Autonomous Character: Paladin on the Star Train

Your reminders and ratings are our biggest motivation. The main plot will not be exactly the same, and the emotional foreshadowing with the train set at the beginning is also necessary, so I apologize for the slow pace. This is the first time for a newbie to write about card pools. I will try my best to write as well as I can from the player side, accept all suggestions, and feel free to criticize if there are any bad points. ——Thank you for your support.

Can. Thanks. Open and raise. (Don't be too frustrated.) (Otherwise it will be uncomfortable to read.) (Many people in Tomato don't like this kind of article.)

Haokan [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] I like the character of the protagonist [sending my heart][sending my heart] But can it feel any more... Firm (faithful?)? When faced with a life-and-death crisis, you feel like you don't have to worry too much...? (I'm at a loss for words... Hehe) But I don't want to interfere with the author's thoughts [blowing kiss]. After all, I have never seen a protagonist image that really meets my expectations (too spicy [shy]), so don't worry about [send heart] (come on [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]) Haokan [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] All in all, it's so fat and shameless [sending my heart]

Little Eggplant, we like you. The description of the school girl is very good. Overall, it is one of the best FGO-related articles I have read on Tomato.

I like fireflies and see lilies I don't play fgoq, and I don't know about Mash Kyrielite. I read this book because I like Liuying. So far, I really like Mashu. The sweet and well-behaved Mashu is so cute, but Liu Ying is still my favorite🩷. The author created part of the plot based on the main storyline of Beng Tie, which is quite good. I love watching the interaction between Matthew and Liu Ying. The young couple secretly falling in love is really interesting. The author writes very delicately. Some people didn't want to watch the live broadcast, but the author followed the advice and later put a separate chapter on the live broadcast. Those who don't want to watch it can skip it. The above content is only my personal opinion.

I just read the previous point. There are too many descriptions in the details. I feel that it could be less. Pushing the main line more should make it look better. Overall, the shortcomings are not hidden, it is still very good. Come on, author!

The characters are well written, and the little eggplant really pokes fun at me. It even makes me not want to watch the real world. Comments interspersed in the story to tell the truth a little affect the perception. I must write whether it can be concentrated in one place. It is very well written. Come on.

Let me just say something objectively. 1. The author is very persuasive 2. The linked moon is very interesting 3. The character is well depicted 4. Fast update 5. The author is very cute 6. Kawaii! ! !

Tomato actually has such a book? It's rare to write well. The writing is so good, the sense of delicacy makes people want to put it down, and the plot design is also very good. Although it is a fanfic, it is well integrated. This way of writing feels like it came from Nikgaru. It would be corrected if it was in the first person, hahaha. To be honest, when I opened it, I thought it was a no-brainer, but I didn't expect a surprise. The best book I've discovered recently. I hope it can be updated all the time, this is really not easy.

It looks good, please update soon, author Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

Some descriptions are too much, such as appearance, skin, stickers, etc. There is also the live barrage. I feel that these should be the result of emotion. When you reach a certain point of expressing your feelings, you should put some so that it will not feel abrupt. Otherwise, it will easily interrupt the reading flow, affect the coherence of the story, and make the reader feel impetuous. There are also some light novel treatment comments that are placed separately at the end of a certain chapter so as not to interrupt the continuity of the chapter's story. However, it seems that the live barrage is not easy to handle in this way, so the frequency can only be reduced. But the story setting is quite interesting, although I haven't watched Fate. Let's see what happens next. The overly frequent barrages and detailed descriptions later on are much less frequent, and the rhythm control is much better than at the beginning. But there is another point that I feel inexplicably that some places are a bit OOC (for the sake of posting?). Especially the portrayal of March 7 feels a bit too much. March is only occasionally dull, but it is not heartless. Walking on the empty space station, she was the one who seemed most scared. Moreover, March is less likely to post messages with the heroine just for pranks. March probably expresses intimacy more unconsciously. And Yue Yue is not likely to let the heroine protect her while she refuses to practice. After all, Xianzhou has been practicing the sword for a long time and finally mastered it. What's more, when it comes to whether it will hold back the train crew, Mitsuki should be the kind of person who is determined to work hard to protect his companions. That is to say, even though I don't want to practice anymore, I will still encourage myself to work hard in the end.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! So pretty! You're right, but Mashu is a guy who can drop dragons instantly with just one shot of muscle ex. If you have anything to say, talk to my shield.

