Golden Spatula System: From Weedle to Legendary Beast!

Orange LV7, 36.25 Points/50 points Start + follow-up: 4+4 Writing + Creativity: 3+5 (Golden Shovel + Pokémon) Plug-in + setting: 3+3 (less appearance) Rhythm + Main Line: 3+(4-1) (Academy Stream) Details + logic: 3+3 Extra: +0.75 (5 Points for orange) Feelings: Good-looking, looking forward to the follow-up, less of a college route. Score calculation: 8×2.75+0.75×18+0.75=36.25 Points Difficulty score: 71

The golden spatula is fine, but your attitude of treating the elves as tools and your behavior of arbitrarily erasing the opponent's consciousness will deduct one star [smile]. After you replace it with defeat, it would be great to have a random copy in the system that can only be used for synthesis.

I really can't figure out the reason why I have to get that snake. I have to leave such a time bomb in my fledgling hand with a maximum power of only level 30. If I like the Arbor snake, I can conquer it later. Anyway, you can synthesize the potential racial value and characteristics [face covering] and face it later. If I were the leader of a normal evil organization, I learned that that night, people would come to your house to kill people and seize the treasure. I took a time bomb for no reason [laughter]

Classic rich school beauty, good creativity leaves a poisonous spot [face covering]

What a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, Tiancan Tudou sighed after reading it. This must be one of the four great classics. 1. It is definitely the greatest sacred book of the 21st century. The Holy Ruins are in It's almost impossible to be literary in front of it! Doupo is almost useless in front of it Connotation! Zhu Xian is almost emotional in front of it! Covering the sky is in front of it It's almost impossible to imagine! The Buddha is right in front of it Almost a layout! A rare experience in online novels Classic! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong and Schnee Wu Cheng'en Cao Xue Qin Kong Mo Lao Zhuang Li Bai Du Shou San Su Xin Qiji Qin Huang Han Wu Tang Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni After reading Plato, Copernicus, and Aristotle, everyone said they were good! The author's book is really well written. Writing style It is fluent and rhetorically appropriate, and is deeply rooted in the traditions of the Wei and Jin dynasties. He also carried forward the style of the Tang Dynasty and the Song Dynasty to a certain extent, and was able to I saw this book by the author when I was still alive book. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. See the work After reading this book, I had an indescribable named grief Ah, such a good novel, if I read it again in the future I can't see it anymore, what should I do? What should I do? What to do? Until I have no idea Do not hesitate to add this book by the author to your bookshelf Finally, the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. Come. But I immediately thought of Such a good novel, if others can't read it, then Isn't it a waste of the author's efforts? After painful thinking, Wanting to fight, I finally made up my mind to live in my ego and work hard. Offer yourself. I want to take out this book I would like to dedicate this review to the world to appreciate and read. Say keep pushing it up, push it up! Push it up until everyone can see it So far. When I walk between heaven and earth, the scorching sun shines brightly The moon is in the sky, you have to ask me, this novel is enough to read Are you not happy enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are full of rivers and lakes. The water is rolling, you have to ask me, this novel is enough Are you addicted? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, the beautiful buildings and jade buildings, the clouds Hai Xianren, you have to ask me, how many updates has this novel received? Is it fast enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters, speed Not enough content! Not enough

It's not too dark, it's more like the harmonious society we have now. Of course, it also has a decisive side to it. It's relatively warm and pure. It's a pure Pokémon novel. It doesn't have too many expressions of human nature, such as plotting against others and harming others. Of course, it's not completely absent, but it's just not much. One routine to defeat the whole audience, bragging about Mewtwo, making Mewtwo capable of defeating alpacas, pure AI

After watching it, the setting is quite good. It can be said to be the plot of the game. Fighting in the gym and defeating the king to become the champion. However, there are too few plots outside the competition, much less than the proportion of the game. There are some conflicts in the article. The original plot is like lightning flashing, big needles, bees, strengthening in the dark fog, etc. (There is no explanation of direct straightening out, of course, either the author is not pure and rigorous, or the AI ​​intervenes). Battles should be collected and conceived by oneself, but there are a few that are too much, and there are no combinations of 5 skills. In summary, one of the cool points is the golden shovel function and competition. The shortcomings are that it is not rigorous (or AI) and there is little plot.

Chapter 44, 6. The Sting Bee, whose highest combat power is only about level 30, wants to be the only experimental product of the world's top villain organization and the only successful gene fusion, 666. He just won't let go. He still does this despite the system. He is invincible.

Four stars to encourage the author, and some comments by the way: 1. I hope to speed up the process of playing gyms in the later period and write the national competition as soon as possible. This is the first big climax of the Pokémon novel, and everyone is basically here for this. 2. Vulpix's character is very unpleasant, it is recommended to change it. If you can't change it, stop the loss in time. Especially the scene where Vulpix turns into human form and I happen to see the protagonist's good brother videotaping the protagonist, it's particularly poisonous. It can be changed to the protagonist, the good brother, watching Vulpix in the video, and then marveling that the protagonist has conquered another Pokémon. 3. The part about the slick boy is very confusing. The author may want to use this section to highlight the charm of Gyarados, but my personal feeling is that it is a failure. I just think the slick boy is very annoying. The above are some of my personal suggestions after reading it. I hope the author's book will get better and better.

What about Hex? And isn't it possible to integrate four stars? [Sinister smile]