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The protagonist is actually quite a pure person. He doesn't have the resentment of the Virgin. He has a purpose for the Son of Destiny but also sincerely maintains the brotherhood. When something happens, he really falls in love...,,, So far the plot is good and attractive.

It's pretty good, um, I personally like the plot. But for some people who like to read Dashuang novels, it's not good. Because of the breakup of the engagement and some subsequent events, the protagonist's status is mostly in the middle, even a little humble, but the big plan is behind it. I like it! Haha, top nanny article. I feel like it's not good to be a nanny and a worker all the time. It's so frustrating! But it would be better if I could write something more enjoyable later. There is no heroine, but there are quite a few girls with One-Way Arrow. Who might be the one from the Huan family? I feel good about reading this now, it's a very good novel! My machete(๑•ૅω•´๑)∝╬▅▆▇◤

I like it quite a bit. After reading too many Shuangwen, I feel it is too superficial. This slower pace is not bad. In my opinion, the interaction with Xiao Yan (Lin Fan) and other protagonists is just a gimmick to attract popularity. It may be good if he is treated as a way to improve the protagonist. He treats people sincerely but is not a saint. He was aggrieved in the sect in the past to highlight the "obsession" of his previous life. After letting go of his obsession, he changed the map, and his attitude toward the Valley Master also changed. I feel like this is a good setting. Like, urge for updates [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Well, the foreshadowing in the front is relatively long, but the back part is really beautiful. I feel that the introduction is a bit of a delay in the book. The author's writing skills are definitely above this. The protagonist's charm is very successful, and there are no more traditional routines. There are even some counter-routines and satires to the traditional fairy tales. The setting is still very innovative. The most important thing is that the three views are really valuable in this kind of novel. Some of the more attractive elements are also very complete. The plot is interlocking and progressive. There are some shortcomings in grasping the rhythm, but the flaws are not hidden. I personally like it very much. I think that for a web novel, the successful characterization is more than half successful. This book has undoubtedly achieved it. The core of the protagonist is very stable, and all behaviors are traceable. It is not a traditional cool novel. The characterization of some supporting characters is a little templated. I would feel better if it could be more in-depth.

The logic is clear and the style is clear. The male protagonist is a gentleman and a person who knows right and wrong. This image is quite lovable, but the goal is not clear enough. But I insist that the goal of the fairy tale is to cultivate immortality.

I feel like this is the best book I have ever read on Tomato. Although the title of the book is a bit like Shuangwen. But it doesn't seem to be the case. There are no cliche parts and no unnecessary nonsense. It reads smoothly and easily. Have you read carefully those who say you want to lower the level? The strength exceeds that of the Son of Destiny. In the background. The growth rate is also in the first echelon.

It's a very nice novel, and you can tell that a lot of effort was put into it. Before I clicked in, I thought it was a cool article. After reading a few chapters, I realized it was not, but it also attracted me. It looks like a nanny novel, but the protagonist is not without gains when helping Destiny's child, and is gradually improving his own strength. The protagonist is also constantly growing, from a spiritual field administrator to... A speaker (fog) (maybe the protagonist needs a beer hall). The description of the environment and the description of the fight are both very good. It could be a little less exaggerated, but too much would be redundant. It's almost like these will be added later. And why are the ratings so low despite being so beautiful? Is it possible that novels written with care are out of place compared to those mindless and cool novels? Finally, can there be more cold-hearted scenes [crying][crying][crying], and when will she be able to complete her physique?

What can I say? The plot of this book is pretty good. The protagonist has a good personality and gets along well with the Destined Child. However, there are too many descriptions of the environment. One description of the environment takes up a quarter of a chapter [face covering] I want to ask the villain, the Demon Lord, when will the love-brained saint come out [Thinking]

This book is really good. The protagonist's character feels like a normal person, much better than those demons who kill without blinking an eye after traveling through time just for pleasure.

It's okay, the male protagonist has a good personality, not sleazy or greasy. I don't know if there will be a female protagonist, I hope there won't be one, or just a single one. For a harem, 2 or 3 will be fine. It's easy to describe. If there are more, either one will be disconnected or the other one will have no sense of existence.

For me, this book is fully worthy of a five-star rating - the core concept and the creation of the protagonist group are particularly eye-catching. Of course, there are some small regrets: the protagonist's personal story is a bit dull and lacks highlights; the battle description is thin and the tension is insufficient; the character interactions mostly revolve around the Tiandao protagonist, and there is less richness in the group portraits.

The male protagonist is portrayed quite well, and some of the plots are quite interesting, but it is a pity that it is a group portrait... More like a bystander. Even though the plot is well organized, Lin Yuqing is still a bit abstract, although there are indeed such people.

