Traveled through Naruto and became Hinata Hanabi.
He was killed by the storyline when he opened his eyes, lost to Hinata, and was marked with the "Caged Bird" curse mark of shame and restraint by the elders!
I thought it was the beginning of hell, but I didn't expect that the bloodline of Hamura Otsutsuki, who had been sleeping for thousands of years, was accidentally activated!
…
Super long-distance sniping!
Spiritual body head-lowering technique!
Death is parasitic!
Tidal Storm Disintegration!
…
From a member of the branch family who was engraved as a "caged bird", to the 'Tsuki no Princess' who controls the moon and overlooks the ninja world.
Hanabi just smiled softly: "Now, it's up to me to draw a 'cage' for this world."
Reader comments
The title of the book should be changed. Only the elders of Hinata were killed, not the entire clan was wiped out.
It's good. The reincarnation eye was opened in the first few chapters, but, after all, he is still a child. He doesn't have that much chakra, so many people think that he will be invincible when his eyes are opened. I often make an analogy, can putting the reincarnation eye in Nagato's eye socket have the same effect as putting it in Kakashi's eye socket? As long as Kakashi releases a chakra that is so powerful that his power will be exhausted, if you ask him to use the Rinnegan and release an Earth Explosion Star, can he release it? Can't let go! Don't have that ability! Therefore, the Tenseigan will definitely not be able to exert the effect of Toneri on the protagonist now. She is only a teenager and does not have that much chakra at all.
Also, the Tenseigan should have exclusive pupil techniques like those of Kusei, Kamui, Amaterasu, and Tsukuyomi.
Nothing poisonous. There is no mechanical copying of the plot, and it is not the kind of novel that completely follows Naruto's plot. The author also has his own innovations without being outrageous. The emotional line is weak but it gives me a subtle feeling that is more beautiful than the battle. The early stages of the book are very well described, and there is a little bit of a sense of satisfaction in watching the protagonist gradually become stronger as you follow the series. The protagonist is strong but not very strong, and the description of the battles has some ups and downs in terms of narrative. I wonder if someone in the middle said that the author reduced his combat power to the mid-level immortal mode and turned on the invincible mode. It feels a little too mundane to always be running around and making plays. But this is also a common problem in fan fiction. Once the protagonist becomes stronger and clears out the monsters, there is nothing to write about, and then all you have to do is wait for the BOSS to appear. (In terms of combat power, I don't think it's serious. It's much better than those turtles that dare not fight even when they get up.)
Overall, it's not bad. It's much better than those novels that only rely on knowing the plot in advance, only running with the group, not daring to intervene in the plot, and pretending to be x in the beginning and then just for fun.
As far as I am concerned, in the early stage, it was suspected that the protagonist's combat performance was somewhat suppressed, but it was okay.
The most criticized thing in the comment section is the plot where the protagonist Sora has the reincarnation eye, but it is similar to Roadside Ichijo. Judging from what the author wants to express, the protagonist is limited by his age and cannot use the full performance of his eyes.
However, it got better after the chapters of Dragon Vein Cultivation, and the performance returned to its proper level. At least as of the 7.22 Update, there is no problem. (As for the ability of the protagonist's eyes, the author has not yet given a relatively complete description, and hopes to write one as soon as possible)
In summary, a score between 3.5-4 Stars is given, rounded up as encouragement.
This fanfic is really a high-quality one among fanfics. It has its own ideas and doesn't follow the main plot. The setting is reasonable and the style of acting is fine. It's really good.
Not bad, but defecting was too hasty.
It's a very satisfying and substantial text... Although it may be a bit abrupt, I only commented on it after reading Chapter 11, but I like it very much and I'm very happy. I feel like my book reviews are a bit redundant like Japanese (laughs)
Coordinates Chapter 82, I will probably not stay with you until the end. The rating remains unchanged. I have always liked the writing style. My favorite part is before leaving Konoha. This is the first regret. In addition, there are two regrets...
