Living with a Ghost Girl

A cold and powerful male protagonist with a mysterious life experience Cute little ghost in the rental house The problematic lady who wants to attract the protagonist Slow-Eating Reading Club Eyed Girl A familiar passerby who spends a lot of time drinking and drinking Defying the family's self-taught green tea I pulled it out a little later.

Overall it's good, not cliche, and the characters have distinct personalities. The only drawback may be the two troublesome female supporting characters. Although they are useful at times, they are a bit annoying. There are also two times when the male protagonist failed to maintain his image and was "just" seen by his sister. It was a bit too coincidental. There have always been no clichéd coincidences in the past. Here are a few jumps. There is no setting that conforms to daily life. It is a bit uncomfortable to watch. I hope the author will pay more attention to it. There are also setting issues (such as why the male protagonist is so cold) and the development of the emotional line. I still hope that the development will be faster and the background setting will be explained as soon as possible (maybe I am a little too impatient. If the author has an outline or plans in this regard, I will pretend that I have not seen it). Overall, it can be said that it stands out in the sea of ​​history, but it still has shortcomings, and it does not reach the level of a masterpiece (if it does not have the poisonous points mentioned above, it will be scratched). If the score can be more detailed, I will give it a 9 points. The author will continue to work hard, and I am optimistic about you. Oh, by the way, I read chapter 90 of the book review above.

It's okay, it feels like a Japanese light novel. The protagonist is currently very powerful, but a bit unhuman... The content and plot are still very good (I guess the author can't find one he likes, so he will write one himself.)

As a reader in the comment area said, I wrote this book because I couldn't find a light novel that I liked, and I wrote it casually. Therefore, there is no too complicated plot or main line. The description may also be a bit group-like, and because it is a double book, there are sometimes less and sometimes more. Thank you for your likes.

It's a slow-paced movie with a lot of characterizations, but once you mention it, Ling Yan is really cute.

The character portrayal and plot writing are considered to be excellent in Tomato, and the subject matter is also relatively novel. However, Mu Lin's favorability grows too fast, which is a bit abrupt. In a few days, she seems to have a good impression of the male protagonist. Maybe the eldest lady has a bit of a strong mentality and some M attributes? In addition, you can write more about daily life, such as the daily life of Ling Yan and the male protagonist. Come on, author.

There are few books in the past two years that I have always wanted to read. The subject matter and writing are just right. The plot has no depth and can be guessed, but the pace is very comfortable. I took a look at the update rate of four chapters a day. I rarely read serialized books. Waiting is a very long process. It is easy to stock up and not want to read, so I usually read the finished books. This book actually made me break my usual reading habit. But there are also some flaws. For example, the yandere and bitch attributes mentioned by the author about Leng Yan are not reflected at all. At least in my opinion, Leng Yan is just a naive child who loves cerebral palsy and loves to make noises. In fact, there is also a bit of book-eating. Because I read it faster, the scene at the beginning of the novel describing the beginning of school left a deep impression. It is obviously an aristocratic school and there are rich people in it, but the wealth and power of everyone is not reflected in any way except Bai Zhou. Miao Xinghai, these two will at least have a private car, but during the trip out to sea, they actually got a taxi. I think no matter what, it should have been given by a family driver of one of them. Ren Baizhou drove here by himself. The four of you squeezed into a taxi. Where is the black luxury car that appeared in the Miao family? Was it rear-ended? [Aggrieved]

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but there are too many magical female characters. When I first watched it, I felt it was more uncomfortable than watching a hen card, but it turned out to be quite interesting later on. If it develops well, I will add five stars. [Sending Hearts]

I've been updating it all the time. I feel that the author prefers multi-threading. Several lines are running at the same time. The writing style is very good, but the rhythm is always in a high-pressure state. () It can be regarded as a real experience of the feeling of Lao Bai. The emotional line progresses slowly, but in this state of Lao Bai, there is no emotion. In short I'm still very optimistic about it, and the character creation is also very good. I think when the author creates a character, whether the reader likes it or hates it, it is considered a foundation of creation. Characters are characters, they have advantages and disadvantages, and the audience will naturally like and dislike it. As long as the rhythm is good, it will be good.

I finally finished reading this book, and this is my first time to write a book review. The whole novel seemed depressing to me, especially the male protagonist gave up revenge at the end. Although it can be said to have fulfilled the little ghost's last request, this section seemed extremely unpleasant to me. In my opinion, if a person is really madly in love with someone, he will do anything to save her, even if there is no hope, and he will do his best to revenge on all the people who caused this ending. If I were asked to rewrite the ending, I would not change the ending that is almost equal to be. The little ghost will still die in front of him and be sent away by his own hands, but I will write that he killed all the people who planned this incident and their families, and then took revenge on the world indiscriminately. In the end, he will return to the rental house and go to "sleep" in the hallucination. I know that this ending does not fit the character of the male protagonist and the tone of the book, but I just felt frustrated and angry watching it. Finally, although in my opinion it is not my favorite plot, the author did write it very well. I wish the author can write more and better novels in the future. (Ps: I was deceived by the title and cover of the book at first. I originally thought it was a sweet love [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying])

The writing is very good, but Jing and Miao are a bit magical. Each of their actions makes me feel physically uncomfortable, but the effect is okay and overall I feel comfortable.

It looks good, I like it very much. It's quite like a Japanese light novel, what's the framework? Smell? The interweaving of exorcism and daily life is very good. The protagonist doesn't like to socialize? Trouble? The setting is very profound and the story is very interesting. It's a pity that there aren't enough of them now, so I read them all in one go. .

