HP Just Wants to Pretend to Be Transparent, but I'm Super Strong

The story is quite interesting, original and not cliche. However, I don't understand. The heroine seems to have been fighting against the air. She has done a lot of fighting without causing trouble. She has no enemies to create enemies for herself, and no fear to create fear for herself. Her mental illness has not been cured in her previous life. In the magic world, it is even more serious. I hope that the author can make this character or the story better in the future.

Why is www still a new trap? I like the heroine of this setting very much. I like to overwhelm the heroine in Tomato. Or maybe she is the only one in the growth genre (maybe I don't watch ww enough). This kind of talent is strange, but it is awkward in the heart. It will think about some ordinary people who seem to be unable to think about it. This kind of conflict makes my eyes shine. I hope that the next chapters will still make me like it🥺🥺

This book is very good, but it's very uncomfortable and I want to read the follow-up, which is a bit dull. [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] I feel that the heroine is still very depressed, but I hope that the heroine, baby, can overturn this scene later and live freely and freely, and not be oppressed by those panics.

Fairy love! ! ! Please get married! ! ! Marry! ! ! Ahhhhhh! ! ! I've moved here to the Civil Affairs Bureau! ! ! I laughed so much that neighbors from a few miles around came to light up their lights in the middle of the night and asked if my house was being demolished.

As for this book, I feel that the writing is very good and the structure is relatively complete, but my overall impression is that the protagonist has a lot of inner drama, and it keeps repeating. My heart is alive, then it dies, then it is touched again, and then it dies again. The protagonist has always had more inner drama, but there are fewer things in the plot. It feels like imposing a painful inner feeling on the protagonist [Exploration]

I have to praise the author, most of it is okay, and the writing style is quite comfortable. I saw some people saying that the heroine has been being fooled. I think this is quite true. At least her actions and consequences make me feel justified. I can only say that she is not a happy heroine. One thing that I think greatly affects the viewing experience is the character Daphne. I remember that Daphne is not a very smart character who understands everything. In this book, I feel like she is cheating, not like a child, like a politician who has lived for a long time. In summary, the key points: the heroine is relatively "cowardly", lacks mentality and means, and the character is partially OOC. I'll add the others later. It's so sad. I hate you, author, and I will never forgive you [crying]

Alas, maybe I don't have enough writing skills. I feel like I want to be calm, but I can't express it well.

This book is very good, very good-looking, and has jokes, but it is not the vulgar jokes on the Internet, but the kind of cultured ones. Although the heroine said in the introduction that he is a coward, his coward made me see the madness underneath his bones.

This book is very good and the writing is very good, but the author is the author! I really hope that the heroine can torture everyone to death in the back! Please stop hurting our heroine, okay [crying]

This is one of the best fanfics I have seen so far. This kind of setting is something I have never seen before. I hope I can write more. It was okay in the early stages, which was about 20 chapters, but the more I read, the more I felt something was wrong, and I was trapped in a cocoon, but the setting was good. The plot and character given, the reaction of the protagonist, and the portrayal of the people around him are too poor.

I can say this is a superb book. The delicate brushstrokes, high-flying literary talent, rich psychological descriptions, three-dimensional and gripping settings, and exquisite continuation of the original characters are enough to make this book stand out among fan works. But I think the author seems to be a little crazy in the description of the protagonist's psychological transformation. If the character's background can be supplemented or more logical explanations can be made from God's perspective to support the change in the protagonist's image, it may be possible to make the transformation of her image that is sometimes irritable and sometimes quiet more smooth. At the same time, I don't know if I can think that the author's psychological description of the protagonist is to make the character more three-dimensional, complete and logical, but this seems to inevitably lead to a lack of plot narrative. Originally, one of the conveniences of writing fan works is that you can follow the vines of the original plot to grow branches. However, according to my superficial reading, the author seems to hope to create more unique plots to highlight the charm of the character and stir up troubles in the original background, rather than just creating a simple bystander role to make up for regrets. Therefore, combined with the above two points, I can't help but have the idea that if more adventure plots can be interspersed with the twists and turns of the characters' hearts, instead of just a symbol or the conversations of some important figures, it may be possible to slow down the narrative rhythm and make the characters more three-dimensional and logical. In addition, since the author seems to want to create a character image of a behind-the-scenes pusher, it may take longer to polish the plot design to make the protagonist's plan more complex, reasonable and clever. Furthermore, the protagonist's own natural strength and acquired skills should be clearer and have a context that can be perfectly integrated into the story and the background of the era. Then, I hope that the author can appropriately expand the story map and analyze the magic theory to make the world more real and perceptible. In the end, I was really attracted by the author's great charm of writing. I must stick to it! ! !

