1V1, two male protagonists, main attack, pure love
When Gu Yan opened his eyes, his mind went blank. A luminous ball told him that he was bound by the "Salvation of the Flower of the High Mountain" system and needed to travel to various planes to save the Flower of the High Mountain that was stuck in the mud.
World 1: Rich second generation scumbag x poor academic tyrant
World 2: sect senior brother x junior junior brother
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Reader comments
It's really beautiful, and it feels inexplicably gentle.
Shuangjie Shuangqiang sweet pet article, do not clear the memory, main focus, light writing style, especially pure love, almost no cars, the writing is immature, no merits, no faults, it is very good to read
Some suggestions:
If the dialogue between the characters is too short, it will appear lifeless.
Before... Now... This sentence pattern is used too much
When two people have a long and short conversation, there is no need to add names in front of them. Just use quotation marks and line breaks to separate them.
I'll wait and see again and I'll comment again.
In the third world, writing is like running water, very light [face covering]
Bye
It's really beautiful, and it feels inexplicably gentle.
Shuangjie Shuangqiang sweet pet article, do not clear the memory, main focus, light writing style, especially pure love, almost no cars, the writing is immature, no merits, no faults, it is very good to read Some suggestions: If the dialogue between the characters is too short, it will appear lifeless. Before... Now... This sentence pattern is used too much When two people have a long and short conversation, there is no need to add names in front of them. Just use quotation marks and line breaks to separate them. I'll wait and see again and I'll comment again. In the third world, writing is like running water, very light [face covering] Bye