Attack on Titan: The Deep Sea and the Sunlight

Bro has something to say, but the card is under review, so I'll keep the story short. I'm a person who doesn't like to read books and review them, but to be honest, this book is really good and worth recommending. The beginning is really good and the writing is very good. Question: Kony, Captain, Chizzy Wellman, Trost War, character background settings are very problematic. And then it's just my personal opinion. We will gladly accept any suggestions. Finally, if you have anything to say, if you have any questions, I apologize in advance. Finally, I wish the author prosperity and better writing. To be honest, I'm quite disappointed. The beginning was so amazing that I had high expectations for the rest. The result is obvious. Putting aside the problems we found the first time, I'm very confused about why you wrote Historia to be so crying and do the fair? When something happens, I cry and cry. Then I say that I have grown up and am no longer the same person as before. Then the next thing I cry about is again. What is the point of always writing like this? At least in my opinion, I cried more than 5 times. Do you think writing like this can resonate with readers? Or what? It is really useful if you write it once or twice. I won't say more. The book is very good. I also hope that the author will prosper and the subsequent works will be better. Finally, I want to mention that what I wrote at the beginning is like a state banquet 🤭. A little personal feeling after reading it 👍 Bye Then again, I still feel that my comments are not rigorous enough. It is rare to see such a good author, so I decided to tell you my feelings after reading it. It's okay to have a little bit of hope, and I will kill it later [laughter]

In my opinion, this is the best Giant fanfic I have ever read. The other reasons are not good reviews from me either because of the writing style, the lack of updates, or because there are many female protagonists. This one is really in line with my taste (contains spoilers below) [Salute][Salute][Salute] Speaking of the male protagonist being the first generation of monstrous sea bugs, will the child he and the queen give birth to be of double royal blood? 🤔 Thinking about it, the strongest person should be the male protagonist and the queen's heir who completely inherits the protagonist's deep sea giant and takes back the ancestor giant. I can't even imagine how strong it is. Plus the war hammer and the beast giant (flying state) ), oh my god 🤦 🤦 🤦. On land, you can use fortress, rush and balance to flexibly switch between the three states. You can use war hammer remotely, plus the flying of the giant beast. In the ocean, you can directly activate the male protagonist's second stage Leviathan form. [You taste it carefully] By the way, you can take back the super giant's ability. What else can you fight? [Punch attack] Even if the ancestor giant is given to another king's blood, without the ability to modify and control consciousness, even if the ancestor is given a bunch of Unsullied Titans and the other six giants (excluding the ancestor, warhammer, and super large), I can't imagine how exciting this scene will be [Adore][Adore][Adore] It was ruined. Starting from the battle to recapture Wall Maria, a Ymir (Grandma) chapter was added, and it was made into a double heroine. Later, she may have been scolded and asked for changes, which made the Marley Raid Battle fast-paced. The subsequent Battle on Pa Island was okay, but everyone died, Amir. Maria died, and the leader was chosen. After the Marais chapter, Marais was left with the chariot power. After the battle of Pa Island, only Levi, the leader, Mikasa, Eren, the protagonist, and the queen (because Jike died and Eren became the king's blood tool, I guess later), the male protagonist still wants to prevent the destruction of the world? Your wife is about to die, and you still look like you are righteous and help her die? Unbelievable

It's so good to watch, most of the early plot remains unchanged but has its own narrative, and the overall pace is much faster without being deliberately slow. Since the appearance of the female giant, the plot has changed a lot, and then the world line has been closed, which is more in line with the setting. The change was very natural, the characters have no OOC, and the protagonist's insertion is also very comfortable and natural. In fact, what I like most is that the writing style of this book is quite graphic, with few typos, and it is integrated into the anime style without any sense of deviation. The relationship between the protagonist and Historia is also very delicate, and this book will most likely have a single female protagonist. I can only say that it is quite good so far, the only drawback is that it is not enough to watch. To be honest, it's a bit man-machine

It's really well written and doesn't seem wordy on Tomato. When I see that kind of long description of the environment or the description of psychological action and appearance, I just run away. I've read four chapters of this, and it's really good. Author, tell the truth, do you use AI?

One of the best giant fanfics I have ever seen 😘 I like the way of narration, the description of the characters' psychology is also very delicate, and the writing style is also very good. But I would also like to make some suggestions, for reference only: you can appropriately reduce some of the rhetoric in the narrative. Although it is very beautiful, sometimes it makes people impatient to read on.

It is a great Jinju fanfic. Although the author did not choose to make major changes to the original plot framework in order to maintain the update speed and writing power, the writing power that gets rid of the brainless and cool writing is undoubtedly a huge plus point. The portrayal of the characters' emotions and battle scenes is very delicate. It is really a top-notch product among Jinju fanfics. 😳[Blowing a kiss] Of course, there are some shortcomings. For example, the plot advances too fast and is not sloppy at all. This book can only be a novella at best, and the number of words can only be made up of extra chapters. (On a side note, the extra chapters are very well written, especially the training of soldiers. It didn't even make me feel that it is an extra chapter. It is very coherent with the main text 🤦) In terms of characters, I can only say that I hope the author can write his own path and not be the same as the original work. The original work killed a lot of people and became the savior of the Marais team. It is not too outrageous (ﾉД`) Finally, I hope the author can give an ending. It must not be the ending of the original work, where the world is destroyed, the civil war on Pa Island, and Allen is sacrificed 😢😢😢 Author, you'd better think clearly about the consequences of writing BE's ending 😠😠😠

The writing is really good, the characters are drawn with great depth, and some of the supporting characters in the anime are fully displayed. After finishing the Giant anime a week ago, I looked for excellent fan fiction. I found a lot, but there were basically few to read. I really think this one can be ranked first. Many of the initial stories are based on the original work. It was nothing amazing, but many details were written well, so I continued reading. There were many small rewrites along the way. The most exciting rewrite later (perhaps my personal preference) was to give a huge choice to the regiment leader, but then quickly picked up almost all the important Marley officials, giants and military equipment. It was very satisfying. This is I didn't understand the logic that a line should have, but deliberately killed all the giant family members to trigger a new wave of hatred. In the end, I succeeded in changing the plot back to the original work's roar and ending. To be honest, I was a little disgusted at the time, but later when I started to move to various world lines through Ymir and modified the timeline, I could It is quite successful, and it also explains why the ending returns to the original world line. The different stories experienced in different world lines can continue to depict the giant supporting characters who are difficult to portray because of their opposites. Regardless of the subsequent development, this is really amazing to me. It is really a masterpiece. Come on, the author. I am looking forward to the next new story.

Hahahahaha, what a joke! You haven't changed anything, author!! In the end... You haven't changed anything!!!

The writing is very good. Although the pace is a bit slow and not in line with the mainstream of Tomato, the progress of writing and rhythm is really good, and the character creation is also quite good. It is rare to find such a beautiful giant fanfic. Come on, author, don't run away 😢

Although the writing is good, I have been following the plot so far. There is still a hole that has not been buried, which is why the protagonist doesn't know that Eren is Grisha's son. I thought that there would be major changes in the future of Forest of Giant Trees, but I didn't expect that the protagonist only changed into a complete giant once and was forced to offline by the plot. After that, he followed the original work.