World of Alien Beasts: I Rely on Support to Win MVP

Give some suggestions to the author The writing is okay, but it's a bit awkward to express too much and do too little. Only when you look at others can you understand what it means that creators should avoid being moved by themselves. There's a little problem with the rhythm At present, the flaws are not concealed, the author should work hard

Male channel novel! It's rare to see this type 😳