Star Iron: Looking for a Salvation Tutorial

Not bad, five stars for encouragement. The protagonist is a supporting character, I guess, he doesn't have the strength to overpower everything, it's not an invincible novel, it's just about being invincible and I don't eat beef or anything like that. He has a three-point view similar to the golden will, and he's really a good boy in the new era. Of course, the author's writing is not awkward or brainless, it's the kind of character that is displayed naturally. The characters are all good too. The main character is a bit Xiao Chunan. You should get used to it gradually and won't act like a perverted and wretched man in front of others. He calls me "baby" and "wife" when we first meet him. There is nothing like that. The emotional lines are basically well-shaped, not too stiff, and certainly not too good. I can only say that it didn't make me feel embarrassed. I hope I can continue writing it. Lily won't appear in the future, right? Anyway, cheers, author.

Yan Ye destiny memory Combat skills consume 1 combat skill point Summon a Remembrance Spirit. During the existence of the Remembrance Spirit, the speed and attack power of all our characters will increase, and the attacks will cause a certain proportion of real damage. The Yi Ling inherits all the attributes of the main body. When the Yi Ling acts, our characters except yourself and (Yan Ye's) Yi Ling will move 15% earlier. Finishing move consumes 120 energy Enters a solo state and increases the damage caused by all our characters. When it is in a solo state, our unit will recover a certain percentage of its health based on its upper limit of health and remove one of its negative effects (priority control) when taking action. Solo special status When in the solo state, he is considered to have left the field; if the number of soul-recalling actions exceeds three times, the solo state will be released. Whereabouts 1 When in the solo state, the damage suffered by the friendly party is shared equally by everyone. Whereabouts 2 During the Soul Recalling action, the main body will recover an additional 8 energy points. If the main body is in solo state, an additional 20 energy points will be restored. Whereabouts 3 If you are not in the solo state, the speed of yourself and the spirit will be increased. If you are in a solo state, the enemy's all attribute resistance is reduced by 25%. Star Soul 1 The effect of combat skills has been changed; while the spirit of memory exists, the main body's actions can also advance our actions; after entering the solo state, the skill effect is increased to 30%. Star Soul 2 The effect of Trace 2 is increased by 100%. If energy is obtained when the energy is full, the overflow energy will be shared equally among teammates (no energy upper limit will not be shared equally). Star Soul 4 After Yi Ling takes action, one combat skill point is restored. After Yi Ling releases a combat skill, Yi Ling immediately acts once; combat skills no longer consume combat skill points. Star Soul 6 When in the solo state (even if kicked out of the field), our unit will get an extra turn for every 2 actions. (1 Turn cooldown)

Nice! Love watching! Love watching it! It's not just because there are no mindless cool stories in the emotional scenes with multiple heroines, but it also properly develops emotional scenes with the heroines, which often makes me smile uncontrollably, but also because of the daily warmth and fun in the plot. The description of these plots and the appropriate role substitutions in my imagination make me look forward to the subsequent protagonist every day to rewrite all the tragedies of Ompharos, turn all the bad things into what we expect, and fight for all the good things in the world! [Congratulations] I hope that the author can still update more while ensuring the quality! One update a day is really not enough! [Please update]

The pace is a bit fast, but at least it's fun to watch. I think it's good to watch!

The plot is dull, but it makes people want to watch it. It can be said that the plot has smooth ups and downs. The emotional description is not awkward, the protagonist is not too supervisory, the character is decisive towards the enemy, and the emotional character is Chu Nan. It will get better later, but I personally think it is a bit slow. In terms of emotions, the character can grow a little more. Being too descriptive like Chu Nan will be a poisonous point (you can write less blushing [send heart]) It is a good book. As long as it is updated continuously and it is not unfinished or finished in a hurry, it can be considered as a spiritual relief to save the book shortage. I wish the author a happy day, come on author [send heart][send heart][send heart]

So far, there are no poisonous points. The characters of Maomao, Butterfly, Aglaia, etc. Are all very good and not broken. I hope the author will continue to write.

The writing is okay, but the progress of the emotional line is a bit scary [eating melon] It feels like the protagonist has some kind of hypnotic app on him

No poisonous points, no embarrassingly uncomfortable aspects. And getting along with girls is very natural, without any deliberate greasiness. Highly recommended [laughs]

I really feel that it is good, but it is a little lacking. It meets my requirements for reading a book. It has multiple women and is original. The plot should not be blunt, and the literary talent should also have humor. The author, please do more updates. Let's start with Chapter 2000.

Reminder message The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered. In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder. Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it will be like blunt force defeating sharp enemy. Why waste your sharpness in vain?

The process of falling in love and feeling is clear, and the emotions of the characters are also well written. I wonder if the protagonist will follow a path after 3.5? Will he have to die once before talking about it? [Laughter]

It feels very sweet. I recommend it. It looks better than ordinary star iron.

All I can say is that it's very honorable, very interesting, and the writing style is also good! Wisdom teeth! Wisdom teeth! ! Wisdom teeth! ! !

It's well written, with basically no flaws. But it's too slow to keep on the same map, and there don't seem to be many updates, and it's not very stable? The book is a good book, but I should keep it for a while. Keep it longer or wait until the end of a map, otherwise the waiting process will be too painful [crying]

The writing is also very good. There is no poisonous point at the moment.

The author writes that many female protagonists have good skills, and it would not be awkward to have a harem [Blow kiss]

It's good-looking, the protagonist's character is well-characterized, and there are no flaws.

Do you care about the party? Let me try it carefully.

It's pretty good. Let's see if the plot of 3.7 Can be dealt with in the future. After all, this prophecy was promulgated by Xi Lian from the future who went back to the past [please update]

You have to eat quickly but not obtrusively, and you can write [like]

O'Neige, please update the author more [I'm about to cry], it's so beautiful, don't be a eunuch [crying], if you don't have this book, Wadasi! What should I do to make you update more? If it's something I can do, I'll do anything!

I like reading it very much. I have found so many books by Omphalus. This one is a rare masterpiece. I read it before and thought it had stopped. Unexpectedly, I continued to read it. In the end, I thought it would be the ending of Huang Liang Yi Meng, but the appearance of Cerudra made my heart skip a beat. This book is quite good.

It's pretty good. The heroines are all very strong. They basically don't have any knives or poison. It's a very harmonious book.

It's a very interesting and clear story with multiple female protagonists. There is no plot that is forced as soon as you meet, and the protagonist is neither invincible nor greasy. I suggest that future stories with multiple female protagonists be written in this way.

The plot is reasonable and the details are reasonable. Author, you must keep writing! ! ! !

This book is pretty good, it's one of the rare high-quality Star Iron fics.

Awesome, except that I don't like that clone very much, but the rest is basically gone. Full marks [like] [full] The book is a good book, but it's a bit shabby "04.24, Go to Tokyo Sky Tree with Sakura. The warmest place in the world is on top of the Sky Tree." "04.26, I went to Meiji Shrine with Sakura. Someone was holding a wedding there." "04.25, I went to Disneyland with Sakura. The haunted house is scary, but Sakura is there, so it's not scary." "Sakura is the best."

The author's writing is very good, and it's very comfortable to read. I'm just a little curious. The plot is not over yet. How will it be completed later?

It's very beautiful. I'm so happy with the double chef, but I wore it a little late. Did I just plan to write about Omphalos? [Crying]

It's great. I love watching it. I want to watch Hessein and Cerudra [Blowing Kisses]