That Time Our Patriarch Turned Out to Be a Young Sword Immortal

Overall, it's pretty good. The plot is relatively coherent, and the writing is no problem. The plot can still be brought in, and it won't be as boring as a running account. But the biggest problem is the Demon Slayer King. The protagonist was portrayed very well in the beginning, but in fact the combat power looks just like that. I originally read it with the intention of reading it for fun, but when I read the later plot, I couldn't feel happy anymore. The psychological gap was very big and it did not meet my psychological expectations. But overall it's not bad. You can consider reorganizing the division of combat power later. Fantasy novels should look like fantasy novels. Come on, author, try not to interrupt updates [blowing kisses]

I've read Chapter 19, and it's okay. I looked at some of the minor points that Duan Commentary and others thought were minor, and I feel like they're nothing. You can read it.

This is a good book. The description is more delicate and does not make me feel like I am reading in vernacular.

The writing style is novel and worth savoring. Judging from the single storyline, the final writing is indeed quite good, and the individual stories are well written, but the overall story connection is a bit green. Follow your heart. Looking at the entire novel, the story line is relatively messy, but the individual stories are really good. The author has good taste and I like it. 🤭🤭

No matter whether the fox has bad intentions or not, beautiful girls posting stickers are always civilized [blowing kisses]

Very beautiful! Each demon king has its own character. It's not the kind of invincible cool story, but it's really good-looking. Finished spreading flowers! When I saw Patriarch Jiang fighting the dragon, I was thinking that it would end so soon, or that the author had a bigger world view later on, but it actually ended. Woohoo. I was really touched when I saw thousands of people willing to borrow swords from Patriarch Jiang. Mortals are not insignificant, they are also an important part of thousands of epics. This is really very different from the Jiaolong who would not hesitate to bury thousands of little monsters in order to join the sea. He claims to be a king, but no one behind him treats him sincerely, because he himself is not sincere, he is just using him. Can the author write a side story about why Jiaolong showed so much mercy to Xinyue, what happened before Xinyue, and why Xinyue turned against her? (After thinking about it, is it because Master Jiang said later that she trusts Xinyue?) Maybe I read too quickly, and I didn't see the reason for Xinyue's defection in a straightforward way, but I still want to see Xinyue and Master Jiang posting! It's a really good book. I really like the theme and setting! Some small ingenuity, such as borrowing a sword, and ancestral home can be opened on a separate page, are very interesting. Please continue to open a new book!!!

I think it's pretty good. Come on, author.

Can the author please send me the cover? 💕

No, why is it only rated 5.5 If it's so beautiful? Let me give you five stars first!

Maybe a good book