writing style cannot be said [like], I just finished reading ZS where the heroine takes sleeping pills, I will read it again next weekend

It's very, very beautiful, and the emotions are very delicate. It made me cry and said yes. But there is a slight problem with the logic. It is a bit far-fetched to leave in the next hundred chapters. Why can't the two of them go for revenge together? It's okay to bring Xia Ying with her for company matters. Even if she can't help, she can be put aside as a mascot. And she doesn't have to worry about being involved in an accident, as her death is guaranteed to be retrospective. Moreover, Su's brain is not the type that is not easy to use, so he should not be able to think of anything. When I was in serious trouble, my partner was afraid that I would hurt myself in an accident, so he didn't dare to leave me alone for a long time. I think if you really care about someone, you won't choose to push them away. Woohoo, I want to read sweet stories. Ernest, they can do anything.

Very nice, although the beginning is a bit routine. The more I watch, the more addictive I become. But the content written later is still very exciting, and I always feel that in the 60 or so pictures I saw, Xia Ying did more harm to herself than the heroine. This kind of self-satisfying sacrifice makes it strange to watch.

Author Jiang, the writing is great, it is really beautiful. I think your book will be popular. The highlight of your book is that you are so good at setting off the environment and describing the characters, which gives me a heart-pounding feeling. At the same time, I also hope that you can persevere and catch up with your neighbor... I will always support you. [Please update] [Almost crying] [Laughing evilly] [Learned] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss] @kon Author Jiang, I'm going to follow you. Can you open a fan group? You have to keep paying attention to your fans... Hehe [laughing] I want to be your first die-hard fan and old fan.

This yandere has a lot of energy and can guess what the audience wants to see every time. I really enjoy watching it. The pace is tight and the writing is good. Including the identity of that system, I really didn't expect it (I won't spoil it) Although the first few chapters were a bit cliche, once they were over, they entered a very, very thunderous and beautiful state [Adoration] All in all, it looks like an invincible Thunder Bull B [laughs][eating melon]

It's very interesting. I borrowed small parts from Cheng Zi's and Lin Niannian's books. Although the update is a bit slow, it's still very interesting. Keep up the good work! [Adoration][Adoration]

As soon as he saw the part about Little Dark Room, he asked me to write a book review. The characters are well-rounded outside of class, and their emotions are also very good. Just because it's a little depressing, I'll give it five stars. There are relatively few words, which should be the only drawback.