Civilization Scam: I Faked the Entire Era of Cultivating Immortals

The author's imagination is outstanding, and he perfectly integrates alien black technology and immortal cultivation elements. The middle-aged otaku Rong Yi relies on alien nano-swarms to disguise himself as an immortal cultivator. This setting is novel and interesting, and it is eye-catching. The rhythm of the plot is quite well controlled. From the beginning of Rong Yi's creation of a global spiritual energy recovery to the subsequent spread of alien swarms and the establishment of a magnetic energy network among all mankind, every step is full of surprises and reversals. It is impossible to guess what will happen next. I maintain a high sense of anticipation during the reading process. Moreover, the various settings in the book are also very creative. Rong Yi modifies body organs to cast spells, and uses blood containing nano-swarms as a panacea. These unique settings make the entire process of cultivating immortality extremely novel. It is no longer the routine of traditional cultivating immortals, but is full of the charm of black technology. The character creation is also very successful. The image of Rong Yi, a middle-class otaku, is vivid and vivid. His psychological activities and behaviors are very interesting. As the plot develops, he gradually triggers a series of chain reactions from a person who just wants to pretend to be an immortal cultivator. Watching him face the roaring mountains and tsunami, and worry about "how to play Shattered Void", it really makes people laugh. Overall, this is a novel worth reading as it breaks the framework of traditional fairy tales.

Great idea! Very cool plot! The protagonist creates a path of cultivation, fabricates history, forges a family of cultivation, and takes power by recruiting disciples, while at the same time maintaining his status as the number one person in the world. "I am destiny." The so-called son of destiny is nothing but the direction of my will. A slight flaw is that the plot related to the heroine is relatively cliched, but it can be skipped without affecting the plot and fun! All in all, a great book and highly recommended!

This book is good, with reasonable logic. It uses alien high-dimensional technology and is packaged as a message of immortality to strengthen the protagonist. This route is still blank. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you. The key is that the author should not collapse in the middle and later stages of writing, and the outline must not go astray. In the end, it is the author who should work hard. He does not want a good book to be buried [Like]

The writing is okay, although the male protagonist is really a bit low-key, but the subject matter is my favorite. It's rare that I finished reading it, so let's continue.

Overall, it's pretty good. Different from ordinary immortality writings, this book is very logical and not an ordinary fantasy-yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ordinary fairy-seeking article. All the sources of immortality, spiritual power (magnetic field), spiritual roots (honeycomb), magical powers (functions of the honeycomb), etc. Are all traceable. In essence, it is a scientific and technological text. Those other ordinary articles on immortality are completely baseless and rely solely on the author's own imagination. If you ask what spiritual power is and where it comes from, you can't explain it clearly. It's boring to read too much. But the biggest criticism of this book is that it has a female protagonist. This kind of invincible immortality novel should not have a female protagonist, otherwise it will become a weakness. If you don't want the heroine to become a weak point, you have to improve the heroine's strength. But sometimes human nature is very complicated, and you can't guarantee whether the heroine will have any other thoughts. (I haven't finished reading it yet, and I will make up for it after reading it.) Adding elements of cultivating immortality to science and technology articles gives people a new look. Whether it is traditional science and technology articles or articles about cultivating immortals, it can be regarded as a kind of creativity, but such a good idea was ruined by the heroine. It was quite interesting to read at the beginning, but after more than thirty chapters, it inexplicably turned into a boring male-female competition, which was a complete failure. Why do you say it's boring? Because Maslow's hierarchy of needs was mentioned earlier (it's very logical up to this point), and the male protagonist no longer has any feelings for such worldly things, but in the end, a hero saving a beauty was staged. It seems that he doesn't care about the female protagonist, but in fact he still cares about the female protagonist. This logic does not make sense at all. One or two chapters were given to the heroine and it was almost over, but several chapters in a row were about the heroine's female rivalry, which made me lose the energy to continue reading. It felt like I had traveled to a female channel. It's not that I don't watch women's videos, but it's really physically uncomfortable to read female-channeled plots in male-channeled novels (it's the same as when reading female-channeled novels about fighting for hegemony and leading troops into war, with a strong sense of tearing apart). Moreover, the heroine of this book is not perfect. She is older, has a previous relationship, and is still so childish and vain. Logically speaking, the hero has no reason to love her at all, and is completely forcibly glued together. Judging from the performance of this book, the author's writing skills, logic, ideas, and creative ideas are all there. The shortcoming is that he can't write about the heroine, and he can't foreshadow the feelings. This heroine ruined half of the book (I haven't finished it yet, but the female competition plot gave me too much space. I resisted and read two chapters and skipped two chapters. It still deviated from the main line. After the female protagonist plot is over, it may get better, but I don't want to read it now). If there was no heroine throughout the book, this book would be given five stars; if the heroine was written better and at least had some emotional foreshadowing, making the reasons for the two people falling in love more logical and eliminating those unnecessary or boring female rivalry plots, it would be given four stars.