First, I subconsciously thought it was Hanabi and Hinata's pseudo-orthopedics, although the author might not like this idea because of the cover of the book.
Second, the author arranges for the protagonist to be chaotic and neutral, and has his own views on the Uchiha brothers. The discussion of things may be too direct and simple, and the attitude towards worldly affairs is too wanton, making this story too much like a fairy tale. It is an impeccable person's interpretation of irrefutable truth, showing the innocence and indifference of a child. Another example is Kankuro's Ling Chi and his connivance with Koso. In words, the words are as follows. However, this may be the charm of this book.
On the other hand -
Being born in this world, and having a certain concept in the world, other than running away and ignoring it - it is nothing more than lingering in the direction of the collapse of the world.
Every world will collapse - everyone's will, this is "faith". Human beings suffer from the short life, and they can only live in this way to masturbate, just shouting about "the rules of the world"... So... You and I are very similar. But this resemblance is an illusion, and true recognition is everything that crushes you.
The author's soul returns...
𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌
The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles...
𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫
The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back...
𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠
The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory...
𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫
The soul is back... The soul is back...
𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌
Is Hanabi really not possessed by Hanabi?
Why is the rating so low? Don't you like this version of fireworks?
Good-looking, very good-looking. The writing style of this book feels more delicate, unlike those of running accounts.
The writing is to my liking.
I could have scored more than 9 points, but I made a bad move in every corner.
Very well written
I want to eat my sisters [give my heart]
Is the protagonist single or Lily? Can the author reply to me after receiving it? I beg the author.
Very good, but not much written.
Good luck, the cover is also good [sending heartfelt wishes]
Come back to life woo woo woo
It's beautiful and gives me a different feeling from other Naruto fan fiction.
It's very interesting. Although some words are redundant, the plot is really awesome.
Why is it only 6.7? I feel like I should start with at least 8 points.
The emotional line is a bit weak, I wish the insoles were tighter, and I still have the sense of curiosity of a slug with a human face. Do you understand [Adoration][Adoration]
The protagonist made fireworks look like fireworks, it was so much fun
After reading other people's comments, this reminded me [laughing evilly]
The only drawback is that the combat power is too confusing and often suppresses the protagonist. The rest are minor problems.
So far, the writing is very good and worth reading.
The plot is good, but the writing still needs to be settled, or the wording is not appropriate, which makes it feel fragmented when watching it. But the cover is pretty good, it reminds me
Tomato's high-quality novel, incompetent father, cowardly sister, strong and hard-working me to defeat the ninja world
Nice looking,
It looks good when held up, the fireworks are cute,
Very good character
The quality is very high. It should be rated 9 or above in the future. So far, there are no big problems. It has few poisonous points, a fast pace, strong character creation, and the writing is cool.
The title of the book should be changed. Only the elders of Hinata were killed, not the entire clan was wiped out.
It's good. The reincarnation eye was opened in the first few chapters, but, after all, he is still a child. He doesn't have that much chakra, so many people think that he will be invincible when his eyes are opened. I often make an analogy, can putting the reincarnation eye in Nagato's eye socket have the same effect as putting it in Kakashi's eye socket? As long as Kakashi releases a chakra that is so powerful that his power will be exhausted, if you ask him to use the Rinnegan and release an Earth Explosion Star, can he release it? Can't let go! Don't have that ability! Therefore, the Tenseigan will definitely not be able to exert the effect of Toneri on the protagonist now. She is only a teenager and does not have that much chakra at all. Also, the Tenseigan should have exclusive pupil techniques like those of Kusei, Kamui, Amaterasu, and Tsukuyomi.
