Beng Tie: After Retirement, He Became the Target of Being Raised

🍅'S Feng Jin novel is of high quality, and compared to those harem novels that randomly adopt female protagonists, this book's two female protagonists may be easier for people to accept, because it is not a mindless selection, and it seems to be worth reading at the moment [OK] [OK] [smile]

As a cook who cooks with both style and style, I say: Look! Another billion chapters! [Laugh][laugh][laugh] If you can be both fengjin and yadie, I say: Author, you have won my heart [like]

The writing is good, but bro, I was deceived [facepalm] Looking at the title of the book, I thought it had a single heroine, Feng Jin, and I realized something was wrong after reading it halfway through [facepalm]

After reading it for a day or two, I think it is quite good as a harem novel. It is better than some harem novels I have read. I feel very good about the author's writing style, especially the description of the shapes, movements and psychology of Feng Jin and Xia Die. Compared with the Iron Harem novels I have read before, everyone thinks this is the best one, and it is also a work that I am quite satisfied with. Compared with the various "Beng Tie Harem" movies I've watched before, they are not very good-looking. The male protagonist likes five or six female protagonists, and they also have system functions. This is something I don't want to see at all. I mainly want to see unsystematic harem fan works, which I feel are closer to this real-life scenario. (Personal review only) Finally, I hope that the author and your team will work hard. I believe that this book will one day reach its new glory.

I thought I finally found a good Feng Jin novel [face covering], but halfway through, Xia Die was the first to talk about the two female protagonists, so I had no choice but to run away from the brothers. However, the writing is still good, so I'll give it four stars.

The writing is quite good, and the emotional line is very good, but the setting of the immortal contract feels a bit difficult [facepalm]. Originally, I was wondering if it had something to do with Fengfeng, but Fengfeng only responds to requests, and it has not reached the point of using the contract [facepalm]. Immortality is supposed to be the freest life path. He only needs to live to prove himself. There is really no need to make a contract to restrain himself, but the content is quite good, so I will give it four stars.

I think it's pretty good, but it's painful every time I wait for Chapter 7╯╰.

The writing is very good, why is the score so low? But it's time to get into the main story. The process is the key, and it can't really be written into a romance.

Although there are sometimes some bugs and some settings that are inconsistent with the original game from a current perspective, overall it is still very good. The writing is relatively delicate, and the plot advances generally smoothly.

The author asked me to comment, but I was not kidnapped.

Why do I say that the author's name is so familiar? It turns out that I have read your jobless fanfic. When will your jobless fanfic be updated? Didn't you say you would write it to the end? (▼ヘ▼#)

A very good book

Very well written, good luck to the author!

It looks good. I love watching it. I want to watch it again.

I like Fengbao the most

Why is there no cute little Ika? Could it be that it can't speak? [What] beep, beep?

No! ! ! Why do you do this to me? ! Author! I obviously... I obviously came out of the book "The Lost City of Strange Beasts" by Goupengpai! Why do we need to add that the world is fake, but love is real! ! !

Super awesome! It should be the first book about Feng Jin. The plot is reasonable, the protagonist is full of characters, and the writing is meticulous... In short, the future is promising!

The emotions are described so well. Daily life is warm.

The male protagonist has a bit of a human-machine feel, and the two female protagonists handle it very well. Come on, come on [Sending Hearts]

Hahahahahaha, I have understood the truth of time! Hahahahaha

The prison pigeon asked me to beat him [almost crying]

It has to be very good-looking, okay?

Full of faintness, very proud

It's okay so far

Beautiful, beautiful, great

Because this book gave me two lives [laughs]

Why is the outline so huge, and why is it so short😱, author, wooooooo, it's not enough Author, good-looking, short, extra, understand?

That's ok. I read Beng Tiewen.

I didn't expect this to be the end…but it's still beautiful!