The System Wants Me to Be a Detective

It feels pretty good! The author may have to write about the third perspective, but as a result, he will write it first, otherwise the third perspective will not occupy more space. It would be better if it can be checked. The protagonist fits the appearance of an ordinary person. He probably belongs to a very, very ordinary person in a world without systematic literature. He is really afraid, fearful and anxious, and has a sense of being alive. It looks pretty good so far💕It would be very, very good if the viewing angle wasn't so confusing

It is very objective to say that no one is perfect, especially a person who has lost important memories. How good do you expect him to be? The subsequent development is a matter of counterproductive force. You expect a person who starts from scratch to adapt to his own abilities and explode in the end. If it weren't for the aura of the protagonist, someone else would have died 🤦. This subject is quite novel, you can take a look.

It's very interesting. The protagonist feels more like a living person. He's not overbearing, nor does he look bad. It's just that the switching between the first-person and third-person perspectives is a bit weird, but it's very impactful. However, I still recommend changing it.

Very attractive, looking forward to the follow-up