People Are a Ghoul in Tokyo, and the Symbiote Is Integrated at the Beginning

Who on earth would read this kind of thing? I can't suffer the loss alone [angry] [angry], but I can be forgiven casually as long as I'm a woman? People have tested you in various ways, but you just forgive them casually? Can't stop being moved? Can't swallow a woman? Is it okay to attack you casually because you are a woman? What on earth are you thinking about watching this kind of thing?

Well, let me talk about my current feelings first. This book has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the subject matter is novel, and the setting of the massacre is consistent with the original work. The content about the massacre gives people a harmonious feeling. In short, it is easy to attract readers. The disadvantages are also obvious. The choice to add symbiotes in "Tokyo Ghoul" destined this book to be a cool novel. However, I can't see many cool elements in the author's writing, which gives people a sense of conflict. Secondly, I can see that The author seems to have written too hastily and has not laid out a good outline. It is easy to be misunderstood in many places. Although it is explained later, the majority of people in this software are discerning and impatient. It is difficult for such people to have the patience to continue reading. There are also logical problems and OOC phenomena in some content. For example, when Kaneki and the protagonist meet for the first time, the image of Kaneki will only say sorry after the misunderstanding. The author also seems not to understand the original content very well; In short, this book can only be ranked in the mid-to-medium range among the ghoul novels I have read. Logically speaking, I can only give it 3 stars. But among new authors, the writing style can be rated as above-average in the 4-star range. It is estimated that after the new book period, the rating will be between 7.5 And 8.6. My suggestion: The author should not have too high expectations for this book. You can use this book as an experience. Use this book to accumulate the small number of fans who are patient and not overly discerning as I mentioned earlier. Correct these shortcomings in the next book. In this way, the next book will have a high chance of becoming famous or getting a rating of 9.0 Or above.

Good review! Although I don't know why the score is so low, it may be because of the split of the official version, but it is really powerful and powerful, and can make up for many regrets in the original work. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Five stars to support the author Alas, I recommend you to stock up on what you want to read, because although this author has come back to update, I don't know which day he will suddenly stop updating. The last time I stopped updating, I stopped updating for half a year. What a pity for an author. Withdraw a five-star review.

The carnage is well written, but there are some problems with the description of the protagonist. He feels separated, and the left and right brains are fighting each other. But I have to say that the symbiote is well written.

It's very innovative, but not as good-looking as expected. It just feels very..."Pressing"

The style of this novel is concise, the narrative rhythm is compact and neat, and there is no sense of redundancy. Its core creativity is quite ingenious, breaking out of the common narrative framework and showing its distinct uniqueness. The author uses extremely concise writing to promote the plot. Although there is not much ink in the characterization, the characters are sharp and angular. "The changes from the beginning to the present", the action logic is clear and powerful, avoiding the procrastination and side branches that are easy to appear in most works, so that the story always maintains a strong propulsive force. It is hearty and attractive to read.

I can only say that it is really very interesting. The character of the protagonist has also changed a lot. He has become strong and confident. I can only say that the author is still very persuasive [shy]. Keep writing. The results of this book should not be bad. Come on, come on, come on.

It's currently in the top three ghoul stories I've read, and it's expected to be even higher. According to the new author, it's really good, but the love line is a bit flawed (the author himself said the love line is weird), but after all, the plot has just begun. Let's see how it develops later.

It's a ghoul fanfic. The content is very good. I feel nostalgic when I read it. The main character has a good social life and I like it very much. But it feels so well-rounded that there are no weak spots. If it is so strong in the early stage, it will feel like there are no opponents in the later stage. It is recommended that other characters can be strengthened in the later stage. But overall it is still very good, I like it very much, I hope the author can stick to it, and I will keep following it.

Not bad, not bad, really good-looking. In the early stage, the protagonist has not fully awakened to the consciousness of killing, so he is a bit too cautious, but later on, he will not have this problem. Carnage's dialogue is also just right, and the display of strength is also based on the normal principle of not attacking anyone unless they offend me, and if someone offends me, I will repay you twice as much. The battle scenes are also well described, but so far, Carnage's true strength has not been shown, and they are all quite weak. I feel that the instantaneous explosiveness and power of the massacre can be made more exaggerated. I feel like the emotional line could also be written better.

Five Stars just wants everyone to eat it together. I only saw Chapter 17 and I suggest you read it carefully. Chapter 16 is really well written [laughing] Summary is not recommended to read

It's a very well written book, but it seems to be gone. Today, April 29th, there has been no update since the 25th. The cover and name of the book I read now are also gone. It must be a river crab.

