No Excessive Dependence on the President!

There are not many people in this track, and it is normal for new books to get low scores. The author should be prepared for low scores when the time comes. I have a question. According to the author's reply, only one of the female protagonists can be the wife. This can easily lead to problems. Has the author seen the fifth-quarter wedding? Mixed reviews are considered mild, after all, this is a tomato. There is also the author's twist in time (referring to Elena's three days of consideration). Is it me, the Crimson King? It feels like a piece is missing. Finally, is the male protagonist a local? After all, most tomatoes, especially Western Fantasy, are basically time-travelers. Anyway, come on, author!!! 😄😄😄😄

Shennong's Selection is a very good article, but the progress of the article is a bit slow, and the yandere points I want to read are not very prominent. Here are some suggestions: 1. Don't have too many heroines, 3-4 is enough. Too many heroines will affect the perception. There must be emotional transition. Don't fall in love suddenly at first sight (and hurry up and bring up the candied fruit, imprisonment, and night attack!) 2 The plot could be a little faster. It's a little too slow and it affects the score of the work. Please update it more and code it hard for me 😫 😫 3. The male protagonist's male friend can appear quickly, describe it appropriately, and don't make a fuss over it. It's best to turn it into a yandere girlfriend, write it down appropriately, and give out some sweets. OK, for these suggestions, cheers for the author

There are no problems with the book, there are currently no poisonous points, and the main line is clear. ❤️ The only thing that is a bit difficult is that it is a Western fantasy novel with Chinese dialects and unique nouns. But there is nothing to criticize. The author is Chinese after all. Besides, it would probably be even harder if the translator's accent was changed to west Huan. 😂

It's a very solid novel. Although it's a bit strange to describe it this way, it gives me a solid feeling. The settings and characters are quite substantial, and the author responds quickly to any problems. For those who haven't watched much Western Fantasy or don't hate the slow pace, I think it's a good way to pass the time. Well, in terms of good-looking movies, maybe it's because I tend to watch more fast-paced movies, or maybe it's just the rhythm of Western fantasy. I've seen several Western fantasy movies that follow the slow-flowing style. It hasn't developed and exploded yet, but the plot seems to be a bit explosive, but the writing style doesn't quite match the explosive point. I've never seen this route before, and I'm not an adventurer. It's about saving them when they're at their lowest point and then turning into a yandere. The male protagonist is weak and gentle. It's a matter of opinion. The character and the direction of the story have been decided. I've never seen a weak male protagonist show his personal charm. I guess it's not easy to write. I don't mean to set up a succubus to be written in a female channel because of the character's charm. After all, it's easier to write a weak male protagonist than a strong male protagonist. In this case, the female protagonist should be more cautious than the male protagonist, and there should not be too many scenes where the female protagonist is entangled by other men. It is best to just pass it. But based on the style of writing, there shouldn't be such a plot. Please go to Shura Field to adjust the tone, and the starting point of the book should be the same. Here's an idea. Let's mention the strength of the male protagonist later on. Tit-for-tat night attacks might also work. Hey, I suddenly had an idea. What if the male protagonist's strength is added by the buffs of multiple female protagonists, but how about mutual defense? Although I didn't succeed, or I got angry because I succeeded, I just want to see your frustrated and jealous expression. Sure enough, watching dramas and ridiculing are the basis of human happiness. However, Qing Shuiwen seems to have some readers complaining if he doesn't eat meat, so please give it a try, author. Regarding the explosive points, this makes it easier for the author to refer to them. I don't read many Western fantasy novels, and casual remarks may ruin the style and taste of Western fantasy novels. It is not necessary to consider every reader's suggestion, it depends on whether it is suitable or not.

It's pretty good. It's a rare traditional western fantasy. The protagonist is not a traditional time traveler (hhh, now time travelers have become a tradition, but mainland natives are rare). The suspected golden finger's ability is not very powerful, and it can also be interpreted as a blessing (as for who did it, maybe God). I have seen the latest chapter. So far, there are no shortcomings on the whole... Well, the future is promising, vote for it five stars

Hahahaha, I watched it in two days without saying anything. I just went straight to the idiosyncratic genre. I am one of the first few people to have a character advantage. I have powerful hypnotic magic. I can seduce the protagonist from time to time. I can also secretly enter the room when the protagonist is sleeping and fry him. The most important thing is that there is a big thunder. I can't think of using this kind of thing. What's the number? What the hell is that blond guy? He's just a bastard and there's no way he can beat Yi. I thought the only way to fail was for the swordsman to knock the protagonist unconscious and then directly stir up the fire, turning the protagonist into his star slave. Otherwise, it's impossible to lose, so just listen to my advice [laughs]

It's actually a novel by a man who can vividly depict the hero's house and describe it in detailed language. Then I really have to take a closer look 😘 I miss you Song Xinyue, come back, my Song Xinyue, my most proud belief. Although it is a novel written by the same person, I can't find the feeling I had when I read Yandere Youth Again.

Fortunately, I read the comments, otherwise I almost got scammed. All I can say is that the author should add the label of party struggle to your book as soon as possible. Otherwise, if some people come in later and read half of it, alas, they will find out after browsing the comment area that it is a partisan fight, and they may explode directly.

To be honest, the current pace is a bit slow. In the future, guild expansion will have to reach the level of counties and countries. I feel that four or five hundred chapters are not enough. However, the author is very attentive. It is rare to see someone willing to polish the article repeatedly in online articles. The narrative technique feels a bit unfamiliar and it feels very bland when reading. It is not eye-catching. From my personal point of view, the current problem of this book as an online article is that it is less interesting. I don't read Western fantasy very much, but I think the writing style of online articles is generally the same. I would like to ask whether the latter is mainly about daily love or the main plot. There is also a very cute thing about the author. Every time he writes about eating, he describes it in long paragraphs. This is a treatment that cannot be enjoyed in other aspects. In short, I hope the author can write better and better. It can be seen that the author is really careful. (When else will I be imprisoned?)

The author's writing style in Tomato is pretty good, and the pace of the plot is relatively slow, but for someone like me who is used to fast-paced reading in Tomato, it has a different flavor. Come on, author [note][note]