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Nowadays, Newcomers Are Getting Better and Better at Writing Books.
There Is a Shortage of Books and My Eyesight Is Too High. I Can Only Rely on These Few Books to Survive.
There is a shortage of books and my eyesight is too high. I can only rely on these few books to survive.
These Should Be the Ceiling of Fan Fiction.
Book Recommend Human Eternity: Conquest of the Starry Sky
Book Famine Catastrophe! ! ! ! Save Me! ! ! ! Foster Father! ! ! !
America and fear are always accompanied by the Holy Spirit. You can try reading this book. I feel pretty good about it.
I'm Looking for Funny Writing, Not the Kind Where All the Laughs Are Based on Jokes.
It needs to have a funny plot like the Demon-Suppressing Division.
Top-Notch Books, 🍅Masterpieces (Don't Recommend Alien Beasts to Kill Gods), I Have Tried Them All
Seriously Tired of Books! ! Are There Any Good Books That Make People's Eyes Light Up? Asking for Books!
I want to read a book similar to "The Age of Discovery".
9.9 High Score the Most Popular Novel in 2026🌺🌺
I want to watch content similar to "70 Space: A Girl Who Traveled Through Time and Was Reborn as a Mother". This type of subject matter
Anime Fanfics Rated 9 or Above
Fine Chaff! Fine Chaff! Fine Chaff! , the Best Book I Have Found so Far
I want to watch something like "In my old age, the beautiful witch uses me as a furnace!" Book.
I Have No Desire to Read Recently (‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧Please Recommend Good Books
New System Novels, Now the Novels Are All Copy and Paste
Multiple Female Protagonists, the Plot Should Be Novel, Unhealthy Love
I want to read a book like "My Sister Let Me Be the Emperor".
Looking for the Most Popular Fan Fiction at the Moment
Brothers, I am currently short of books, so I would like to ask you to take out the books in your library, Kangkang.
Enter the Single Heroine, Stay Away from the Harem
As long as there is only one female protagonist, as long as there is only one female protagonist, as long as there is only one female protagonist, say the important things three times, don't be ambiguous, be specific, I'm almost sick of reading harem stories these days
Fun! I Need Fun! the Ultimate Happy Person
I want to read a book similar to "I am Liyue Immortal, and I will never cheat or kidnap".
It's an Eye-Catching Type and Won't Make You Feel Bored.
It's Time to Start Digging for Gold Again. Let's Get Something Non-Toxic, Non-Robust and Non-Romantic.
Novices Enter the Advanced Book Desert Area by Mistake
Please give me books
I'm Convinced, Stop Pushing God of Death and Ga Li
I want to be begged by the Internet. If there are good books, I will recommend them (please write less, please don't disturb me!)
A Magical Book, Easily Addictive. There's No Ending Unless It's Really Exciting ٩(
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Nice! Use simple language to write sincere feelings! It describes the mediocrity of "mortals" and the brilliance of genius! The writing is exquisite! In the turbulent flow of time, in the passage of more than 900 years, the departure of the old friend and the changes around him wrote the protagonist's regret and nostalgia! "Freedom is the best gift you can give it, just like you and me, just come and see it often" Life has its own choice! And freedom is the power of choice! The protagonist and the system respect other people's ideas! Just like when faced with whether the "black tower" should exist in a small dark room! The protagonist respects the choice of the "Black Tower". And the "Black Tower" is also an important help to the protagonist! The recycling of the foreshadowing later is also perfect. Although there are some shortcomings in it, it doesn't matter! This book is already at the top of the Black Tower fanfics!
Yes, the protagonist is a growth-oriented person, not the kind of idiot who becomes a genius immediately after being given up. The writing is average, and the plot is not empty. At least it makes me interested in continuing to read. I just hope that when the game reaches the main line, the level will not drop rapidly like other fans. It's all over, just two things, writing back and forth, writing back and forth, writing back and forth. The author will do three things now. First, mention the foreshadowing you have buried from time to time to whet your appetite. Second, write about the interaction with the Black Tower. But the problem is that with the current situation, I don't feel anything even if you kiss your mouth to bits. There is nothing new. The third is to engage in abstraction. What about the main plot? I haven't pushed it for a long time, so I insist on being stuck there. There are no new characters, and the writing is getting worse and worse. And I don't know how this method of conquering the heroine through self-sacrifice originated from Tomatoes. It's totally poisonous to me. Yes, the hero saves the beauty is really useful when the relationship between the two parties has not been established, but! After establishing a relationship, who can accept such dedication from the other party with peace of mind? If you want to go further, the two of you must overcome more difficulties together. What has the author cut into the black tower now? I don't even want to say it. Now it is completely resting on its laurels and there is nothing new at all. This also shows that the author has not put his thoughts on this book now. Finally, I wish the author a bright future and a smooth road ahead.