I stayed up all night to read it, and the overall pace is very steady. Different from other novels about cultivating immortals, many people in the comment area said that this is a nanny story, saying that the protagonist is working as a nanny for the children of destiny. I don't agree. The author describes the protagonist in great detail. He has no protection from heaven, and his cultivation depends on the children of destiny for their development, but he is independent of them. I haven't read about the heroine's harem yet, but when I saw some comments in Chapter 189 that the protagonist wanted to challenge the master, I wanted to abandon the book, so I hope the author will not write like this. From my current aesthetic point of view when reading books, this book does not have any poisonous points for the time being.

The male protagonist is considered to be a non-mainstream male protagonist who is gentle and guiding to his friends. Judging from the 400 chapters so far, the male protagonist has three values ​​​​of family, country, responsibility and responsibility. Many people say that the male protagonist is aggrieved and recommends people who live a good life to read it. In fact, in my opinion, this is not quite right. The male protagonist is actually a very good person. Apart from loving a little love, I feel that he is a good friend. Not killing and decisively eradicating the weeds is not a shortcoming, it is the embodiment of correct values and the core of promoting social progress and shaping the community (I think the author ran away before finishing the last book and did not leave an outline. I hope the author can leave an outline if the book does not do well in the future) The protagonist gave up the powerful magic weapon created with other people's lives, destroyed it even though it was completed, and refused to eat steamed buns made of human blood. Just because of this, just because of this protagonist, I will insist on reading this book.

Trouble, the biggest shortcoming of this book is that it requires readers to read it with some background. Currently, the styles of the two Destiny Sons, one Potato, and the other, Jiang Hao, are mainly centered around the protagonist's visual field or not within the visual field. I only found out that it is called nanny style after reading the comments of book friends. I actually don't know if this classification is strict. After all, the protagonist of this book is also growing up and has a heart. The starting point is not low, and it will test the author's writing skills. I am looking forward to how the author writes the later stage and how to arrange it to be logical. At present, the story structure is going to have a few more children of destiny who are waiting to be recognized as the big brother to connect the plot. The mastermind behind the scenes should also be put back. After all, the writing is delicate, the stitching technology is not obtrusive, and the basic context is harmonious, which can be regarded as a kind of fairy grass. The plot of this book will have some ups and downs, so it is not suitable for people watching Lu Guanliu, as it will be a bit toxic. After all, it is not pure and refreshing, so for pure pleasure, go to Lu Shuang.

Attention those who have been deceived, this article has a female protagonist, the author said it herself, she will avoid lightning on her own, and some groups who like the female protagonist will also avoid lightning on their own (the protagonist is very powerful, but some wives of Children of the World are even more powerful)

It's beautiful👀. I spent two days and it's already tied. I especially like the protagonist's character. I particularly like this upright and kind-hearted character. I hope the author pays more attention to the development of the protagonist instead of emotions. And I prefer group portraits. I hope the protagonist has no cp (mainly depends on the author's approach), and the protagonist and Gu The Lord's atmosphere is weird (I don't know if I am affected by the comments. After all, some people like these two people as a couple. It is mainly because I take on the perspective of the protagonist. The original owner sees the Valley Lord as a mother-like character. The protagonist is also affected by the memory of the original owner. So I don't like such comments and this strange atmosphere). The protagonist does not want a harem or cp. The protagonist has a task, so focus on that task. I hope the protagonist is happy and less hurt. How to put it, I feel that there are many romantic relationships with the male protagonists around the protagonist, but none of the female protagonists. That is to say, if the female protagonist is good, some people should like her. The author may not have written it. This is the case with Long Aotian-themed protagonists, but there are also many female-themed themes with heartthrobs. The male and female protagonists the protagonist meets should not only have male ones, but also female ones. I hope the author will change or add some in the subsequent plot.

What can I say about this novel? When I read it, especially in the first 20 chapters, I felt that the male protagonist was like a nanny. The more I read later, the more I felt that it was okay, not licking, not suppressing, especially in the first few chapters, I finally filled in all the things that needed to be filled in. There are still very few points. It felt too depressing in the early stage and made me want to read it. But I believe that you will be able to accept it after reading it. This book is not bad but not too poisonous. (Of course, if you think it is rubbish and cannot be read, then you should think that I did not say that thousands of people have their own preferences, right? Everyone)

The protagonist is not a virgin, decisive, has a bottom line, conforms to the normal three views, and is much better than those who kill and kill. Although there are some minor flaws in the work, the flaws are not outweighed. If this trend continues, there is a chance to reach 8.5 Points. Come on, author!

