Golden Shovel System: from Unicorn Insect to Par with Mythical Beast!

Orange LV7, 36.25 Points/50 points Start + follow-up: 4+4 Writing + Creativity: 3+5 (Golden Shovel + Pokémon) Plug-in + setting: 3+3 (less appearance) Rhythm + Main Line: 3+(4-1) (Academy Stream) Details + logic: 3+3 Extra: +0.75 (5 Points for orange) Feelings: Good-looking, looking forward to the follow-up, less of a college route. Score calculation: 8×2.75+0.75×18+0.75=36.25 Points Difficulty score: 71

The golden spatula is fine, but your attitude of treating the elves as tools and your behavior of arbitrarily erasing the opponent's consciousness will deduct one star [smile]. After you replace it with defeat, it would be great to have a random copy in the system that can only be used for synthesis.

I really can't figure out the reason why I have to get that snake. I have to leave such a time bomb in my fledgling hand with a maximum power of only level 30. If I like the Arbor snake, I can conquer it later. Anyway, you can synthesize the potential racial value and characteristics [face covering] and face it later. If I were the leader of a normal evil organization, I learned that that night, people would come to your house to kill people and seize the treasure. I took a time bomb for no reason [laughter]

Classic rich school beauty, good creativity leaves a poisonous spot [face covering]

What a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, Tiancan Tudou sighed after reading it. This must be one of the four great classics. 1. It is definitely the greatest sacred book of the 21st century. The Holy Ruins are in It's almost impossible to be literary in front of it! Doupo is almost useless in front of it Connotation! Zhu Xian is almost emotional in front of it! Covering the sky is in front of it It's almost impossible to imagine! The Buddha is right in front of it Almost a layout! A rare experience in online novels Classic! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong and Schnee Wu Cheng'en Cao Xue Qin Kong Mo Lao Zhuang Li Bai Du Shou San Su Xin Qiji Qin Huang Han Wu Tang Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni After reading Plato, Copernicus, and Aristotle, everyone said they were good! The author's book is really well written. Writing style It is fluent and rhetorically appropriate, and is deeply rooted in the traditions of the Wei and Jin dynasties. He also carried forward the style of the Tang Dynasty and the Song Dynasty to a certain extent, and was able to I saw this book by the author when I was still alive book. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. See the work After reading this book, I had an indescribable named grief Ah, such a good novel, if I read it again in the future I can't see it anymore, what should I do? What should I do? What to do? Until I have no idea Do not hesitate to add this book by the author to your bookshelf Finally, the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. Come. But I immediately thought of Such a good novel, if others can't read it, then Isn't it a waste of the author's efforts? After painful thinking, Wanting to fight, I finally made up my mind to live in my ego and work hard. Offer yourself. I want to take out this book I would like to dedicate this review to the world to appreciate and read. Say keep pushing it up, push it up! Push it up until everyone can see it So far. When I walk between heaven and earth, the scorching sun shines brightly The moon is in the sky, you have to ask me, this novel is enough to read Are you not happy enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are full of rivers and lakes. The water is rolling, you have to ask me, this novel is enough Are you addicted? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, the beautiful buildings and jade buildings, the clouds Hai Xianren, you have to ask me, how many updates has this novel received? Is it fast enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters, speed Not enough content! Not enough

It's not too dark, it's more like the harmonious society we have now. Of course, it also has a decisive side to it. It's relatively warm and pure. It's a pure Pokémon novel. It doesn't have too many expressions of human nature, such as plotting against others and harming others. Of course, it's not completely absent, but it's just not much. One routine to defeat the whole audience, bragging about Mewtwo, making Mewtwo capable of defeating alpacas, pure AI

Chapter 44, 6. The Sting Bee, whose highest combat power is only about level 30, wants to be the only experimental product of the world's top villain organization and the only successful gene fusion, 666. He just won't let go. He still does this despite the system. He is invincible.

After watching it, the setting is quite good. It can be said to be the plot of the game. Fighting in the gym and defeating the king to become the champion. However, there are too few plots outside the competition, much less than the proportion of the game. There are some conflicts in the article. The original plot is like lightning flashing, big needles, bees, strengthening in the dark fog, etc. (There is no explanation of direct straightening out, of course, either the author is not pure and rigorous, or the AI ​​intervenes). Battles should be collected and conceived by oneself, but there are a few that are too much, and there are no combinations of 5 skills. In summary, one of the cool points is the golden shovel function and competition. The shortcomings are that it is not rigorous (or AI) and there is little plot.