I will be the most straightforward, the most direct, the least roundabout, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straight to the point, and the least pretentious. Pad, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least oblique, the least sarcastic, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious , the most refreshing, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most energetic, the most enjoyable, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most top, the most explosive, the strongest, the most intense, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, The cleanest, the cleanest, the most hard-core, the most thorough, the most naked, the most chilling, the sharpest, the most profound, the most realistic, the least modified, the least roundabout, the least circuitous, the least circuitous, the least circuitous, the most heart-wrenching. Let me tell you, it's so beautiful.

The description is very detailed. After reading it, I feel that the corpse spots on my body have faded a lot [I feel full], but the quantity is a bit small (the author must have saved the manuscript, right?)

The content of the work is very good, and it is also of high quality among the second creations. Author, I am optimistic about you, keep working hard [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it], and the author, I have an idea. It will definitely be interesting to let Mashu die in front of the players to protect everyone when facing a strong enemy [Cool] [Cool] [Cool]

Come on, author! This book is really good, don't give up reading it! I hope I won't write Matthew in a way that makes him feel too frustrated. I hope it will be enjoyable later on!

It's beautiful. I obviously don't know where the heroine's abilities come from, but I can still understand it. It's really beautiful. Good cheers for the author.

It's great to see the ending of Immortal Boat now, and it's not Matthew who has recovered his memory and has not changed. To be honest, I thought it would be like the weather forecast that became very cruel after getting the memory disk, but it is still so fragrant and soft, it's so good. Wow. The last fan I liked so much was Ultra Kiana, she was awesome

It's so beautiful, so beautiful that I actually continued to FGO for a while longer😭

The plot is smooth and the writing is good, but there are a lot of barrages.

It's a very good story. The girl's belief, the concern of her colleagues and the love of the audience are all well demonstrated. People are attracted by the warmth when watching it [shy][shy][shy]

It's so good-looking, Matthew is so cute! FGO's first character with all 10! [Eat melon]

This novel deeply moved me with its fresh style and delicate description. The author does not pursue grand narratives or complex conflicts, but focuses on capturing the characters' subtle emotional fluctuations and those easily overlooked moments in daily life. This kind of detail-oriented writing is a great test of the author's literary skills and depth of understanding of the characters.

It's not bad. After reading the first volume, I don't have any memorable points. If I have to say that I have any memorable points, it's the eyes and hair (if you're curious why, just take a look for yourself⌓‿⌓). Can be skipped without affecting later viewing

I think it's quite interesting, but the third volume starts to lean towards daily life. That's not to say that daily life is not good, but it just feels a bit like a hydrology in my personal opinion. The first two volumes are good, but the third volume is not as amazing as the second volume. Let's take a look at the follow-up development.

I have only read the first half. To be honest, it is very interesting but not suitable for listening to the book, because it is impossible to skip the too many redundant descriptions. Occasionally it can improve the perception, but too often it will make people very uncomfortable, but it is okay, King Akaishi is not afraid of this bit of dross [laughs] I hope the author can change this habit if he has the ability. After all, he is not writing for marking teachers (no eating melon expression)

Great, March 7th has the flavor of March, but why is Shan Bailiuying in the label? No, don't be so cruel to March.

There are a lot of similar AI description methods in it, and other places are good.

Redemption? It's a bit interesting, and the writing is pretty good. I just wish there were less descriptions of the characters' appearance. Sometimes the descriptions are good, but try to keep them to just this level.

The plot is good, and the word count is not too high. But there are almost no FGO elements later.