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I was very surprised to find this book that closely combines Eastern immortality with Western magic. The theory and thinking of Eastern magic are very detailed and innovative. Some of the heroine's insights into the comparison and discussion of Eastern and Western systems are also very interesting. The overall reading of this book is very gentle, soft and comfortable. The heroine is a Ravenclaw who is very curious about knowledge (he is in the same college as me). Some of her thoughts and reflections are very in-depth, and the various causal lines on the heroine's body and the magic marks that have the same origin as him made me feel very eager to read on. Finally, let me make a small guess. Those spell marks and the causal lines in the past (and Snape) should be made by the future heroine traveling back in time. I am looking forward to how the plot will develop later. I remember it was mentioned earlier that the heroine's relationship is with the sect. Will the heroine talk about her relationship later? Thank you very much to the author for bringing us such a warm work. I wish the author a lot of rewards and the book will be prosperous. Come on, come on [Sending Hearts]

It's really good. This is the first time I've read a novel about Hogwarts and immortality. I feel like I'm a bit "expertise-savvy". It combines the elements of magic and immortality very well. It's unexpected that there are no conflicts in the opposite direction between these two elements. The various foreshadowings written in it can be said to be situations that you wouldn't even guess on the surface. The writing style is very comfortable and natural, with its own aura.

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This is the most enjoyable book I have ever read. Of course, I have several books like this, but this one really surprised me. I think it should be a big hit. The author's writing style is also very comfortable

It's very beautiful, and the setting is also very novel, but it seems to have come a little early, and it's not enough to watch [Blow a kiss]

Regarding the combination of cultivation and magic, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into the two systems, but it is too short and the ending is very hasty. There are very few love lines with Sev.

It's very interesting, but the author could write more paragraphs. Some of the sentences are too long, which will make people impatient to read them. This way, the impression would be better.

It's very well written, and every chapter is so long! Good

The story is interesting. The meeting of cultivation and magic makes the original HP world more exciting! It's just that the ending was a bit rushed, for example my good friend Luna didn't even mention it [awkward laugh]

I love reading it, the protagonist has an independent personality, and the whole article is full of friendship.

Imagination and reality complement each other

Nice, but too short

Very novel, the Tao of the East and the magic of the West

It looks pretty good so far, and I will come back to review it after I finish reading it.

Great book. It's unconventional, the angle is very novel, and the writing is very delicate. Nice! My only regret is that it's a little short.

Correction, perfection, and a combination of East and West, no regrets, no tense pre-war atmosphere, a very peaceful HP fanfic.