Through the Book, Bai Yueguang Becomes the Heart of the Villain Snake Demon

Overall, it was okay. It gave me the feeling that the male protagonist was cultivating immortality. However, the male protagonist doted on the female protagonist very much, and they were very clean (as a double-clean party, I think the description was very clean), but I felt that most of the time it was the male protagonist who was advancing, and most of the writing was about the male protagonist's battles. The female protagonist gave me a very fragile feeling, and she was about to die if I gave it two times (although this was for the sake of body). It seems that the male protagonist attaches great importance to the female protagonist,), but the female protagonist is too fragile [awkward laugh][awkward laugh], the heroine gets most of her resources from the male lead, and then the heroine suddenly becomes very powerful, although it is not sudden, but I think it is a bit abrupt (I am not saying that the heroine doesn't work hard), I just feel that it has always been describing the male protagonist's cultivation method. Isn't this a female channel? Shouldn't we focus on writing female protagonists? And there are fights from time to time (I don't like too much description of fights, and the male protagonist fights), but the subject matter and writing style are very good. I mainly think that there are too many descriptions of the male protagonists fighting, the title and content, and too little description of the female protagonist's practice (personally feel). Although after the restart, there are more descriptions of the female protagonist's practice, but I still feel it is a bit It's like a male channel novel disguised as a female channel novel (I really think it's a bit like it). Although I know that the female protagonist is really attractive, there are really too many descriptions of fighting. But except for the fighting, the writing is very good. The content, plot and emotional line are very good, not too abrupt, and there are not many flaws. (The description of the female protagonist is a bit crisp, and the male protagonist fights a bit too much.) The above is just my personal opinion , you can point out what I said is wrong, but please don't criticize me. If you don't like it, don't read my comments [laughing][laughing]

It feels like watching a TV series. I don't know how good it will be if it is made into a TV series.

Believe me, I read it, and it started out pretty good. There are reasons for those lightning protection places. The finale of the first volume can be described as almost "annihilating the whole army", hahaha, but then Tiandao took action and the world was reorganized. Everything returned to the beginning, and the heroine woke up early. But it's quite interesting. I hope the second volume can go smoothly. The first volume almost failed because there were too many systems and he was killed by the male protagonist. However, in the second volume, the male protagonist is raised by the female protagonist, which is quite good.

It's super good-looking. The male protagonist really only cares about the female protagonist, and the female protagonist also understands the male protagonist very well. The two people who love each other are really good-looking.

Looks good! Really pretty! Snake is super doting 😭 I'm so sweet, Xiao Jiu is so cute! We snakes are crazy about protecting our wives.

It's good-looking. The heroine is not a virgin and grows up step by step. The hero always protects the heroine. Of course, the heroine is not weak and will try her best to protect the hero. The plot has great ups and downs and is attractive. In short, I recommend you to watch it [Shy]

It still feels very good. I like how the male protagonist always loves and protects the female protagonist without thinking [admiration][admiration][admiration]

Good looking! ! It's rare to see the writing power of a few years ago. The writing style is delicate, and the plot progress of the male and female protagonists is relaxed and moderate.

The plot has a bit of an old boss boss feel, but I really like it.

I really like it. It's like a fairy tale. Xiao Jiu is really good. I hope they can achieve results in the second time. I hope they won't be tortured. Don't let the hero forget Xiao Jiu.

This is really beautiful

Very beautiful title

Ahhhhh, it's beautiful and exciting. Come on!

The subject matter is novel. , The male protagonist loves the female protagonist passionately. Not bad, keep up the good work

It's so good. It's my first time to read this kind of article. It looks like the parents in the ancient article about falling in love. It's so fun to read.

The fighting plot is particularly exciting and exciting, it feels like a male protagonist haha, the male protagonist also dotes on the female protagonist, the plot is also very fast-paced, the plot is very exciting, it is very worth watching.

Not bad, really good.

Stimulating, beautiful and fast-paced,

I hope the male and female protagonists will get better and better

The emotional lines are delicate, very good

Good-looking and attractive plot

It's really beautiful, believe me

Like it, very pretty

Very nice, come in if you like it

Very beautiful, recommended

I like it, come on! Take good care of you! [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Love][Love][Like][Like]

It's very beautiful and very touching.

The snake demon is very powerful and it feels like it is constantly fighting. The presence of the flower demon is not too strong

The author's writing style is so good, he doesn't look like someone who is a 58 fan.

This book is very nice [Love]