The author's writing is really good. Each character has his own personality. It is a short novel worth reading. The characters have their own personalities, and there are multiple lines going on at the same time. Occasionally, a paragraph is okay, but after reading too much, it becomes a bit confusing. You can try one chapter next time It's all on one side, I wrote part of it interspersed, otherwise I would be a bit tired after reading it, and the combat power is not described very well. Maybe I didn't want to write it too long, but it is still a story worth reading. It has ups and downs, it is sweet when it should be sweet, and it is decisive when it needs to be decisive. Highly recommended!

The book is very interesting, and the characters are relatively vivid and distinctive. I can see that the current male protagonist's character is aloof, but more like he acts completely in his own interests. He is more like Ayanokouji than Oreki Houtarou. Everything the male protagonist does so far seems to me to be for the sake of a stable life, and even a bit ruthless. I am curious about the follow-up development and hope not to pigeonhole him.

I wasn't very comfortable with it at first, probably because I saw the president and already had the desire to read it. The author's writing was very to my liking. I hope the author will continue to work hard (in fact, at first I thought it would be difficult for me to accept the cold setting of the protagonist)

The first book I read was the author's Silicon Craze. It left an impression on me that I will never forget. The final ending was so impactful to me that I will never forget this ending. I will recommend that book later. Then I clicked on the author's homepage and found that it was the same person. In fact, I should have realized that. After all, there are not many people with a similar style to the author. I sighed that this is really fate. I am also lucky to see the author's new work again. The ending of this strange book can be said to be good. Compared with Silicon Frenzy, the characters are very vivid and there are too many unforgettable memories. The plot made me worried all the time. In the end, I felt that this is the right way. I will slowly complete other works in the future. Thank you to the author for writing this book. I will work hard in the future.

What is my daily life when living together [angry] [angry] I don't want to watch a battle show [crying] [crying] I don't know how the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist [face covering] It's like an AI, so I'll give it five stars for the time being, because this score is really a bit low. I only read about 50 chapters

My heart was completely affected by the plot. I didn't expect to resonate so strongly with the characters in the book when I read it. [Crying] [Crying] I just caught up with the progress when the book was finished, and I was very lucky to see the fresh ending. Now that the stamina is building, I feel like I've been immersed in the story and can't get out. Even if you repeatedly savor the tragedies of each person in the story until you feel desensitized, you will still find yourself sad because of the experiences of Bai Jing, Ling Yan, Miao Lin and even You Yi when you think of this book. [Almost crying] [Almost crying] I really like the characters in the story, especially Ling Yan. Seeing her past, I sincerely wish someone could have helped her. The heartfelt anxiety and anger towards Jiang Nanzhen reached its climax at the end of her life story. It would be nice if the whole book was basically light-hearted and happy daily life, and I really like the actual plot direction, but when I finished reading it, I really wanted to see them happily living a peaceful life after the four years that Shirai was studying. [Cry][cry] So can there be a side story to save me? [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The plot is not cliche, the narrative method is very novel, and the author is constantly trying new things. The later plots also have multiple parallels, but unfortunately there is no feeling that they are all intertwined in the end. At present, the main plot is very big, but the writing is very small and specific to the individual. So overall it looks like a more everyday style.

It's quite interesting, but the progress of the male and female protagonists is a little confusing, and they seem to be at a loss. The little ghost is noisy every day, and the male protagonist is not used to it yet, and he doesn't know when he can take a step further. Very well written, good luck to the author

The title of the book seems to be a sweet love story, but it is not. There is a knife, but in the end it is considered HE. Each character has its own characteristics, and the characters are well-established. There is a shortage of books to read. I was deceived by the title of the book and got into the knife [cry][cry][cry]

I only found a few bad reviews, why are the ratings so low [Explore]

I finished reading it in one go, ah... I felt so uncomfortable after reading it, the ending... BE? HE? I can't tell the difference (fog). The characters written by the author in the early stage were a bit toxic, but the plot and writing were very good from beginning to end, and the three-line narrative in the middle gave me a brainstorm... In the later stage, the portrayal of each character was quite three-dimensional and very immersive, otherwise I would not have stayed up until 3 or 4 o'clock for two days in a row to watch... In short, although there are very few normal people in this book, the characters and background descriptions are a bit... Gloomy? But it is still a good book, about 4.3, But I still give it five stars...

This novel is also very good. It ranks fourth in my heart. The third one is the author's other novel. That novel is the best. Although this novel is also very good, I was obsessed with fairy tales at that time. The author's other novel fell into my heart. The only thing I don't like about this novel is probably the suitors surrounding the male protagonist. I just want to see the sweetness between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. My favorite is Chapter 33 of Volume 4.

I admire each of the exquisite characters in the author's works, who have distinctive characteristics and their own past. The overall plot is good and interesting, but it doesn't lose the dignity of the past. It's just that the character is a bit too facial-looking and doesn't feel right. Some of the plots are quite cliche and have no surprises. The characters' pasts are roughly the same, with many of them involving bullying (but perhaps because of the environment, it's understandable.) I agree with what the author said that every character's ending is already determined from the beginning, but it's hard to avoid feeling melancholy when you actually see that scene. Looking forward to the author's new works.

The writing is good, the updates are fast, the plot is reasonable, and the pace is tight, but it can be seen that it was a little too fast in the later period to catch up with the schedule. I haven't been so attentive in a long time and now I am reading a novel. I can clearly see the growth lines of the characters. Each character has their own story, and all the holes that need to be filled have been filled. How can I say that such a novel should be rated above 8.0? Why is the rating so low?

Can the male protagonist be more aggressive towards the annoying female supporting character, or at least reduce physical contact [rolls eyes] Alas, I like contradictions, I like to abuse the master, Dian

Very good novel. Damn Shen He swallowed my Ping Lun for 20 days. I can't even see it when I hold it in. What is the Avalon system?

It's okay, it looks very comfortable

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