Forged in the Fires of War: The Qi Family's Rising Star Changes Handong

Not bad, Qi Tongwei Pave the Road has the instinct to read, and can write the protagonist's line well, instead of fast forwarding all the way to let Qi Tongwei pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, it is also rare to pretend to be a slap in the face. In short, I suggest that whether it is in the early or later stages, the reader's perspective should be unfolded from the perspective of the protagonist as much as possible, rather than directly changing Qi Tongwei's role. The protagonist, otherwise it will cause a very serious separation, and the protagonist will completely become Qi Tongwei's tool. Qi Tongwei can have more roles, but he cannot directly change the protagonist. The priority is very important, especially this kind of fan fiction. The purpose of writing is to change the original historical events and create events. This is the core [Thinking]

It's pretty good. I hope there won't be any scenes of slapping people in the face or pretending to be cool in the future, especially Director Qi. Don't mess with Chen Yang and Liang Lu. Zhong Xiaoai. These people are disgusting, so you can ignore them, but don't make any nonsense. It's best to suppress these companies, because thinking about Director Qi drinking foot washing water gives me a toothache, but don't make any righteous remarks. There must be political enemies in politics. Can't those homes be used? I think it's totally ok

It's very interesting to watch, very flavorful, especially the atmosphere of officialdom. I actually don't like watching the battles in the front, and they skip a lot. The officialdom fight in the back is really interesting. Every time something happens, in the hands of officials, it seems to be a bad thing, but if you think about it from another perspective, it is an opportunity. It gives people the feeling that these officials are worthy of being officials. If you have the chance, you can really treat the hostile forces as Japanese. No wonder some people always say that as soon as you expose the evidence to certain people's units, teammates will follow and attack you. The male protagonist's son is a scumbag who rides in two different boats. To put it bluntly, ordinary rich people can do this because it has no impact on the country, but only their own families. But when an official's family does this, it shows that they don't want to discipline their son and have no desire to restrain themselves. It will also have an impact on the country and lead to corruption sooner or later. Three times: Oh, today I opened the liked comments and found that the book has been blocked. Sure enough, the author has drifted, the male protagonist has climbed to a high position, and you start to write about your son's affair with his mistress in an upright manner. It is obvious that there are traces of corruption in the family. You dare to write such a hook plot, and it seems that it is not surprising that the book was blocked.

(In the military system), convey gratitude by shaking hands, patting shoulders, saluting, or supporting each other through words and actions. Instead of bowing all the time, bowing is used in sacrifices or important ceremonies, and rarely bowing. This is a very big poison point for leaders to subordinates. Others are good

Overall, it's pretty good, and the beginning is pretty good. The only sticking point I see so far is the children. Do you think it's a female channel? Three treasures in one child. Personally, I don't like this very much. Of course, this is a personal opinion. If this is acceptable, you can eat it.

The title is novel, the content and plot of the novel are very good, very bold and innovative, I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time. It is more in line with the restoration of history. New readers can take a look, the quality is still very good

I feel that the writing is quite good, and the writing direction is also novel. It takes the name of the people as the starting point of the story, and then leads to some plots of "I am a special soldier" from the wreath under the mountain.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I found that it has little to do with the title of the book, but the entry point is very good. Come on

"Why are you going to the capital?" "Go to the capital to find my uncle. Heaven in Handong cannot give me justice, but there is heaven outside the world. There will naturally be people in this world who will give me justice. Brothers, wait for me to come back." After saying that, Qi Tongwei left the dormitory with his luggage and left Handong University. Since God won't give me justice, let me destroy this day. After reading it for a few days, I finally finished reading the preface and started reading the first chapter [laughing]

Reminder message The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered. In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder. Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it would be like using a blunt weapon to frustrate the sharp, and it would be a waste of sharpness.