The writing is very good, and the writing method in the front is also very powerful. The first part is a little uncomfortable, but the more I read the back, the more comfortable it becomes. When it comes to the ending, I feel sad. This is one of the few things that can make me sad. He really wrote a very, very strange feeling. I think the title of this book starts from It's very good, and the characters are well created. This is the first Harry Potter book I've read, and I think it's also the most beautiful (๑•.•๑). The writing is really amazing. Although they finally meet in the last scene, the author's emotional writing is very delicate, and it's a two-woman novel. It feels like they are redeeming each other, and it's very They redeemed each other. They were very strong in the early stage, but only stronger than some people. However, they were still choked by some people in the early stage, so that the protagonist in the middle transition period became more and more crazy and stronger. In the end, Lilithana became the most powerful monster when she died. I think the heroine of this book is He is not cowardly. I am very open-minded. He just doesn't want to be used as a pawn and resists like crazy. I think he is right. This is not cowardice on his part. Moreover, the author's writing is really great👍. Every part of the plot is quite well controlled, which also proves that the writing is excellent. Even though the introduction is so small, he actually said such a few things.

Good looking! ! Daphne and the protagonist are locked in a lock. The cat sculpture is simply the best! !

From a certain perspective, it's actually pretty good. The atmosphere is well created, but the plot is a bit too stream-of-consciousness. It would be good to think of it as the electric waves in the brain, struggling and involuntarily going in the dark direction. It would be better to understand it if you read it without reading the commentary. But no matter what, if there are highlights and a unique writing style can be considered excellent, even if its purpose may not be to please the audience, 85+ in the niche circuit, the eyes are bright and dark, and the eyes are bright again, at least it is more interesting than boring saliva.

The content is very novel and the writing is great, but I still want to care about the author. How is your psychological and mental state? If you are too tired, you can do some appropriate activities to relieve yourself.

It's quite good-looking, with a different setting and expectations. I hope the heroine will be a little crazier and not wrong herself.

The structure is complete, but I don't like the heroine's mentality of wanting to lie flat. Of course, this is just my personal evaluation. If you feel there is any difference in opinions, it means you have read the essence at a deeper level than me. Anyway, it looks good.

Desperate madness, disordered sanity, and collapsed souls are desperately trying to survive in the grid of the chess game. If Elizabeth's talent is the root of everything, then the blue butterfly and the prophecy made by the professor are the final trigger. What will become of a girl who wants the world to be quiet depends on the author's next thoughts.

The content is quite interesting. I hope the author can divide the paragraphs into more scattered ones. Reading the densely packed pages makes my head hurt. [Love]

Very nice, the author is great [sending heartfelt wishes] The world view is so grand and the writing is great, and the personality of each character is very realistic and realistic [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

I really like this book. It narrates things from a very novel perspective, one link after another. The protagonists all have brains and IQs. It is much better than those so-called love-brain plots. [Eat Melon] [Eat Melon]. I felt like a narcissus at the end.

100% 5-Star positive review Although some people may not understand it, I think it is more like a real magical world. It does not revolve around Harry, but the characters are more fleshed-out than most fan fiction I have seen. Tip: If you can't accept too many private settings, it's not recommended to watch it.

I hope the heroine doesn't have a cp, or has a light emotional line. Friendship and family are fine, but the feeling of love will tie down the heroine🤔

It looks good, it's my favorite style, and it's very interesting (I hope the updates won't be discontinued, please come on, author)

It is not easy to write a book. I can understand that the heroine does not want to participate, but fate will not give you the right to choose. Wasting time and talent is the biggest failure. The enemy will not become vulnerable because of your failure, but will become stronger because of it.

It's so beautiful. I don't understand why some people say they hate the main character.

This book is really good. I don't understand why a book with such good writing and such good writing would have such a low score. I think this book should get at least eight points. It is indeed a rare good book.

Perfect, simply perfect. Among the HP fanfics I have read, this is one of the works that I personally think can be crowned as a god (mainly because the protagonist has such a strong personality). It keeps getting better and better and I can catch up to the ending.

I feel that if the author wants to write something, he can add a label so that people won't misunderstand (but I really want to knock those two people). It's purely personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

There is too much inner drama.