It's so beautiful, why can the characters' emotions be so delicate! The plot is so smooth! Such a distinct personality! The plot is so heartwarming! Tell me, why do I feel like I am watching their lives from the sidelines? Why? Your novel makes me feel a little like reading comics! Answer me! You must update 5 times a day! I just love it! What are you doing with this wind? Don't hit my soul directly! There is also the fact that Ms. Heita is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Heita is extremely smart, Ms. Heita is talented, Ms. Heita has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Heita is extremely intelligent, Ms. Heita is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Heita has a beautiful heart and mouth, Ms. Heita is wise and ingenious, Ms. Heita has both talent and beauty, Ms. Heita is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Heita is naturally beautiful, Ms. Heita has a beautiful country and is fragrant, Ms. Heita has a beautiful face! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! After watching this scene, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, and silently Turn off your phone, get up, open the refrigerator, and take out - Bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, hold it tightly in your hand and walk slowly Go to the window, the scenery outside the window A little dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually Yes, it's raining lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision is blurry I'm confused. I don't know if it's because I'm crying or because it's raining heavily. It could be both. Well, my mood is even more melancholy. I can no longer suppress my inner feelings. I felt so excited, opened the window, and shouted out the window: I am in the front row! ! ! All I can say is that if you don't watch it, you will be sentenced to death. Ms. Heita is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Heita is extremely smart, Ms. Heita is talented, Ms. Heita has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Heita is extremely intelligent, Ms. Heita is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Heita has a beautiful heart and mouth, Ms. Heita is smart and thoughtful, Ms. Heita has both talent and beauty, Ms. Heita is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Heita is naturally beautiful, Ms. Heita is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Heita has a beautiful face! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of the black tower is rare, the beauty of the black tower I am not boasting, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, perfect, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, uncanny craftsmanship, enlightening the deaf and enlightening, candles shining on the world, seeing thousands of miles clearly, rain and dew on the common people, luxuriating in all directions, eagles watching and wolves watching, dragons walking. Tiger steps, majestic appearance, high-rise building, benevolent and moral, suave, selfless, looks like Pan An, more talented than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs begonias, you have it, no one has you, a whole body is upright, two sleeves have breeze, virtue is flowing, innocent heart, high mountain scenery, high sentiments, great virtues, immeasurable merits, good gold and beautiful jade, Mingde only Xin, Huai Jin holding Yu, Hui Xin Wan Zhi, Yuan Tao Celestia, lofty ideals and benevolent people, white cranes in the clouds, magnificence, romantic figures, dragons and phoenix chicks, unparalleled, unparalleled heroes, out of the ordinary, a branch in Guilin, people with cranes singing, one-of-a-kind, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan tablet jade, peerless transcendent black tower lady is unparalleled in the world, black tower lady Extremely smart, Ms. Heita is talented, Ms. Heita has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Heita is extremely smart, Ms. Heita is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Heita has a beautiful heart and beautiful mouth, Ms. Heita has a wise heart and ingenious thinking, Ms. Heita has both talent and appearance, Ms. Heita is like a fish and a goose, Ms. Heita is naturally beautiful, Ms. Heita is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Heita has a beautiful face! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of the Black Tower is rare, the beauty of the Black Tower.
It's not unreasonable for this book to be rated so fast. Personally, I feel that the sword on lifespan is one of the highlights of this article. Even a person who doesn't cry often makes my nose sore when I read it [palms my face]. The writing is also very good, and it deserves the five stars [I learned it]
At first I thought it was another kind of otaku fantasy literature with a female protagonist. I saw that the ratings were good so I clicked in to try it. I didn't expect it. It's really good. There are no diaosi quotes with H accents. There is no ambiguity with the heroine in the beginning that destroys the character. There is no brainless coolness of Long Aotian. The whole article is very comfortable to read [Like] [Like] Good article
You can bring tears to my eyes, the author, you have won. Now I realize that the life, separation and death before me cannot move me, but the passing of time is the scariest thing. The saddest thing is the return of Lan Keren. It is very well written. Show me all. The author must keep writing.
I have been reading Tomato for two years, and I think it is the best among the second novels written by Beng Tie. There is no OOC, not too much nonsense, and there is no weird flirting in single-heroine novels. There are only excellent writing, delicate emotions, and the development of the plot is even more fascinating. Keep up the current writing level, and I will definitely see it to the end!
