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What would you say about the protagonist's character? Not quite like an adult, not like a man, not like a contemporary person

After reading the first few dozen chapters, the logic of the ghost stories is okay and reasonable. The plot is good, but the protagonist has too many psychological activities, and he has solved several ghost stories. I am scared every day. I panic when I see people discussing myself in the forum. I panic when I browse the ghost stories. I edit with golden fingers and panic. 😅 I hope there will be less in the future.

It is a very good book, but after reading it I realized that there are only sixty chapters. (Covering face) The protagonist always says he doesn't want to cause trouble and always helps those people. He can't stand the test of his heart, he must be a kind person. Some of the solutions are also very heartwarming, such as the catnip illuminated by the warm light under the shameful tree, the ghost counting stars found that the thick curtains were closed, and the naughty ghost snatched the socks and humans chose to exchange them with coins. The protagonist is also very logical and smart. After chewing every word, he found the loopholes and then enlarged them. He keenly discovered anomalies when thinking about the joint trial of several big bosses. (One thing I suddenly discovered is that the trumpet can actually infer the protagonist's personality based on some retweets) The author's personal feeling is that the psychological description is well written, the transformation of the protagonist, and the inner feelings. I highly recommend it! (There are too many psychological descriptions in some places, which will lead to the loss of some readers and lower ratings. We hope to improve it.) (The Storm is Coming in Chapter 60 is really nice!) (If I read it now, I am considered a veteran, right? The author is great~~ I want to appear too~)

The material selection is good, and the content is well-conceived. However, some things are described in too much detail. It is best not to use excessive examples. The mental descriptions are also a bit too exaggerated, which greatly affects the perception. It has a redundant and heavy feeling. I gave it five stars because it can be seen that the author has carefully thought about it. It would be better if the writing style could be changed to be more concise.

Make a big splash, the protagonist in the early stage has just obtained this magical editing ability As an ordinary person, he has used this ability to help many people. He writes a lot about psychological descriptions, which perfectly depicts the change of mentality of the protagonist from an ordinary life to an extraordinary life of saving people. He is not as calm and composed as some of the protagonists next door. His nervousness depicts the psychology of ordinary people. In fact, if I think about it, if I suddenly encounter this thing, I will also be very nervous. Haha, there is a certain degree of authenticity. The protagonist of this article actually has a very good advantage. He will edit the rules based on his knowledge and make up for the physics knowledge for us readers. . . . This also shows the importance of reading. . . . Articles like this are all the same and change the rules, but this book is relatively fresh, just like if you are used to eating meat, so you want to eat refreshing vegetables, read it to the end in one go! [Love][love][love][laughing]

It's a pretty good book, with some psychological descriptions that are above average. I hope the author can make him feel some psychological growth after going through the storm. If you are just an ordinary person now, can you become more stable after a certain amount of growth? It doesn't matter if you don't change. It is understandable that the psychological description highlights the critical situation. It is recommended to see if there are other methods that can be used. It's okay if you don't have it. No female protagonist. The words of the heroine or some people who can easily discover his own secrets are played behind the scenes. It will be more dangerous. If you don't have enough writing examples, it's easy to write poorly. Judging from the plot, will there be a game between the official and the protagonist? Or maybe other lines. Looking forward to updating soon.

It's okay, it's a very interesting setting, but there are often some events that the protagonist has never experienced that are written by the author, such as the one in the bloody apartment where a red rope is hung to ward off evil spirits. It is obvious that the incident in the bloody apartment was a yellow talisman on the cat's eye. A little bit does not correspond to the above, and people who read it are full of question marks, but everything else is fine, and there is too little, please update soon

The subject matter is very interesting. I have only seen the first few chapters so far. I suggest that instead of just writing about the protagonist's own perspective, it would be better to insert other people's perspectives from time to time and write a few separate chapters to describe the events in detail (the number of words is too high). Of course, the author may have added it later, but that's all I have read so far, and I came up with an idea::ೖ(⑅σ̑ᴗσ̑)ೖ::

Invincible at the beginning, a growth-oriented salvation story. The male protagonist is an ordinary person, realistic, and has a sense of responsibility, which is particularly suitable for me. The description of the upper level is based on observation and search for the protagonist (it's strange that I don't feel that way, so this setting is considered my personal preference) (the focus is on the ordinary sense of reality). There are many psychological descriptions of the male protagonist in the early stage. It is recommended not to click on the early comments to find a sense of agreement with the same view of having a good impression of the male protagonist, because there are very few, and it will also affect the viewing mood.

Very beautiful, this will be a dazzling star Li Yan is the only guardian rule maker currently. He has been working hard for his world. I hope there can be a few people in the same camp. I think Li Yan would be too stressed by himself. As the only guardian, he may need a few close friends. He is carrying the world on his back. Protection and destruction are two opposites, but protection is countless times more difficult than destruction. The protagonist grows up step by step. He has been silently guarding him. No one will know the true side. Try to stay behind the scenes. Once the "god" appears in people's sight, he will be pulled down from the altar.

