Dream Spirit Adventure

The writing style is good, and it has a unique charm when reading. It seems different from ordinary Internet articles? Can't tell clearly. The plot is very real to a certain extent, depicting a sinister alternate world. The protagonists are not powerful enough to control everything, but are weaker than ordinary people; but it is also quite depressing. I wonder if the author wants to give our protagonists the illusion that their lives are about to get better again and again, and then immediately push them into a deeper abyss. If that's the case, that would be quite bad taste. In the latest chapters, you can often see the character's psychology or actions marked in parentheses at the end of a paragraph. I don't know if this is intentional by the author or because the draft was not deleted. Logically speaking, this kind of content should not be included in the text. However, it can also be seen from this that the author should have a clear outline. After the end of the first volume, he also summarized all the characters that appeared in the first volume, from the appearance chapters to the relevant plots, which is very detailed. I don't know if I can see the protagonists' lives getting better. If the flower demon named Jessica that the two protagonists meet is also a bad person, then it is basically certain that this article is an abuse article. The feeling of hanging on for a long time makes me really uncomfortable. Finally, no matter what, I still hope that the author will work hard. Whether you plan to hone the two protagonists or you really want to write a sad story, please work hard👍

Mainly because it's too short, and it's hard to read if you haven't grown up yet, but the writing is still good. It's difficult for me to continue reading bit by bit without being able to confirm that I won't abuse the protagonist later. It's still too depressing at the moment and I feel sad for them.

The writing is good, but when I read the character of the protagonist in Chapter 23, it made my stomach ache. Ohana was well portrayed. Actually, when I think about it, they complement each other pretty well. I hope they can be calmer in the future. It feels a little awkward to me. I don't mean to deny the author's writing style.

You mean you wrote it for more than a year and only got 50 chapters? 😠😠😠 It's not enough. Please update it quickly!

Let me first ask if it is a change of marriage. After all, I don't like change of marriage. The author will let me know 🙂 It's a bit outrageous that the protagonist was molested like this. . . . .

It's a relatively depressing article, but it's still in the early stages. I'll check it out in the future. It's readable, easy to read, and very interesting. Not many people read it. I recommend it.

It's very nice, but it would be nice if the update speed could be faster. 😘😘😘

It's good-looking, it's the type I like, but it would be better if I changed my wife and got married. After all, that's what I'm looking for in the transformation novel.

It looks good, it feels like watching The Adventures of Tom Sawyer

It's very interesting, but the main character is quite miserable. It's not like an adventure in another world, but more like survival in another world.