Nice! Use simple language to write sincere feelings! It describes the mediocrity of "mortals" and the brilliance of genius! The writing is exquisite! In the turbulent flow of time, in the passage of more than 900 years, the departure of the old friend and the changes around him wrote the protagonist's regret and nostalgia! "Freedom is the best gift you can give it, just like you and me, just come and see it often" Life has its own choice! And freedom is the power of choice! The protagonist and the system respect other people's ideas! Just like when faced with whether the "black tower" should exist in a small dark room! The protagonist respects the choice of the "Black Tower". And the "Black Tower" is also an important help to the protagonist! The recycling of the foreshadowing later is also perfect. Although there are some shortcomings in it, it doesn't matter! This book is already at the top of the Black Tower fanfics!
What an exaggerated degree of restoration, none of it is OOC, the rhythm is well grasped, the writing style is not pretentious and elegant, natural and smooth, and the emotional foreshadowing and release are just right. It's surprising that someone can really imitate Sister Tazi's character and tone so closely (it's a fanfic if it's not OOC) Basics), can be regarded as a real fine chaff, and I look forward to the follow-up screws. His dialogue style is really the most difficult to imitate. If it is too wordy, it will collapse, if it is too concise, it will collapse, and if it is disrespectful, it will collapse... What is needed is the right kind of elegance, etiquette and logic, and I look forward to it being used to the fullest [Sending Hearts]
It's good to read, it's really good to read. It's a lot better than the original Genshin Chronicles. The timeline jumps very reasonably and it's not like "x years have passed like this". The main character's relationship is not too unsolvable. It's not a small opening. The relationship line is also good. There is no disgusting plot where you suddenly fall in love with someone else. It's a very good Star Iron fanfic. It's getting more and more confusing later on. It's okay to open it occasionally and use any door dungeon, but you can't open it often. Moreover, you still help others selflessly. You are really a kind person in the universe. You help others for no reason, and they also believe you. Don't you think it's unreasonable? Don't pull that trick. There's nothing you can do about it. Let the protagonist try it. Why, use the entire planet to give you test subjects, right? Which leader with a sound mind would do this? It would be okay if he knew about the genius, but for a backward planet that is not even connected to the star network, it doesn't know about the genius at all, so it feels far-fetched to just believe him. This is the third time I've revised my comment. It's really just a nanny.
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Not bad, no past life memories and no plot breakdowns. The protagonist's system is not a traditional system. The system should be mainly auxiliary. The protagonist improves himself through his own efforts, and Goldfinger is not brainless. The description of the garden is warm and the writing is not bad. It's just too little. If I update more every day, it would be five stars. The author's kindness is not over yet [crying][crying][crying], it's so good, there are 8,000 more words updated today, you must stick to it! [Lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]
It's a very good book, but after the 200th chapter, I feel that the content starts to become a bit younger, and there are a lot of embarrassing things that people can't describe. For example, the vocabulary of "old rookie" or the protagonist's reaction when being teased by the black tower are full of deliberateness, as if they are deliberately trying to create that kind of atmosphere and reaction, making people feel embarrassed and uncomfortable. But overall, it is still a good book that can be read. The author's writing is also very good. I hope you can work hard. The above is just a personal opinion. Thank you to the author.
It's beautiful, and the author's writing style is impeccable. The plot is very good, and the author has mastered Mi You's knife skills [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] It hurts, it hurts too much. But I don't know why in those chapters of time disorder, I feel like something is wrong, but I can't tell what is wrong. Am I a little too picky? [What] [What] [What] [What] Overall, this is a good Bengtie fanfic, at least in the first echelon of fanfics. As far as the current achievements of this book are concerned, it is a well-deserved masterpiece [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] Finally, I wish this book will become more and more popular, and I hope this book will have a good ending.
I have always felt that Heita is a difficult character to write, but he was written very honorably. I hope I can meet the Pumpkin God of War soon hahaha
It's a very good book. There's nothing poisonous about it. It's just that you can't escape the circle of the earth as you write down the ideas. For example, they complain about going to Siberia to dig potatoes. Do they really know? Moreover, the protagonist is still too relaxed. Otherwise, he would have hugged his thighs and begged to be taken away when he saw the Star Dome Railway for the first time [laughing evilly] Of course, this is purely a joke. I think it is a very good book on Tomato. You just praised it and then pulled it off. Can you please stop staring at low-level technology? I understand that you want to pay tribute, but with Bengtie's high technology level, do you have to get the drill yourself? It's impossible not to have technology that can explore underground resources, right? Even if you rub a drill bit and find a rare item, you may be able to automatically find resources. Do you have to choose to move yourself and do it yourself? Moreover, people who break through the sky are rushing to the sky, but it is not appropriate to go underground to break through the sky, right?
