Weave Your Cage With Death

How can I put it... The character description of the characters is pretty good, especially the heroine, well... It can be seen that the author is very loyal, and the writing style is very similar to that book, but I think the heroine is a bit crazier than that one... And it's kind of scary... Using the system's props to talk in the protagonist's ear... (Any further words will be spoilers) Hmm... I quite like this part ~ Anyway, come on, author, don't stop, don't stop, don't stop, say important things three times! If you continue to write like this, it will become moderately high even if it is not popular... (Subjectively, for reference only)

I bought it. The author wrote the book very carefully and there are many pictures! It's really good to use AI to paint. Xia Ying and Su Muchin's portrayal is good, not as completely morbid and high-pressure as Nian Nian Yanke, and sometimes the smell of Xiao Cheng from the past can be seen in the protagonist. All in all, it's delicious! Xia Ying: Inheriting the will of my predecessor (Xiaocheng Niannian), I can't lose [angry]

The beginning feels a bit similar to the one in 🍊, but the later part is quite novel (at least I haven't seen it in 🍅). I think the first plot is average, but the more I read later, the more I like it. Finally, there is a yandere story with different offensive and defensive potential (*σ´∀`)σI hope Su can train Xia Kouya hard (*≧▽≦)

Eat lavishly, rare fine chaff The plot is non-routine, the transitions are natural and smooth, and the climax of the conflict is very tense. The emotional descriptions of the characters are delicate. If you want to compare (in my personal opinion), the two protagonists are better written than Xiao Cheng's book. The author's writing style is quite good, and occasionally one or two sentences make people's eyes shine. The author usually responds frequently in the comment area and updates quickly. I hope the author will take care of his health. After all, it is very tiring to update every day and reply to readers [send heartfelt] If it needs to be improved, I personally think the author can improve the quality of the book from the perspective of supporting characters.

Fat Chang Hao Magazine [Giving Heart] can be regarded as one of my favorites [Gifting Heart] The knives are also very beautiful, it reminds me of the feeling I had when watching Lin Niannian [Crying] It makes my heart feel a little uncomfortable when I think of these knives, I feel a sense of powerlessness and it makes me happy [Adoration] (Maybe... Should... Maybe it has the attribute of adoration? [Thinking]) There are not many books that feel like this. After they are finished, I have no choice but to read [Crying][Crying][Crying]

It's a very good yandere novel that made me roll on the bed [covering my face]. When compared horizontally with the Orange book, there are really many aspects that can match or even surpass it. The only shortcoming is the lack of description of the supporting characters. It can be seen that the author has a very exciting plot outline, and there needs to be a more detailed supporting character to highlight the protagonist's image and promote the development of the plot. I feel like the author is always stuck. Is it because there are no available characters to advance the story? But it doesn't hurt. After all, readers only need to read the book, and the author has much to think about. In short, the author must be a tonic for tj. Such a beautiful article must be completed [crying] This book will definitely get a 9.5 In my mind, it just lacks a chance to become popular. Come on, author, I like you [shy] It took me a few days to catch up on the updates, and it's definitely worth a look. Hardly toxic (to me). If you are still hesitating, start reading now. If a book is not good enough, you have to give it a try yourself.

Good looking meow! The first few chapters borrowed a little bit from the two books Xiaocheng and Nian Nian, but then I slowly made my own way and there was basically no similarity with those two books. It can be said to be great. The author's writing is also very strong. He did not forget the setting and psychological description of the protagonist when it was sweet. Dao It's indeed easy to get an impression. If you don't like the yandere setting, you can just treat it as a daily change. In my guess, the system setting is a bit like the mastermind behind the scenes or the original protagonist of the previous life. I don't dislike this setting. The heroine He doesn't rely too much on his ability to retrace his own death to complete his revenge, and his IQ is very high. At present, it seems that the protagonist does not use yandere to achieve his own goals, but seems to show all of himself to the heroine. Great writing and a sense of redemption, overall. After testing, it can be said that it is a masterpiece of Lily Yandere. I hope it can be written down. I feel that the author really wants to write it down. Finally, I hope that the author and teacher will also pay attention to his physical condition. I have been stupid and rebellious several times, and then I just come on, and when will I counterattack! No more high attack and low defense!

I have read a lot of yandere novels, and I feel that this one is among the best. This book answers my long-standing doubts, that is, if the stress-resistant heroine is stronger, can she suppress the yandere heroine who still has rationality? After all, I think if a yandere truly loves you, why should you rely on escape to force her to change? Isn't it better to directly use this affection to put pressure on her and force her to change? Both heroines have high IQs and EQs. Even if they are yanderes, even if they are pushed by the system, their kind nature should not be forgotten. This kind of rational restraint in plot catharsis makes this article a well-deserved sweet article on the theme of yanderes. No matter what twists and turns occur between the two heroines, you can believe that the love between them will last forever.

All works that understand what a true yandere is are worthy of a five star! ! ! Different from other similar novels, this 680,000-word book only mainly describes four characters: Su Moqin, Xia Ying, System, Ying, and Yingqin. The emotional lines are handled well. The plot is compact, the pace is a little fast, and the logic does not have too many loopholes. The only drawback... Maybe it is a little embarrassing? Some of the lyrical descriptions are a bit too straightforward, such as She is the light in life and I could have endured the darkness if I had never seen the light, etc... It is a bit too straightforward and repeated too much. It is a bit embarrassing for those who know how to express feelings. I think that at the climax of expressing emotions, I should use a more roundabout way of expression and narration and not repeat the same elements too much. It is a bit boring for those who know how to express my feelings. What surprises me is the reversal of the system. I have never been interested in this byd. I think her death should be the best ending. After all, after torturing the two heroines, I personally can't accept it. However, in the last 20 or so pictures, the author spent a lot of pen and ink to describe Qin Ying's feelings and transformation, which will indeed make people change their minds. In the early stage of the system, I personally think it is a bit flat. However, as the plot develops, the character becomes fuller. In terms of writing style and rhythm, I feel that the author seems to be a newcomer? (Of course I'm not sure, don't slap me if I'm wrong.) If this book is the author's debut, it would indeed be considered good to portray the characters to this extent.

(Spoiler alert So red, so good-looking But wasn't Su Moqin trying to find the murderer behind Xia Ying's control? Although it seemed that Xia Ying planned it herself, what if the system had ulterior motives? [Thinking][Thinking] Moreover, their relationship has heated up, so Xia Ying's mysterious power needs to be explained. Of course, it is also possible that Su Moqin will not force Xia Ying to tell her, but she may tell her near the finale. The following plot may be that Xia Ying helps Su Moqin complete her revenge through the system. Of course, it is also possible that the system is broken and the two female protagonists are fighting against the system. Of course, I prefer that the system has its own purpose, because the system itself often deceived Xia Ying through illusions in the past. The following plot will probably go like this (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* All in all, the author did a great job. If you want to see Su Moqin being counterattacked, you can check out the extra plot at Station B. I'm also looking forward to the author's follow-up plot. Come on [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] It looks good and the ending is hehe. All the pits dug before have been filled in. It is a relatively unique Lily novel. I saw the comments I wrote before and look forward to counterattack. It seems that only the system's Ying is counterattack. After living a happy life, I must buckle Su Moqin hard. It was so bad in the early stage, so I must buckle hard [punch out] [punch out]