Simulation*******

The plot is at a watchable level, not bad but not excellent, and the characters are well established. The writing is good. I took a quick look at the plot and stared at the various small settings, foreshadowing, narration, and philosophy. It was quite interesting.

Let me give you a good review first. The scoring mechanism of Yang Persimmon is somewhat special. If there are too few reviewers, even if the reviews are positive, the book will only get a score of five or six. When the number of people rating increases, the rating will return to normal. So, please give me a thumbs up~ This is really important to me!

It's a pretty good fanfic, and it's considered good in the field of simulators. The author's writing is very rigorous, and it can be seen that he has carefully studied the game content and text. The author has his own research in this area (I feel like the author and I both play Beng Heming, and I like the characters and have a very good sense of the plot. For example, I basically like all the simulations. My friend and I have very different opinions on the new plot of Mingchao.) Finally, I wish the author good results with this book and don't run away halfway (I have seen several favorite books run away [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying])

The content is reasonable, the character creation is substantial, and it is exciting and interesting. However, the current simulation is too path-dependent. Although the heroine of each simulation is different, the core is repeated. The author is too limited to writing the protagonist to death at the end. As the B grid rises and the power increases, it is foreseeable that the protagonist will simulate each time. The simulated fateful death is becoming more and more sloppy and difficult. My suggestion is to directly connect the simulation with the current story, such as using memory return or two bodies to become one, because instead of writing the protagonist to death with the death of the star god, it is better to directly and seamlessly connect the story, and finally create the feeling of all the bodies being unified. Of course this is just my suggestion. The author's current ideas are also good [Thinking]

Five-star praise, the writing is good, the author is very detailed, I have researched a lot of information, and it is quite exciting so far. However, the description of combat may need to be studied a bit, and the writing should be as graphic and huge as possible. What I didn't expect was that Kyoryu would become a yandere dragon girl. Tsk, it has to be you, the author. As for the emotional line, Huang Quan and Ruan Mei feel a bit hasty, or the feeling of love is not written. The best is Jingliu, followed by Black Tower. Of the simulation novels I have read so far, I feel that that one is the best one. It basically has the battle scenes, relationship progression, conflicts and disputes, middle school boy, and writing styles that I want, although that one is probably based on the main plot. In short, the future is promising and the author still needs to practice.

The writing is okay, but it seems that you have the idea of ​​​​writing about Lily. Is there a hint in Chapter 167? Probably? (I hope there won't be lilies) (ノдヽ) If I really have an idea, then I can only run away ==＞ ﾍ( ´Д`)ﾉ

Yes, I want to read Mockingbird and Ka Ma, but I haven't seen many books with Ka Ma as the heroine [crying] @

Himeko also accepts [laughs] [laughs] [laughs] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration], I want to see Himeko [smile] [smile], Kafka @ Inazuma Fox Fairy Palace Secretary

@ The author, Aglaiya, Feng Jin, Saifeier, Kerudra, Fu Xuan, Liu Ying, do you accept the robin? [Top post]

Before Chapter 13, I felt very good about it, and at least I had the desire to read on. Unlike other articles, there is no logic at all. Maybe it is because I can't stand the simulator. After seeing the system, I unconsciously felt that the rating of this book dropped a bit, but overall it is still good. Maybe I've read too much of Bengtie's short stories. Now when I read Bengtie's stories, I prefer reading them at a slower pace. I don't know if other people feel the same way.

The logic is smooth, and relevant information has been carefully consulted for the setting. The evaluation and recommendation level is 9.0. There are not enough reviewers now, which may be related to the harem, but after all, everyone has different reading tastes, which is normal [laughing]

Mr. Palace Secretary, can you dress me in women's clothing? [Laughs evilly] Why do I feel like I see so few people? [Aggrieved]

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on. Even when the protagonist is victorious, he is also analyzing the philosophy of life for us, uh, some human emotional issues, for example, he also talks about love and some scientific knowledge.

It's quite good to read. It starts with the history to attract readers' interest in reading. The simulation plot is wonderful. It's worth watching. The last thing I want to say is that the author is a fictional historian at first glance.

Come on, the author is very detailed

A very good book

If you have children, you can come in if you don't mind.

Strange, why so few people watch it?

Look great, I hope the heroine will add another cat

I almost forgot about the five-star author, cheers [blowing kiss]

Not bad, I hope I can stick to it The author has a wealth of game background reserves and will provide supplementary explanations after each previous chapter, which can help those who have not seen much of the background story review and understand it.

Okay, it can be seen that the author knows the copywriting and background story very well

The author writes very seriously, and I can see the hard work he put into it.

Finally, there is a fanfic that includes both Ruan Mui and Heita.

Not bad, as long as there are no mistakes later, there is no problem with 9 points. I have seen a hundred pictures so far, and I visually judge that 9.3 Is about the same level.

It's beautiful. Please update it soon. The Amber King's big hand is working hard and the purest breeding path can no longer be seen [laughing]

I have read so many fanfics, and this one is considered a relatively good one. The author's writing is very good, and the plot is very good. Except for the fact that he was stabbed in the back by Lao Mi for plot reasons, the ending written by the author is also very good.

The plot is not bad, although the description of the emotional line in the simulation is rather sloppy, but you update three chapters a day, and you are a great good person.

The author's writing style is quite good, and the heroine actually has Ruan Mei. It is recommended to add robins and butterflies [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses]

Give it four stars first, maybe there will be a lily, then see if there is a lily, and then just run away and give it one star @