It's indeed a good behind-the-scenes masterpiece. The author's writing is good, but there are some scenes with the heroine in the early stage, but I skipped them directly and it didn't affect my viewing. Overall, it's worth a read. I quite like the author's imagination.

It's really good-looking. It should have a score of 9.3 Or above. [Laughs] It's so cool to see the protagonist single-handedly design and create an entire extraordinary system and stir up troubles around the world. The magical powers of the design are also explained in a scientific way. In addition, there are many people showing off in big scenes. It's so exciting that my heavenly spirit cap is flying. Hahaha. But one bad thing is that the battery life is too bad haha. It is obvious that the method is great, but the battery life is really short. I hope it can be improved in the future.

It's very well-written and very thoughtful, but the embarrassing part with the heroine at the beginning gave me goosebumps. It's not bad if I skip it.

Five-star praise [like][like][like] The opening chapter is very cliche. Diaosi is terminally ill and returns to her hometown to wait for death. She accidentally falls on an ancestral treasure (a large magnet) and breaks her head. Her blood fuses, and the terminal illness heals itself without treatment. He figured out the secret method of using the baby for external use and made his first pot of gold by treating the rich. These are all cliche, what is unusual is the subsequent development. The male protagonist did not become a miracle doctor. Because he developed more functions, he aspired to become a living immortal or even a contemporary Taoist ancestor. At first, he had to trick the wealthy family into working for him, and secretly attracted the powerful families to join him. Slowly, there are seven or eight disciples and elders who have left the sect [laughing and crying] Later, more magical powers were developed based on scientific principles. Private laboratories created classic monsters such as Dragon King, Shrimp Soldier, Qingqiu Fox, etc., And directed and performed the drama of "revival of spiritual energy and return of monster gods" domestically and even around the world. The relationship between the disciples of the sect is well described. Even if the immortal touches the top and is in awe of the master, they have families behind them and they know that there is a competitive relationship between them. There is cooperation and intrigue, but with the male protagonist pretending to be a ghost and playing the role of a descendant of an ancient cultivating family plus his strength, it is generally controllable. From an ordinary person to a living immortal, returning to his hometown in splendid clothes, slapping snobbish relatives and friends in the face, pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, having an epiphany after great joy and great sorrow, and other scenes that are popular with the public were not arranged for the male protagonist, but were given to his disciples. [Cool]

I think a heroine with this kind of real personality is quite good, one who loves to take advantage, is vain, and has scheming ideas. She is better than the same cloned Virgin heroine who represents love and justice. The male protagonist is also a cheat that comes from the sky. If it is cheaper and has no emotional basis, and is just a group of people who are just waiting for a price, will it really be good as a reader? I think it is a better choice to make up for the regrets of the past and find the people who once had feelings for each other and inspired me in the most innocent times.

Awesome, one of the two most awesome novels I have read on the Tomato platform. The other one is about a buddy who gets information every day and likes to dig his toes into his leather shoes. As long as you don't write about nonsense, I think it's a good book.

I have finished reading the latest chapter and left a comment. I didn't want to say it at first, but when I saw that this book had too many negative reviews and the score was too low, I felt that it would be more than worth the gain if I didn't say that the author wanted to give up. I need to give it a little more confidence. This book has both good and bad points. The bad reviews are basically focused on the heroine. After all, the protagonist is a 40-year-old otaku before she has a golden finger. The author wants to match the heroine Bai Yueguang, who is considerate and in her 30s. She has a first love who has been in love for many years and is not perfect and is criticized by many people. The author has been criticized for being autistic, but I think it is very reasonable. If it were a 20-year-old, or a 30-year-old beauty who has been waiting for the male lead, it would be my turn to criticize her for being unreasonable. What kind of pillow can dream like this? I don't think this is a poisonous point, but there are other problems. The setting of the story is that the male protagonist obtains black-tech nano-robots and the like, and deceives the world by transforming the human body to simulate immortality. I give full marks for the creativity, but the settings are sometimes very cumbersome. Every individual who spreads nanobots has to pull out his personal panel and read through the settings whenever a new ability appears. I hope the author can be more concise, it's too verbose. The psychological descriptions of the male and female protagonists are relatively smooth, while other characters are a bit simple and rough. Of course, these are just small details, and the flaws cannot be concealed. Logically speaking, the general direction is fine, but I can't see that the protagonist is serious about keeping secrets. He may not be able to bear the consequences of being exposed. At this stage, he cannot bear the hot weapon. However, keeping secrets basically depends on the consciousness of the supporting characters. They are afraid of the non-existent immortal cultivating family and look forward to immortality. Aren't they afraid of encountering a stubborn person and handing over the protagonist's information to the state? These details are just my complaints and will not affect the reading experience. After talking about these shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The creativity is really good, the writing is at the pass level, and occasionally there is a bit too much rhetoric, especially when describing the appearance of female characters. The story is interesting and there are few logical flaws. I hope the author will continue to work hard. It's finished today. I've been reading it for several months and finally it's finished. There are still a lot of holes that haven't been filled in, but I'm pretty satisfied with it, leaving a lot of room for imagination. The outcome of the fight between the two Eika, whether Sakura Onmyoji betrayed Yamata-no-Orochi, the outcome of the war between the Holy Court and the Dark Council, the current status of the major cultivators in the country, what the empress did, what the world has become, where ordinary people go, and the protagonist's exploration of immortality. Many things are not explained clearly, even if they are left blank, it is a pity. Looking forward to the author's next work, even if there are many regrets, it is still an excellent reading experience. Recommended for those who haven't seen it.

