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The writing is quite good, but the transitions are quite long. Although it highlights the characters in this way, it may not be a good solution for fast food novels. It is best to promote more books, because comics are actually very popular and difficult to write. Departing from the main line, I came here for the comic empire. There are a lot of things before the eighty chapter, and there are a lot of things after the eighty. I can only say that if it is more daily, you can not use the comic as the front, if there is a comic plot in ten chapters

It's good to skip the beginning and start on the career path to contact editors. However, there are so many descriptions of the personalities and appearances of landlords, convenience store managers, and clerks that I can't bear to read them. After all, I came here based on the title, so I thought it would be better to describe it in a few sentences, unless those people provided inspiration for the comic. However, this is a copy of the book, so it probably won't be used. It can be combined with it when he wants to draw his own original work and be interviewed. Also, can we not have a female protagonist? The main career route is more beautiful and less chaotic?

Having studied in Japan, the author's writing is very real and not even abrupt. The sense of immersion is very strong, and the characters are all flesh and blood. I feel that the author has carefully thought about the choice of words and sentences, and the rhythm of each chapter is also very good. It is a pity that the update is over. Hurry up. Don't force me to kneel down and beg you.

It can be seen that the content is carefully written, and the details and character descriptions are very detailed. It can be seen that it has been deleted, deleted, rewritten and rewritten. It is not an ordinary running account. It is worth reading. I hope it will not be unfinished. The main character time travels because of his parents' affairs. This hole will be filled in at the end. Come on💪.

This is the most enjoyable book I have read in Japanese. There is no dragging plot so far. It would be nice if there were more words. It is not enough to read. I hope the author can maintain this level [shy][shy]

It's quite nice and has a good idea, suitable for those who like the light breeze. One star is deducted because there are too many traces of AI polishing in some places. Your own writing is good. I hope you don't rely on AI anymore. No matter how perfect the machine is, it can't compare to the appeal of a real person.

The book is bold and innovative, delaying the first drawing of comics. The first few chapters are used to highlight the character of the protagonist. From the helplessness and panic in the first few chapters when arriving in Japan, to the subsequent confrontation with the parent-teacher conference, there is an obvious growth line, and here you can create your own team.

The opening chapter, about a man alone and helplessly surviving in a foreign country, is quite realistic.

I've seen Chapter 17 and it's okay so far, but I have a paradox question. When the protagonist comes to Japan, will he meet himself as a chaebol? What is the purpose of the system treating the protagonist as Japanese?

I like this. The protagonist is alone in Tokyo, climbing up step by step. Especially when he gets the first pot of gold, this process is the most exciting.

It looks pretty good so far, no delay, when will the pitfall of the protagonist and his mother recognizing each other be filled?

I read 100 episodes in one breath. The foreshadowing is very good and the plot is very smooth. Although the foreshadowing is eaten up, it feels a bit fragmented, but for readers who have watched DN and Giant, the writing is tense and exciting. It is a rare masterpiece in the pure text genre. The protagonist is flat and thin is not a shortcoming. After all, he is just a tool [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

I can feel the vitality of the characters in the book

It's not bad. The pace is quite satisfactory for Tomato, even a little slow, but it doesn't have much impact.

I rarely give book reviews, and most of them I don't bother to review, even after reading them. But this one is really different, including the changes in my heart at the beginning and the foreshadowing at the end. I feel like I can become a god.

It feels pretty good-looking

Author, you are so miserable! Let me give you some encouragement.

The text has the warmth of flesh and blood

It's pretty good. The one in the back is a bit yandere, but it's okay.

I finished reading it in one go. Come on, author.

Very in-depth content, I can't quite understand it, but I think it's awesome

High quality, good reviews [like] As a reader, I feel like I got a good deal.

The character descriptions are quite detailed, especially the protagonist at the beginning.

When I see 92, I would like to give you a good review and encouragement~ This kind of business upgrading is a bit slow, but it will be more immersive step by step. After all, laying the foundation is very important.

Yours is the first novel that I have read with such concentration. It is very interesting. I like it very much

The detailed description of the interaction between the protagonist and supporting characters is very delicate. It can be seen that the author himself is very familiar with Japanese comics. I can give it 9 points out of 10. It is a masterpiece of writing.

It's a good-looking, very pure novel. The first few chapters have a strong Japanese flavor. The later chapters describe finding an assistant and drawing comics very well. Very good. Come on.

It's very exciting, but it's too short and not enough to read, and it also shows the difficulties faced by cartoonists.

This is the first time I read a novel with Japanese anime content, and there are so many talented people on Tomato.

The career line is well written, but the emotional description is a bit redundant, but it can be seen that the author is very serious in writing it. For this seriousness, it is worth giving 5 stars, come on!