Pokemon: From the Start, I Fuse Three-Star Beedrill!

Orange LV7, 36.25 Points/50 points. Start + reading: 4+4. Writing + creativity: 3+5 (Golden Shovel + Pokémon). Add-ons + settings: 3+3 (less appearances). Rhythm + main line: 3+ (4-1) (college flow). Details + logic: 3+3. Extra: +0.75 (Orange 5 points). Feeling: It looks good. I look forward to the follow-up and reduce the academy route. Score calculation: 8×2.75+0.75×18+0.75=36.25 Points Difficulty score: 71

The golden spatula is fine, but your attitude of treating the elves as tools and your behavior of arbitrarily erasing the opponent's consciousness will deduct one star [smile]. After you replace it with defeat, it would be great to have a random copy in the system that can only be used for synthesis.

I really can't figure out the reason why I have to get that snake. I have to leave such a time bomb in my fledgling hand with a maximum power of only level 30. If I like the Arbor snake, I can conquer it later. Anyway, you can synthesize the potential racial value and characteristics 🤦 and face it later. If I were the leader of a normal evil organization, I learned that that night, people would come to your house to kill people and seize the treasure. I took a time bomb for no reason [laughter]

Classic rich school beauty, good creativity leaves a poisonous spot 🤦

A sacred book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it. Tian Can Tudou sighed after reading it. This must be one of the four great classics and definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu is almost a literary talent in front of it! Doubo is almost a connotation in front of it! Zhuxian is almost emotional in front of it! Zhetian is almost imaginative in front of it! Buddha Ben is almost a layout in front of it! A rare experience in online novels in a century. Classic! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Nai, An Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Bai, Du Shou San, Su Xin Qiji, Qin Emperor, Han Dynasty, Wu Tang Dynasty, Song Dynasty, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, and everyone said it was good! The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties so deeply that I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading the author's book, I had an indescribable feeling of sadness. What should I do if I can never read such a good novel in the future? What should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on the bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought that for such a good novel, if others can't read it, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to live in the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to take out this book review and dedicate it to the world for reading. I want to push this novel up and up until everyone can see it. When I walk between the sky and the earth, the sun is scorching, and the moon is bright in the sky, I have to ask me, is this novel enough to read? Is it not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are turbulent, and the rivers are rolling, I have to ask me, is this novel enjoyable enough? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, beautiful buildings, jade houses, and immortals in the sea of clouds, I have to ask me, is this novel updated fast enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Chapters are not enough, speed is not enough! Not enough content! Not enough

It's not too dark, it's more like the harmonious society we have now. Of course, it also has a decisive side to it. It's relatively warm and pure. It's a pure Pokémon novel. It doesn't have too many expressions of human nature, such as plotting against others and harming others. Of course, it's not completely absent, but it's just not much. One routine to defeat the whole audience, bragging about Mewtwo, making Mewtwo capable of defeating alpacas, pure AI

After watching it, the setting is quite good. It can be said to be the plot of the game. Fighting in the gym and defeating the king to become the champion. However, there are too few plots outside the competition, much less than the proportion of the game. There are some conflicts in the article. The original plot is like lightning flashing, big needles, bees, strengthening in the dark fog, etc. (There is no explanation of direct straightening out, of course, either the author is not pure and rigorous, or the AI ​​intervenes). Battles should be collected and conceived by oneself, but there are a few that are too much, and there are no combinations of 5 skills. In summary, one of the cool points is the golden shovel function and competition. The shortcomings are that it is not rigorous (or AI) and there is little plot.

Chapter 44, 6. The Sting Bee, whose highest combat power is only about level 30, wants to be the only experimental product of the world's top villain organization and the only successful gene fusion, 666. He just won't let go. He still does this despite the system. He is invincible.

Four stars to encourage the author, and some comments by the way: 1. I hope to speed up the process of fighting gyms in the later period, and write about the national competition as soon as possible. This is the first big climax of the Pokémon novel, and everyone is basically here for this. 2. Vulpix's character is very unpleasant, and it is recommended to change it. If you can't change it, stop the loss in time. Especially the scene where Vulpix turns into human form and I happen to see the protagonist's good brother videotaping the protagonist, it's particularly poisonous. It can be changed to the protagonist's good brother playing video and seeing Vulpix, and then marveling that the protagonist has conquered another Pokémon. 3. The part about the slick boy is very inexplicable. The author may want to use this part to highlight the charm of Gyarados, but my personal feeling is that it is a failure. I just feel that the slick boy is very annoying. The above are some of my personal suggestions after reading it. I hope the author's book will get better and better.

What about Hex? And isn't it possible to integrate four stars? 😏