It's good to read. The only bad thing about this book is the heroine. The others are the best. There are too few novels of the same type. I can't stand other similar writing styles and ideas. Moreover, the bad point only appears in that small amount of space. I can tolerate it and get over it. I recommend reading it. It's really good-looking. Each character is very unique. The creation of monsters and the use of abilities, and the creation of multiple training systems. What I like the most is the kind of aloof immortal cultivators. Ordinary people and even other political powers are sincerely afraid of these immortal cultivators. It's as if they are no longer a species, but they also long to be like them. It's really cool to be like them. Many behind-the-scenes writings about spiritual energy recovery have no sense of substitution at all. They are like children.

There are not many high-quality ones out there. The 13-year-old bookworm thinks it is very good. There are no major flaws or any logical ambiguity. What everyone thinks may not be good is the background of the protagonist and heroine, which has caused various problems. Overall, it's very good, but it's even more rare on tomatoes. Come on, update more, polish it more, and it's expected to have an impact.

I saw that the heroine couldn't stand it, so I wanted to give it two stars, but this novel is actually very well written, so I'll give it five stars. After all, it's not possible to ask for too much from a free novel. There needs to be a bit of realism. Most people in online novels come to read cool novels. The realism they pursue is biased towards dealing with people. Reality is real enough. What everyone pursues is to fight back when being beaten, rather than swallowing their anger. What they pursue is the beauty that is not yet available in reality. I didn't say "Power Generation for Love", but you still have to think carefully about how to make a living from this. I hope the author can write more exciting books in the next book, keep up the good work.

The plot is smooth, the logic is reasonable, the imagination is very good, and the characters are deeply portrayed. Except for the heroine's shortcomings, it is a fairy tale.

After reading it for so long, I forgot to comment [face covering] The logic of this book is clear, but there is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, which makes the content a bit boring. But as long as you get through it, everything will be fine. It's really good to read. There is just one poisonous point, the heroine is not a virgin. I have read many behind-the-scenes articles. This book can be said to have a lot of logic and reasonable design. Although some of them may not be understandable, it can be said that it is really good. Finally, there is this book. The results are indeed not good, too low, but maybe this is another kind of protection [Thinking][Thinking]

After reading only fifteen chapters, the level of writing, the logic, the imagination, and the plot are advanced layer by layer. As a bookworm of 40 years, I personally think it can definitely be ranked in the top ten. It is amazing and awesome [Like] I am now fifty-three. At that time, our primary school was only five years old and we were in the first grade of junior high school. When I was thirteen years old, there was a library in town. My library card number was 0010. I was the tenth person to apply for a library card. From then on, I fell into the trap and got out of control. I have only read books for forty years. [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Most of the books I read, I only read the beginning to know the end, which is no fun at all. This author is very kind, I can't keep up with the big guys' imagination, and the author's writing is magnificent and powerful👍🏻

It's a very good novel, with slight poisonous points and wordiness, and it feels like a great master in the early stage (not a good review), but I am also an old bookworm who has been reading for more than ten years. The setting and story are still original and have their own core. It is quite difficult in this era where templates are everywhere. Come on.

Invincible Explosion is beautiful, logical and very interesting. And it's a lot more fun. And it's not the cliché cool thing, the point is to have brains. The only drawback is that I saw it too early, only about 100 chapters.