My evaluation is that the writing is very good and the characters are consistent. I can only say that it is too good-looking for someone like me who likes the big black tower [laughing evilly] There is no problem and it looks good. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and update it so that the eunuch will not be unfinished.
It's very good. It's the best written in Xingtie. Other fanfics are either uncomfortable with swords like "Learning the Stars and Dreams", or they are dull and boring with stereotyped characters. This book is very good and does not have such shortcomings.
The writing is as delicate as water and captivating. Especially the period when I just came back after more than 900 years, the description is like being immersed in it, without any pressure. I even feel sad because of the passing of two of the staff. This book is different from other books, and it is also different from Shuangwen. It is based on the efforts of the protagonist, climbing up step by step. It can be said that his achievements are inseparable from the help of the system. But personal efforts cannot be abandoned, and the system is designed just right. Only after giving the author the ability at the beginning, it can bubble up appropriately and will not steal the protagonist's role. At the same time, it cannot be ignored. Moreover, the description of the big black tower is really like the character himself, and it closely adheres to the theme of life and does not deviate from its own purpose. "Life is really precious." "Especially the protagonist's treatment of Xiu, Inspired Mushroom, Chizuru, etc. In short, this work is really worth reading. It is different from other iron-breaking and brainless novels. Its writing is powerful. This author is really too strong. I hope the author will be greatly improved to 10.0
It's an excellent fanfic. I don't think the characters are OOC. I fell in love with it after just reading a few chapters. The plot is emotional where it should be, and there is no touching plot at all. You can clearly feel the growth of the male protagonist. After that, characters are born in daily life. The characters in this book are very attractive, such as inspiration mushrooms and paper cranes, as well as the small black tower that appears in the space. Anyway, the stories of these characters are enough to keep you reading. The only shortcoming now is... [Laughs] There are too few... Mushrooms.
It's beautiful! It uses simple language to write down the sincere feelings! It's written It combines the mediocrity of "mortals" with the brilliance of genius! The writing is exquisite! In the turbulence of time, in the passage of more than 900 years The departure of an old friend and the changes around him describe the protagonist's regrets Nostalgia! "Freedom is the best gift you can give it, just like Like you, I would like to come and see it often. Life has its own Choice! And freedom is the power of choice! The protagonist and the system respect More important than other people's thoughts! Just like whether to survive in the face of the "Black Tower" In a small dark room! The protagonist respects the choice of the "Black Tower". And The "Black Tower" is also an important help to the protagonist! And the foreshadowing of the reply later The closing is also perfect. Although there are some shortcomings in it, it doesn't matter Want it! This book is already top-notch among Black Tower fanfics!
It's a good book. There are few novels I've read by Beng Tie that are better than this one. The characters are very vivid, and I don't see any poisonous points. Maybe it's because my tears are low. The description of the protagonist coming back from the turbulent flow of time and space really made me cry. , The style is mainly close to the style of relaxed entertainment. The heroine should be the Little Black Tower and the Big Black Tower. Originally, I read the book with very few chapters and did not have high expectations. It turns out that it is indeed a good book. If I keep writing and there are no poisonous points, I will keep pursuing it.
This is the best writing I have seen on the Black Tower. The Black Tower, Esta, and the Truth Doctor Latio are all so in line with the characters, and they are really very thoughtful. Unlike other articles that have made changes to Black Tower's character in order to smoothly develop the plot, at least so far, Black Tower is really in line with my impression of him. He is a genius, unkind, efficiency-oriented, unwilling to say meaningless words to meaningless people, but he also has his own characteristics. I think this is the original appearance of the Black Tower. It is not arrogance, but the arrogance that comes from genius, the indifference to stupid, boring and worthless things, and the exploration and pursuit of the unknown. This is what a true genius has. At the same time, it is not too indifferent, and there is still something beautiful about Black Tower as a human being. This sense of balance is really - awesome!
This book "The Disguised Genius of the Black Tower Space Station" is a derivative fan work of "Honkai: Star Rail". The protagonist Bai Luan was reborn with golden fingers such as "infinite practice time". In order to get rid of the trouble caused by the halo of genius, he chose to disguise himself with all his strength. This contrast of "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger" is quite interesting. The story follows the game's exploration of the boundary between "genius" and "mediocrity" - the space station staff's blind obedience to genius, the collision of concepts between the Erudite Society and the club, are all reflected in the protagonist's daily interactions. The scene between the protagonist and Ms. Black Tower is a highlight of this article. As a member of the Genius Club, Black Tower seems arrogant and willful, but in fact he is silently concerned about the safety of the space station. The protagonist's trial between disguise and showing strength not only creates a relaxed comedy effect, but also implies the question of "the mediocre people are trapped in themselves, the gods are pure". The style of the full text is daily and brisk, and the refreshing feeling of the system text is well integrated with the game settings. It is suitable for readers who like the daily life of fandom and enjoy anti-routine plots.