I didn't want to comment at first, but after taking a look at the comment section, there were too many black spots [smirking] It was well written, but the score was low, and I felt like I was disappointed with Ke Qiyuan in the first place. There are definitely shortcomings, but they are not bad points. The emotional line is indeed lacking, and the one who has the best portrayal is Senior Sister Wang, who has the least writing. The disclosure of my aunt's identity could be handled more gently. Putting aside these minor shortcomings, this is a good book. There are also some good works that all tell the same story [laughs crookedly] I hope the author can implement it smoothly. Five stars for encouragement.

After reading it for so long, I feel comfortable writing this time-traveling system article. The more I watch it, the more I enjoy it. It feels like it's not on a level that Tomato can achieve. It's great.

This book can only be said to have come at the wrong time. The rhythm and look and feel of this book are more like the traditional oriental fantasy from five years ago. It is natural that it does not receive high praise in this online environment where most people pursue a sense of pleasure. The protagonist has two business lines online and three views. The beginning is similar to a nanny novel, but in the middle, it is obvious that the protagonist's highlight has surpassed Destiny's Child in many cases. Personally, I feel that the male protagonist is more like the leader of the protagonist group. Although the plot is old-fashioned, it is basically reasonable. As the saying goes, old-fashioned means classic, at least it won't be uncomfortable to watch. There are two main problems: 1. The description of the environment in some chapters is too lengthy, and the hydrology is seriously suspected. 2. The book clearly states that the male protagonist's life in the original world was not satisfactory, but after time traveling, he still wanted to return to the original world, and therefore was in a state of aloofness towards the female protagonist, which seemed a bit strange. To sum up, I'll give it four stars. Overall, it's a work worth reading. Those who like reading novels and novels can just avoid it. Those who like traditional fantasy works would recommend it.

This book basically covers all the common poisonous points that Tomato users don't like. It will definitely not score high on Tomato, but it can be seen that the author has an outline, the plot design is also attentive, the character creation is good, the writing is also online, and the poison resistance is relatively high, which is quite good.

The style is very good, and it is a group portrait description. All the characters are growing. Don't just look at the template. People change, right? The meaning of the protagonist is the treatment, allowing them to achieve something, a higher height, a, let: Protagonist: the person who chooses his life in advance

It's quite interesting. There are very few fairy tales that I can keep reading. It may be a bit poisonous but it's not outrageous. The protagonist's soul is transported through the soul. The original soul didn't completely dissipate until nearly 200 chapters. However, except for some obsessions, the original protagonist didn't really affect the male protagonist. The male protagonist still relied on his own will to practice. The male protagonist likes to hold strings for those destined children, and he will not destroy any possible marriages that the destined children may have. However, he does not have a clear relationship line yet, but there are a few women who are interested in him. There is quite a lot of interaction between the male protagonist and Destiny's Child, and they are very good brothers. Maybe Destiny's Child was suspicious of the protagonist earlier, but it passed quickly. The protagonist's main ability is to have a clone, but it requires the control of the main body to act, rather than independent consciousness. I believe the author also knows that it is easy to get poisonous, so he wrote it conservatively. The pace of this book is quite slow. The male protagonist is currently one level stronger than Destiny's Child, but there are still many big events that he cannot intervene in, but he can basically do his own thing well. At present, the protagonist's outlook on life seems to be that of a normal person in modern society. He will not kill for no reason, but he will not show mercy at critical moments, and his easy-going personality is quite funny. After reading it for a few days, I still have 6 chapters left to catch up to the latest chapter, so I'd better wait until I have more time to catch up.

Turtle is suitable for turtle men or people with low self-esteem. After all, M is their nature [laughs]

Click here to learn speaking skills from the protagonist... The aspect of high emotional intelligence/. Raise a child This is my brother/. Be bold and careful. Every time I see the protagonist pass the sentence Everyone will be shocked by the art of speaking to solve problems However, when the author wrote the fight scenes, he used a lot of exaggeration (no After all, they have all become immortals.) Some words have been written hundreds, if not dozens, of times. Already. ... It will make you a little tired after watching it, a bit like being in the second grade of high school Something written by a teenager (but he must be better than me) The plot is quite good, it's about digging for gold in the foreign persimmon stone. It's also rare in software. (Only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.)

The plot is very good, and the author's writing is also very good, but he shows mercy at every turn and acts like a eunuch [smile] Those who like harems and those who like single female protagonists are silent [smile]

Maybe in the first few chapters you will think the protagonist's behavior is stupid But after you read Chapter 30, your mind will definitely change If you are willing to read on patiently, you will find that this is a good book It may take you 3 hours to read, but it's worth it

Child of Destiny is awesome. The main character is on the side of the road. It doesn't matter whether he is there or not, so there is no sense of immersion. If you want to understand the other protagonists through this book, you can read it. After all, the core of the female channel is dedication and regret. I just want to watch Kill Kill Kill