The writing is quite good. It would be better if there is no heroine. Just ignore the poisonous point of the heroine. There are only a few pictures. The five points are indeed the logic of the work itself. The writing is wonderful and the author is of high level. Even if there is a poisonous point, it cannot cover up the shining point of this book. I give five points for encouragement. I hope the author can finish this book.

It was so fun to watch, absolutely praise it. Secondly, it doesn't really matter that the negative reviews say that the heroine has an ex-boyfriend or something. This so-called heroine is the person the hero had a crush on when they were ordinary humans. After "becoming an immortal", her thoughts are clear and her wishes are fulfilled.

When I was cultivating immortality, I read a lot of science fiction books, and I also read countless books, but this is really my first time with this subject. You could say it is a combination of cultivating immortality and science fiction, but he is not either. I really don't know how to classify it. But that's not important. What's important is that this book is really good to read. The main reasons are as follows: 1. The subject matter is novel enough and the author's imagination is big enough. 2. The author's description of the scene and the character's mentality are quite penetrating. There are many descriptions in this book that made me involuntarily have a sense of the picture, which is very clear.

A hardcore cultivation book, the author is great, the data is very detailed, the plot is fascinating, the heroine has some flaws, but they can be ignored, five stars The more I write, the more I am drawn to it, and I am losing my composure!

It's so good, I feel like it's a rare and exciting novel that Tomato has seen.

The mastermind behind the scenes is a solitary being, and the alien technology is covered in the skin of a cultivator. The overall concept and setting are quite good. It's just that the follow-up development may not be easy to write. The problem with the Solo Immortal Invincible style is that there is only one person with extraordinary power. Without enemies, there is no sense of suspense and tension. The readers have insufficient expectations and it is difficult to write well. Because the protagonist of the Solitaire style has too much "cause and effect" and always has to calculate everything and does not have a high degree of freedom during the fight. Readers will also pursue "crushing the game" while feeling that the fight is not exciting without an opponent. So based on my experience in reading other novels of the same type, the protagonist can choose to remain invisible behind the scenes, make fewer appearances, and only improve his character at the climax, which is short-lived. Just like the most beautiful scene of the Giant of Light in Los Angeles so far, the main scenes should be given to the supporting characters first. It is best to design some partially controlled villains (the source of power is controlled, but the protagonist should not control everything, one does not have the energy, and the other is the villain's evil deeds are none of the protagonist's business), and compete with the supporting characters from the justice camp. , Make the scene bigger and write about the impact on the real world. It can even be a story about people with deep hatred and deep hatred who get the opportunities randomly distributed by the protagonist and constantly escalate to cause big events, or it can be a story about an ordinary supporting character acting as an investigator or detective to explore supernatural phenomena and discover the indescribable mastermind behind the scenes. That would be more interesting. I know that you, the author, are very good at setting, but please don't write the setting into the article. If you explain everything clearly, readers will have no room for exploration, secondary settings, and imagination, and the quality of the protagonist and other characters will be greatly reduced.

It is rare to find logical writing in behind-the-scenes stories, and the plot is concise and not too greasy. As for the heroine, I think she is a normal human being, much better than those messy, cute lolita, cold and charming inhuman creatures. Especially some battles and government responses are not particularly good, but they are still very exciting.

I've read a lot of behind-the-scenes articles on group portraits so far, and this one is really okay. It's a little unfamiliar in the early stages, but it gets better and better later on.

It's good-looking, and it's in line with the setting of artificially created conditions for cultivating immortality that I imagined. The author is awesome.

The author should really learn how to write about death, whether it is anxiety or fear of death. This is not the reason why we refuse to die. The brilliance of human nature lies precisely in our fear of death, but there are things more worthy of allowing us to welcome death calmly. The hymn of mankind is the hymn of courage. How to write about a person's death is the real beginning of a novel. In fact, the author can try to let the people in the novel break away from the program set by the protagonist when they are really facing a desperate situation, and use their human hearts to find a way out. The current problem with this novel is that the protagonist is too smooth-running and no one can shake his emotions. As a result, many things ended in a small fuss. I don't deny the strength of the protagonist, but it's not just strength that can bring emotional resonance to readers. Of course, I'm just talking about my thoughts. The author has his own thoughts. This novel is quite qualified as a refreshing read, with wide-open imagination and clear logic. It can be seen that the author is serious about writing, but I can see the potential of this book. Maybe the author can think more after seeing my nagging. I hope the author writes better and better. (PS: I recommend the author to read Jojo. The description of the ripple breathing method is very interesting and can be added to the setting of the novel. At the same time, the fate of the Zebelin family is also worth learning from. Please forgive me if I am offended.)