Arknights: Thirteen from the Sui Family Want to Live a Good Life

I have been reading the novel for a long time, and suddenly I want to write one myself, but I still know what level I am, so I write a fanfic, and I hope everyone can criticize it lightly. I like the Sui family very much, so I want to write a novel like this, but to be honest, because it is too far away from the main story, many things are difficult to find, so if there are any mistakes, I hope everyone can point them out. Lin, who carried power and memory from the collapsed world, traveled to the land of Terra and became Sui Shisan. He taught the way of swordsmanship to the still-early Great Yan world and became the pioneer of swordsmanship in later generations. After thousands of years, he is still walking in the Great Flame, having killed rebels, destroyed evil spirits, drank good wine, and written good poems. Lin thought that he would never get tired of living like this with his brothers and sisters for the rest of his life. However, facing the existence of Sui, he had to plan the world in advance and find a way out for his brothers and sisters. So that day, Dayan lost one person, one bottle of wine, and only one sword that had not been drawn out. At the same time, a red Liboli appeared in Ursus with wounds all over his body. And a few years later, when he once again set foot on the land of Great Yan, he chose to confront the familiar girls in the past. "You are next, Nian!"