Spirit Cage: Bai Yuekui, Don't Do This

It's quite interesting, but the author keeps making typos. It's Bai Yuekui and Longgu Village, not Bai Yuekui and Longhu Village [smile]

This novel is actually not as bad as the reviews say. It is definitely ok with a score of 7 or above. Penny did not imagine being poisoned. I can only say that the setting is like this. Clones also have memories and are not puppets. Moreover, Penny is also the main protagonist and did not resurrect Downey. The author may just want to resurrect the dead but not puppets. However, everyone has the same problem, which is dog licking. I'm not talking about the kind of good old guy who has no intention to tolerate harm from others, but the kind of licking dog who blindly gives without asking for anything in return. For the characters he likes, the protagonist basically gives them away unconditionally. He may be the protagonist in the game world and doesn't care what the other person gives in return, as long as he is happy. There is actually no problem with this. The key problem is that according to the author's description, the anime characters really have no idea of ​​repaying the protagonist, and accept various gifts from the protagonist with peace of mind. This is what makes readers unhappy. In reality, almost no one accepts the model of blindly giving. Everyone always hopes that anime characters also have snacks, and try their best to repay the protagonist in both directions, but the author failed to do this, at least the other characters he described did not think about this. This is the real reason that makes readers feel sick. After readers take on the role of the protagonist, they will instinctively feel aggrieved and unfair. So by calling the protagonist a dog-licker and a virgin, what everyone actually wants to express is that efforts should be rewarded, especially if the other party is a favorite anime character, and they should have the mentality and behavior to repay kindness. The author ignores this kind of character interaction, which not only makes readers feel frustrated when they assume the role of the protagonist, but also makes readers feel disgusted with the anime characters they already like. This is what the author particularly needs to understand and change.

The front is more poisonous. Mainly funny. A bit like Junior Wa. If you have that kind of habit, you can also look ahead. Later, the protagonist becomes a human being. He has an ambition similar to that of Ge Xiaolun. It feels better. Especially what happened after the lighthouse, and what happened in my childhood. The overall plot is not affected. After all, the fandom must be based on Linglong. Very pretty

It's still okay to write

Good health is always good

Start with a dog, infinite evolution and Ness

The plot content is quite interesting

The author's ability is still good, and it's worth reading. Please update quickly. You must know that in a fast-paced app like Tomato, if the update is slow, you will be drowned in endless fast food articles [laughing]

Not bad, worth a look

So cool, hahahaha

Generally speaking, I don't recommend it, but it's very nice.