Four stars to encourage the author, and some comments by the way: 1. I hope to speed up the process of playing gyms in the later period and write the national competition as soon as possible. This is the first big climax of the Pokémon novel, and everyone is basically here for this. 2. Vulpix's character is very unpleasant, it is recommended to change it. If you can't change it, stop the loss in time. Especially the scene where Vulpix turns into human form and I happen to see the protagonist's good brother videotaping the protagonist, it's particularly poisonous. It can be changed to the protagonist, the good brother, watching Vulpix in the video, and then marveling that the protagonist has conquered another Pokémon. 3. The part about the slick boy is very confusing. The author may want to use this section to highlight the charm of Gyarados, but my personal feeling is that it is a failure. I just think the slick boy is very annoying. The above are some of my personal suggestions after reading it. I hope the author's book will get better and better.

What about Hex? And isn't it possible to integrate four stars? [Sinister smile]

The whole article gives me a good impression so far. There are not many themes that combine Pokémon and Golden Shovel. This book is not too abrupt for the combination of the two. The author's writing style is good, but I still feel that it is okay. The handling of these details is okay. I hope the author's writing style can be improved a bit. Overall, this book is quite enjoyable to read. The main character has never felt aggrieved so far. It's not bad. Come on, author.

The plot is okay, but the details need to be polished. Don't use any weird moves like me. Also, the big needle can reverse scales. It can reverse scales. It can be learned naturally at level 31.

For those friends who don't know about potential, let me tell you that potential refers to individual value (the author said it in the comment area). It is different from racial value. The highest individual value is only 31, which is determined from the beginning. Evolution does not add individual value.

It's a pretty good setting, and the content isn't too bad now. It's worth reading, but it's just too little to read. The author should update it soon.

Very good, but the progress is a little slow, come on! I hope there will be a female protagonist [laughs]

If there is such a plug-in, why not join the system team? Rain or shine, sandstorms, especially if you have a villain organization here, just build a system team and come out. Just like sandstorms and rainy days, not only is the system complete, it can blur the vision. When the weather breaks out and you are fighting with others in the field, he must leave one main force to protect himself. It is very easy to form a six-on-five situation. (Normally it is six-on-six, but the author is writing about reality, and there may be more.) There are replicators, why not research egg sets? Instead of combining one four-star one, why not use 27 to hatch eggs?

It's just so-so, not too exciting. If you want to read interesting articles, you can read it. Anyway, I read ten lines at a glance and basically forgot about the previous ones after reading the latter ones. There is no opponent for the protagonist among his peers. Even those master champions are probably waiting to explode a few pieces of equipment before they can beat the master.

Could the next Pokémon be Dolphinman? The race value is already super high, but it will become even stronger after upgrading. Moreover, the original characteristic that can only change forms is added with a characteristic that enhances attack power, preferably water bubbles, then you will be invincible.

It's a pretty good book, as a new author. It's great to be able to write it like this. Although there are a few typos. But it doesn't affect viewing very much.

It was a pleasure to read, not to mention the level, a good and refreshing article, 😘😘😘

It's not bad, it's just a cool article, but all three of your elves are from Kanto, and your team is going to be all Kanto elves?

The grade of secret treasures is divided into five grades: inferior quality, ordinary, high quality, special grade, and top grade. In this world, Pokémon's potential is divided into nine levels. [They are: F novice level, E ordinary level, D professional level, C elite level, B gym level, A king level, S champion level, S+ master level, second level divine SS level, first level divine SSS level. The Pokémon League divides Pokémon in more detail: 10-20 normal level, 20-40 professional level, 40-60 elite level, 60-70 gym level, 70-90 king level, 90-100 champion level, 100-120 master level, 120-140 level two god, 140-160 level one god, 160-200 creation god.

Come on, it's so cool to write [Love]

It's a good Pokémon novel. It has a fast pace and a very good setting. It's a good read all the way. The battle descriptions are a bit slow and the length is long. The bond with the Pokémon and the daily life are less, but it's still good.

It looks good, where can I find people who can play shovel and watch Pokémon at the same time [Thinking]

Since you sincerely ask for praise, I will give it to you with great mercy, in order to prevent the world from being destroyed, in order to ~

I like both Spade and Pokémon ❤️❤️❤️

Chapters 8 to 10, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, are slightly poisonous. It's good to skip the other chapters before this.

It's not bad. Although there are constant minor poisons, I can still watch it. I have never played Golden Shovel, but I can understand it, which is not bad.

It's okay, not bad, not too poisonous