It's very beautiful. Needless to say, the author's writing style uses ordinary techniques to depict a heartwarming story of health, sunshine, and positivity. Only this kind of novel is worthy of making me stay up all night to read it! No, I shouldn't have read it now, I should have waited until it was finished, so that I could finish it in one go, instead of looking at the yellow button and being incompetent and furious. But serialization has the joy of serialization, and at least more book friends are more active. Sure enough, the theory of life span is the most powerful. You think so, Master Fu Hua [laughing evilly] The famous mathematician Broja Zaicek proved that 8>50000 Another famous mathematician, the Herrscher of Knowledge, proved that 0=50000 Li Sushang proved that it was not a problem with Taixu Mountain, Grexiu proved that it was not a problem with fusion warriors, Bronya proved that it was not a problem with Herrschers, nor was it a problem with innate development, Topa proved that it was not a problem with CV, and Yuexia proved that it was not a problem with age, so what's going on? It's so hard to guess [laughs evilly]
After reading it, it is well written and has a warm feeling. Although there are some knives, it makes people cry even more afterwards, but I also like the black tower in the space. Can you collect both the big and small black towers? I just treat them as strategists. It feels like a pity. They are all black towers anyway, ^0^gu.
The plot is well written. But the emotional line part seems a bit frustrating to me. Many male protagonists have been written about doing dangerous things for Heita, all for the sake of their future, but there is nothing that Heita would consider doing for the male protagonist? I have experienced almost losing the male protagonist several times, and I also know that these are things that may be life-threatening for me. Why can't Black Tower do something to help the male protagonist? We have all experienced the feeling of loss. Why can't we take the initiative to avoid it? I have read Chapter 461, and my personal feeling is that this emotional line is the male protagonist's unilateral contribution to Heita, and he is the one who comes to understand and satisfy Heita, so why can't Heita take the initiative to understand him. I always feel aggrieved and unilaterally devoted. Although there is a response, it feels more like the male protagonist unilaterally catering to Heita. Heita has not changed. She is still the same. It always feels like there are no efforts made by two people for this relationship. What I see here is that the male protagonist changes himself and does everything for his lover. This is okay, but there is nothing Heita can do for the male protagonist (referring to asking the male protagonist not to do such dangerous things, and not wanting Heita to become a yandere). I simply want to see Heita do something for the male protagonist, even if it's just to celebrate his birthday, I'm sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! How to say it? It looks a little tired, and it feels like it's basically following a formula. One plot follows another. The plot basically feels the same. It's all the same routine. Well, the boomerang comes, solves the boomerang, then creates the boomerang, and then another boomerang. And then the genius went from studying his own project to studying the male protagonist, right? Ah? Feeling Screw Gum and Nguyen Mui. They have all become tool men, boomerangs to advance the protagonist. Well, in the author's words, it's foreshadowing.
I'm finally naked😭 I have to say that the author has controlled the rhythm very well, from pretending to be a genius at the beginning to becoming a real genius through hard work. Although he still has a golden finger space, he doesn't become a giant baby relying on the system like other works, which is great. The writing style is not the most important. The most important thing is that the "little stories" connect the plot of the protagonist's mental growth, instead of forcing the protagonist to grow up after going through big changes like other authors do, or forcing the protagonist to understand certain truths or not grow up at all. It can be seen that the author has carefully thought about the outline, and is not a crude "commercial product" used to make money. Although the writing style is a bit immature at present, and the descriptions in some parts are too short to arouse strong emotions, it must be said that if this book does not fall apart in the middle and later stages, it can indeed be regarded as a masterpiece worth reading in Tomato.
The writing is quite good. I feel very comfortable. Tomato is finally not a bunch of white articles. As a tower chef, it's very exciting to watch [laughing] This writing style is considered top-notch on Tomato. It does not stick to the traditional style of excessive entanglement with game characters and the main plot of the game every day in fan fiction, but writes the protagonist's own heartwarming story in this real universe full of space comedy. The description of Daheita's character is also realistic and vivid, making it comfortable to watch.
This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him, but I prefer it. Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It showed Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good. This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Don't show off your arrogance in front of Brother Liang, young man", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he was tempted by foreign persimmons and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnvtu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma, so Sato Kazuma went to another world in anger to meet Doraemon.