Not only is it logical, but it's also cool and looks great! I have been following it since it was about 30 chapters ago. I have seen that the 60-plus chapters so far are really well written, logical, and very satisfying. I really like the character of the protagonist, who is very kind, but not very saintly. There's nothing toxic about it for me right now! It's good to have no CP at the moment. I hope there won't be any CP in the future. Love is not a necessity.

The imagination is very good, but the AI ​​feeling is too strong. The idea is very good, but the AI ​​feeling is too strong. I hope it will improve in the future.

It's quite interesting, and the story is also very good, but can you please not write too many psychological descriptions that may make people upset? Do you think it's the same? I watched several plots but didn't get much push [Punch Out]

Author, your writing is so beautiful that it kills you. Hurry up and type, just take a second break. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration], you are the best

The legendary cold-tolerant king never installed air conditioning in his home

It's pretty cool, as long as you can hold on. The transformation of the protagonist is very harmonious. The inner drama in the early stage is the focus of supplementing the protagonist. As long as you keep reading, it is a very good story. The protagonist's halo is logical and the writing is good. It is recommended to watch it. The protagonist fights alone, don't look at the group portraits The protagonist is on the winning side, and the current villain is an organization (Clown) Supporting role, I prefer a neutral fun person. There is no harmony in the organization. The clown is in the organization. Weird, but I think the protagonist fits the setting, and there is currently no female protagonist The setting is that the protagonist has to face ghost stories and save people. The additional reasonable setting is a change in the rules. At the same time, more than one protagonist is a tamperer. Currently, only the protagonist is decent and the clown is neutral. The villain group is anti-social elements, currently there are (playwright), (clown) (puppetist) (graffitiist), the combat power is from the highest to the playwright. I don't know how powerful the puppeteer and the clown are in combat. Personally, I would rank the clown higher, while the graffiti artist is like little cannon fodder (tentative) The protagonist (passing editor A) is righteous, does not belong to the Virgin but saves people, has a normal mind, has a firm goal in the mid-term, and has a moderate pace. There are also the big bosses who appear on the forum, mainly two, supporting roles with moderate roles and not much highlights, followed by decent characters. All the characters who appeared on the forum in the early stage are decent. A positive article. After reading it, the writing style is good. The character design is yet to be determined (currently, I feel it is good and there are not many aspects of the character design). Overall five stars, a great work to watch

The content is quite good, and it feels like the protagonist is controlling everything behind the scenes. Moreover, the protagonist is not useless and can keenly detect loopholes in logic. Looking forward to updates from the author!

The protagonist has too much inner drama, no one cares that the stranger ate an extra bowl of rice today, really

I like this kind of thing very much. The edited content needs to be logical, and there is a price to pay for eliminating the weird stories. Unlike other editorial novels, you can just make random changes without any cost.

Not bad, very imaginative and the setting is very novel. Editing settings shine at your fingertips At the beginning, the protagonist, as an ordinary person, had many ups and downs in his psychological activities. Calm and calm in the middle and late stages

It's good-looking and a little warm, but the language order is not very good. It's like I wrote half of it and then forgot about it, and then I continued writing after a while.

Except for the excessive psychological description at the beginning, the subsequent plot is very strict, logical, and the setting is novel, making it worth watching.

Looking at the present, I have witnessed that the protagonist is slowly growing up, and he has not given up completely when encountering setbacks and strong opponents. This book is suitable for people who like to watch the protagonist grow in strength over time. In the second chapter, another opposing faction (called a faction for the convenience of description) appears in the second chapter, which makes me accept it very well, because This feels like the world line is more complete. The Joker is worthy of being a chaotic party. I have to say that the story in the theater made me feel that the Joker is a little cute. In addition, the villain is really an extremely conceited person. I look forward to the protagonist facing him again. I hope that the second showdown can be carried out on the basis of a complete world view.

There is a lot of mental description in the front, so you can skip ahead and read it. The more you write in the back, the better.

It's so beautiful, the content is wonderful

The setting is quite interesting, and the protagonist's mentality gradually changes from the joy of an ordinary person getting a golden finger to the calmness of taking on the responsibility of fixing the world's bugs.

Very nice! I hope you can stick with it and look forward to the future I just don't like clowns very much. . . Hope it can be offline as soon as possible

There are too many descriptions in my heart

The author has such a rich imagination. I wonder if I would be frightened when I wrote it. It scared me to death when I read it at night, but I couldn't help but read it.

I turned off the comments and read the book. I think it's pretty good. It can be seen that the author's writing is getting better and better. Come on!