Five Ghost Tree Family

Okay, I feel that you want to write about the true cultivator of immortality, but the title of the book is "Should the Five Ghost Family give the protagonist more descendants?" There are too few people, and the protagonist seems to be scheming and scheming at the beginning, but later on it seems like he has changed. You use too many emotional words, which makes it seem bloated and the logic is a bit messy. But since you are a novice, this is already a very good work, much better than those casual essays. I feel that you have put in a lot of effort to complete this work. Your efforts and writing style are worthy of praise. Now it's just about seeing if you can stick to it, and you will get better and better in the future [Like] Come on [like]

I just read Chapter 20. Everyone in the 5-ghost family is dead. Is it possible that the protagonist will be reborn?

Come on, hope, there is a little climax, build up the family, don't always abuse the master in Tomato, Mortals will encounter all kinds of hardships when cultivating immortality. This is an advantage. I have long been tired of watching the cheating. There are too many hardships and not enough fun, which will make other readers dislike it. But it doesn't matter. Cultivating immortality is not difficult. How can you reflect the power of cultivating immortality? Looking at other articles on cultivating immortals, the advantages of cultivating immortals are not reflected at all. There is nothing but strength. Lifespan and longevity are not reflected at all. I hope the author can write about the difficulties of ordinary people cultivating immortality, and also the length of cultivation. Taking the protagonist's family as an example, the protagonist has practiced Qi for sixty or seventy years. After all, he has no resources and no backing.

A very good book. The three golden chapters are well written. But let me tell you something else. Some people say that reality is not what they want and they want to read some cool articles. I am unhappy here to read it, but it has nothing to do with reality. The first point is that when I got angry, I ran away and told them that I took the Qi realm and went outside to seek opportunities for breakthrough. When I didn't have real strength, I didn't have a thousand-day guard against thieves. As a result, the protagonist, my mother, just lay down in the coffin and pretended to be dead, and let people press her to death. It's not that the protagonist had died a few times earlier. It really made me laugh. Second, the two strong men were almost beaten to death in this case. If you don't run quickly, one of them will leave the other one and tell me to go east or that way. Of course, I will go to the inhabited areas. If you think you have gone far enough, you can follow this direction. When the time comes, you can come to me. Even if you die halfway, you can die in an uninhabited place. No one knows that you are dead. This is also a shock. Take dry food and water, run farther away, and leave a message. Let his brother tell me who will beat me to death. My brother may come back to beat one of your family members to death. You can't run away if you can't beat him. You are so bullied at work now. Why do you still have revenge or something? Why do you still have a fat beating outside the factory with the squad leader? It's not that reality is not as good as expected. I want to read some cool articles. It's about tolerance. You can tolerate tolerance. There is a limit to tolerance. You have to have brains. Well, you just don't run away. Follow the villagers from the village to beat up the two strong men in your family. Does he dare to fight you to the death? You two just carry each other and go everywhere with a knife. How dare you fuck you? They don't have children at home. You have children at home. Who broke your son's leg? He won't take revenge if he goes out in the dark at night. If no one sees you, it's not your doing. Okay, now someone is going to be stubborn again. Rural people don't understand these things. How come these two sons who are playing dirty tricks in front of him are so sneaky?

Do you feel it? In the future, when this book has 500 chapters, when you are reading it after a book shortage, you will definitely feel like you have just met it too late! But now at chapter 65, for me, it's too early to meet! There are only 65 chapters, which is not enough to read. When will it reach 500 chapters? Only when you lick this book greedily will you be satisfied! Only 5.9 Points? ! Have you ever played CS? It feels like the unlucky feeling of a master being shot in the head randomly by a rookie as soon as he shows up! 5 Star praise! Offer it with both hands!

I think it's okay, but there's really no need to be so mean-spirited in a village. Besides, when you write a sadistic article on Tomato, you're pretty ruthless, buddy!

The setting and world view are very novel, the system of cultivating immortals is different, and the writing of the family of cultivating immortals is also different from the ordinary family cultivating immortals. This can be said to be five stars. The content is a bit sadistic, and a bit deliberately sadistic. There is nothing wrong with the plot content, but some are not explained clearly, which may be clues and foreshadowings left by the author.

The author was recommended on the website, let's have a blast, it's great and I love reading it

If you decide whether to start a family or not, just change your last name to Wugui. It sounds good.

The writing is exquisite, and there is nothing to say about the details. I just feel like I jumped over some details just looking at them. Maybe I read too quickly and didn't understand them carefully. The rating is too low now and should be about 9.0. Come on, author [Thinking]

The writing is really good, it could be a little darker, it could be like a god.

This novel is very good. Nowadays, the immortal cultivating family all revolves around the protagonist. The protagonist grows up quickly and helps the elders to be humble to the younger ones. This kind of concession of resources, how can we see the scenery of immortality without fighting for it? , This novel, everyone in the family is very unique and realistic

The subject matter is good and very special. It's just that the Five Ghost Tree didn't appear much. I thought it was a behind-the-scenes, group portrait. So far it looks pretty good, just a bit abusive. I hope that the more cruel I am now, the more cruel I will be later.

The content is okay and relatively compact, but there are still some minor problems in the details. Sometimes I make typos and get the relationships between characters wrong, but I can barely read it. It's pretty good. Except for the carelessness in some small details, everything else is pretty good. It's just that I saw it too early. I should have found it later. And why is the rating so low? Although there is a slight problem, it has at least an 8.8 Score, and the author updates it steadily 2-3 times a day, which is completely enough.

It's fine except for being a little depressing

Not bad, but the start is a bit weird

Five ghosts build immortality, be forbearing, and kill decisively

After searching for a long time on Tomato🍅, I finally found a good book [Like]

Well organized and better than 80% of Tomato books

The description of the masterpiece is very good, making life feel like it

Very nice, highly recommended

It felt good when I first started watching it To be honest, those who can persist in reading are not ordinary people. To be honest, it can isolate many people. The writing is too cumbersome. In this period, there are too many concise short articles like yours. You write so many adjectives, which may stop many people. The author can take a good look at it and write more concisely.

I think the writing is good, keep up the good work

Not bad, well written

Be unique, okay?

There is nothing to say about this writing style

Not bad. Pretty good

Beautiful, so beautiful

I just like to see this kind of character-savvy ones. There is a bug in the fight against Chen Yi. It is unreasonable that the five senses are amplified and cannot be controlled by oneself. Moreover, the distraction affects the weapon but should not affect the aura and body protection. Why not write how to break the porcelain piece to pass through the body aura? It just hits the main body directly. There is no description of how to break the body protection aura. The key ability of aura body protection is sometimes absent. The first one written by the opponent is a bit too weak.

This book is imitating the writing style of Tomb Raider Notes.