HP: When I Become Steve Evans

The writing is very good, the love line is very sweet, I really like the description of the love line, the heroine is also very cute, the talent is also good, it is great, and she also firmly stands on Snape's position, a carefree and warm-hearted wooden eagle. There are some fragments that are not well connected. It feels like each chapter is composed of small fragments, and English will appear from time to time. Although I can understand it, it is actually very tiring and not smooth. It will be much better if the English is reduced later.

The main plot is daily life. In the early stage, Sif's descriptions are not as much as those of Predator. The relationship is just a matter of time. Maybe it doesn't feel natural because there is not much ink. After falling in love, there are more interactions, which is quite sweet (but the key moments are omitted, damn it) The "Sacrifice for Love" part was obviously quite touching, but Peeves made him laugh to death. Every time Steve plays Dumbledore it's so hilarious. There seems to be no textual content in the previous daily dialogue, but it always mixes Chinese and English, which makes it awkward to read. In addition, after watching the extra episode, I still don't understand the relationship between Liz and Steve. I quite like how the two of them wore masks and beat up predators several times, hahaha

Very nice! I'm also catching up on the serialization! The heroine is a very cute baby! Totally on the SS side, still a damn predator~~

At the beginning, maybe because few people read it, the author just wrote whatever came to his mind. It felt a bit like a scattered diary. The plot was piece by piece. Later, it gradually became coherent, and some holes were filled in. It gradually became smoother and better looking. I accepted the previous fragments and even the abrupt ending of the plot at times. So those who can accept it can just endure it and continue reading.

Yes, the heroine has a light sense of humor [snickering], but the disadvantage is that there are often short English sentences that are not translated, and you need to translate them again by yourself, which is very unfriendly for listening to books.

Wuwuwuwuwu, why is it so beautiful? [Crying] Come and see it! ! ! A super treasure and surprise, the writing is good. The heroine is super strong and has a very cute personality. She is really the darling of Hogwarts. The relationship between Steph and Seaver is particularly good. The attraction and ambiguity between each other are described in a natural and real way. Steve Seaver must live happily ever after! The pull with Sirius was also amazing, I ate like crazy [blowing kisses][blowing kisses][blowing kisses] After reading the extra story, it seems like there is a complete story line, but there are still some blank spaces. Why is the score so low? It should be above 9 points here! [Almost crying]

To Steph, the cutest, most honest and most unyielding person, who fell in love with the vivid characters in the book because of the author's love.

It's very beautiful, the writing is very good, and there are so few people. The characters in the introduction are not very consistent with the ones in the article. Snape is tough on the outside and has a vicious tongue but the heroine is indeed nonsensical. Occasionally, some ideas are cute and funny. They are a sweet couple who get along in a supernatural and harmonious way. The whole style of the story is actually very nonsensical and jumpy, just like writing a diary. The next chapter will be another chapter, which is very abrupt, leaving a lot of pitfalls with no explanation. The plot setting is very novel and rich. The male and female protagonists directly fight against Voldemort, jump to another time and space, and come back 12 years later. The processing is quite clever, but sometimes it is too jumpy.

I really love the heroine regardless of her character or ability. Although some parts feel incoherent, like fragments of life, the English language is really unique but not very friendly for listening to the book, but overall it is a very good book.

Very good, at least this is a reasonably written article that can be taught! It's just that the heroine's personality in the early stage was a bit like a robot and a bit human-machine [laughing and crying], she gave me the feeling that she didn't fit well with Ravenclaw [laughing]

It's really beautiful. I don't know why the score is so low. It's very sweet. I can read it. I kept reading the whole book hahahahahaha. The heroine gave me a silly feeling haha, but it's very good with SS.

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When running in a fast-paced life, you might as well slow down and discover and enjoy the comfort hidden in the fragmented space.

Although the first chapters are very jumpy and can easily break your mood, they get better and better later on. If you can accept this kind of jumping writing style, don't miss this book.

You can watch it! The plot is a bit confusing but the characters are well drawn.

Emotions are portrayed very well

Come on author, it's great

Beautiful, love watching it! Will keep watching!

It looks good, I still want to see it!

What's good is pro-era

Very pretty hahahaha

Such a good article, if I don't read it for a day I'll think about it like crazy.

It's obviously a very interesting daily article, but why doesn't anyone read it?

I think it's okay to teach happiness~[laugh][laugh][laugh] Even though it's a bit OOC, I don't care, I just want to read sweet articles~[laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's so well written, so beautiful and beautiful.

The author's writing is fragrant and has received good reviews. Don't stop updating, I really like watching Predators~

The heroine is really cute hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Author [cover face]

It's a very good fanfic. It may cause a little confusion when you read it, but I like the characters' personalities.

My second favorite article! ! ! ! ! Nothing to say about thinking and writing! !