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Yes, it's quite interesting. It's the first time I see the main character being so young. Most of the fandoms started with the admission notice, or they were introduced to it in one stroke when they were young. I hope there won't be a system or something like that, and the heroine shouldn't have one either. There are many heroines who are not good to read. It's best to write the heroine as an adult. I don't want to read romance novels. After all, the routines are the same.

It seems very good so far, full of magic and the intertwining of magic, which makes people intoxicated. But now I am curious about the emotional story. Is it Fleur? It seems that the protagonist should be one or two years older than Potter and the others.

I would like to give you a five-star encouragement as a courtesy. I have read a few chapters so far and the opening concept is quite interesting. However, the author should pay attention to sentence fragmentation. Too many erroneous long sentences lead to confusing expressions, which will test the reader's reading ability and patience and affect the reading experience.

This is a very nice Hogwarts fan novel. You can clearly feel the author's intention, the logic is rigorous, and the nesting is reasonable and fascinating. It also explains very well the gap between Voldemort's first fall and Harry Potter's enrollment in 1991, giving a lot of foreshadowing.

Why does it have to be related to Hermione?

It's interesting, but since the main character is one year older than Harry, does that mean he started school a year early?

I feel like the protagonist is very spiritual. Is there a female protagonist? If so, is it Luna? [Laughs crookedly]

The author's writing is superb! ! Nice! The rating is still over six points! ! ! [Shocked] Wait until I go to Shuhuang Square to recommend books to you [Thinking]

The author's writing is very detailed. I am looking forward to reading the content after admission.

I haven't read much, but the writing is pretty good. It all depends on the protagonist's personality and scale of doing things when he grows up. The protagonist is purely British, and so far he is a pretty good little kid. Let me give you 5 stars first. Come on, author

The story is compact and smooth, no bugs, good

The book is very interesting and the updates are very stable. You can enter the trap boldly. Thank you to the author [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Beautiful, great writing.

Not bad. The description of the magic in my heart opposite is very similar, very full.

It's interesting to fill in some blanks in the Harry Potter story Really good, a lot more content

This book is very good, why is it rated so low?

It's a good Harry Potter fanfic. It's a pity that the style is not what I like [laughing] But come on

The writing is wonderful. It can be seen that the author has a deep writing skills and many scenes are described vividly.

Overall it's remarkable, it looks good, and there are no bugs.

Very good book, thank you to the author

Very good, broadening Harry Potter a bit

It's so exciting. I rarely see such a subject.

Strong recommendation, support the author greatly, this is a good book that must be praised with five stars.

I saw the first few pictures, they are really interesting and I will keep following them.

It's well written and wonderful. Kudos to the author.

This is a book I particularly like. I really like the small world written by the author.

It's so beautiful, no wonder my friends keep recommending it

This is the first time I read this type of book. The reading experience is not bad. It is worth adding a bookshelf to keep reading.

So far, I quite like Scrimgeour. It's good to watch and I will continue to watch it.

Such a beautiful novel, I really recommend it