The subject matter is novel enough, and the symbionts add fun to ordinary daily life. Whether it is daily life or fighting, the protagonist's mental journey is gradual, but there may be some minor problems, but they are innocuous. The inconsistent writing style and ratings may be caused by early problems, but I still hope that Dong Xiang will be the heroine, otherwise it will really be a case of left and right brain elbowing.

It's pretty! This ghoul fanfic accurately captures the dark undertones of the original work, and the protagonist's "massacre" fusion setting at the beginning is full of tension. The description of Hezi's confrontation is full of punches, and the ethical struggle between ghouls and humans is hidden in the writing. Although it follows the original framework, it uses a new perspective to tear open the cracks in the order. The balance between combat and human nature is quite interesting, but some plots are a little rushed, but it is still a passionate masterpiece.

To be honest, I didn't want to read it at first, because when I opened the comments, I saw a bunch of 2 stars, and Tomato kept recommending it to me, so I thought I'd check it out. After all, there are so few ghoul fanfics. After reading it, I found that it was not as bad as the comments section said, but it was actually very comfortable to watch (among ghoul fanfiction). And I didn't blindly follow the plot, and there were no obstacles. I can only say that the reviews misunderstood me (everyone's preferences are different, and I don't deny those who give negative reviews. I often give negative reviews too). I can only say that this book happened to make me enjoy reading it, but it was too little.

The writing style and plot are the pinnacle of ghoul fan fiction, and there is no one like it. It's a pity on Tomato, because the reader groups are not very consistent. Some people who don't understand it just think it's nonsense and give low scores. There are also some people who are unhappy because the small head controls the big head.

The writing is good. Although it is a new book, the writing style is good. The plot is not as poisonous as other books, nor is the protagonist's personality split like many other books on Tomato. Overall, it is worth picking up. Also, there are too few, not enough to read. The author will add more! !

It's different from what I want to see. What I hope is that the symbiote has no independent consciousness and is completely controlled by the protagonist, just like a ghoul controls his son. Now that Slaughter has its own consciousness, I think it's a double-male story. It's not quite what I thought, but it's still okay. I'll support it.

The characters are described delicately and the plot is vivid and natural. The original party is really ecstatic and the portrayal of each character is very attentive. The plot is also consistent and orderly. There are many grooves and a lot of laughs. Of course, the writing style is also very beautiful. It is very serious when it should be serious and the emotional expression is very good! Thumbs up, pushes

It's cool, it's so cool, not to mention that the character of Massacre is surprisingly well suited to the world of ghouls.

A new novel with good writing style, worth reading. The heroine currently is Dong Xiang. Regarding the two poisonous points of separation and system problems, the author has explained them in Chapter 52. If you are interested, you can read them. If you are poisoned, just leave [eating melon]

The male protagonist can have a clear personality, and he will never be a virgin when he is about to be exposed [Adoration]

There are definitely some poisonous spots, especially in the front, but it is actually quite interesting. The symbiote traveling into the ghoul world is also very creative. This is the only one of the same type. It feels pretty good. There are just some minor poisonous spots. There are no extremely poisonous ones, but there are many minor poisonous spots.

It's okay. Although the article is simple, it's not that serious. Didn't the author say that the system is a hook? It must have been downplayed later. Generally speaking, the idea is not bad. As for being a dog for others? Isn't that an extreme statement? Doesn't it depend on one's personality? Uh, you can read it and if it matches your brain waves, it can be considered a book that can be used for entertainment.

It's okay to be a little bit poisonous in front of you and not be able to handle what you do well and let others wipe your butt. The rest of the story is okay, but the highlight is that the massacre has a distinct character and vivid descriptions. But the bad thing is that later updates are too slow.

The story of a kind-hearted, eloquent little chef and his righteous partners rewriting a tragedy is not bad. The author should update it soon. It needs to be combined with hard work and rest less and update more.

This is the first time I read a ghoul novel, and I think the author writes it well. The last time I read a ghoul thing was when I was in elementary school. Putting the venom symbiote and the ghoul together seems quite novel. Come on, author [like]

After reading this, those who are hesitant about whether to continue reading or not can decide whether to continue reading or not. Dong Xiang is the female protagonist, and the writing is very good. It is also the best ghoul novel I have read so far, but I still want to see it without a female protagonist to develop her own fighting power and career. I wish the author's books will become more popular and gain more readers.

So far, I have seen Kaneki turn into a ghoul and being picked up by Touka and brought back to the store. I think it is okay. The plot is not biased and the character settings are still there. I looked through the comments and found a lot of bad comments. Personally, I can only say that I can accept the previous ones. I have been looking for books on Tomato. I don't think many people will read it. I can only say that it is acceptable. If you want to read it, you can read it yourself.

It seems that the writing is really good so far. The brutality of the massacre and the calmness of the protagonist. I hope it can continue to be maintained.