Nothing poisonous. There is no mechanical copying of the plot, and it is not the kind of novel that completely follows Naruto's plot. The author also has his own innovations without being outrageous. The emotional line is weak but it gives me a subtle feeling that is more beautiful than the battle. The early stages of the book are very well described, and there is a little bit of a sense of satisfaction in watching the protagonist gradually become stronger as you follow the series. The protagonist is strong but not very strong, and the description of the battles has some ups and downs in terms of narrative. I wonder if someone in the middle said that the author reduced his combat power to the mid-level immortal mode and turned on the invincible mode. It feels a little too mundane to always be running around and making plays. But this is also a common problem in fan fiction. Once the protagonist becomes stronger and clears out the monsters, there is nothing to write about, and then all you have to do is wait for the BOSS to appear. (In terms of combat power, I don't think it's serious. It's much better than those turtles that dare not fight even when they get up.) Overall, it's not bad. It's much better than those novels that only rely on knowing the plot in advance, only running with the group, not daring to intervene in the plot, and pretending to be x in the beginning and then just for fun.
As far as I am concerned, in the early stage, it was suspected that the protagonist's combat performance was somewhat suppressed, but it was okay. The most criticized thing in the comment section is the plot where the protagonist Sora has the reincarnation eye, but it is similar to Roadside Ichijo. Judging from what the author wants to express, the protagonist is limited by his age and cannot use the full performance of his eyes. However, it got better after the chapters of Dragon Vein Cultivation, and the performance returned to its proper level. At least as of the 7.22 Update, there is no problem. (As for the ability of the protagonist's eyes, the author has not yet given a relatively complete description, and hopes to write one as soon as possible) In summary, a score between 3.5-4 Stars is given, rounded up as encouragement.
This fanfic is really a high-quality one among fanfics. It has its own ideas and doesn't follow the main plot. The setting is reasonable and the style of acting is fine. It's really good.
Not bad, but defecting was too hasty.
It's a very satisfying and substantial text... Although it may be a bit abrupt, I only commented on it after reading Chapter 11, but I like it very much and I'm very happy. I feel like my book reviews are a bit redundant like Japanese (laughs) Coordinates Chapter 82, I will probably not stay with you until the end. The rating remains unchanged. I have always liked the writing style. My favorite part is before leaving Konoha. This is the first regret. In addition, there are two regrets... First, I subconsciously thought it was Hanabi and Hinata's pseudo-orthopedics, although the author might not like this idea because of the cover of the book. Second, the author arranges for the protagonist to be chaotic and neutral, and has his own views on the Uchiha brothers. The discussion of things may be too direct and simple, and the attitude towards worldly affairs is too wanton, making this story too much like a fairy tale. It is an impeccable person's interpretation of irrefutable truth, showing the innocence and indifference of a child. Another example is Kankuro's Ling Chi and his connivance with Koso. In words, the words are as follows. However, this may be the charm of this book. On the other hand - Being born in this world, and having a certain concept in the world, other than running away and ignoring it - it is nothing more than lingering in the direction of the collapse of the world. Every world will collapse - everyone's will, this is "faith". Human beings suffer from the short life, and they can only live in this way to masturbate, just shouting about "the rules of the world"... So... You and I are very similar. But this resemblance is an illusion, and true recognition is everything that crushes you.
The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌
Is Hanabi really not possessed by Hanabi? Why is the rating so low? Don't you like this version of fireworks?
Good-looking, very good-looking. The writing style of this book feels more delicate, unlike those of running accounts.
The writing is to my liking. I could have scored more than 9 points, but I made a bad move in every corner.
Very well written I want to eat my sisters [give my heart]
Is the protagonist single or Lily? Can the author reply to me after receiving it? I beg the author.
Very good, but not much written.
Good luck, the cover is also good [sending heartfelt wishes]
Come back to life woo woo woo
It's beautiful and gives me a different feeling from other Naruto fan fiction.
It's very interesting. Although some words are redundant, the plot is really awesome.
Why is it only 6.7? I feel like I should start with at least 8 points.
The emotional line is a bit weak, I wish the insoles were tighter, and I still have the sense of curiosity of a slug with a human face. Do you understand [Adoration][Adoration]
The protagonist made fireworks look like fireworks, it was so much fun After reading other people's comments, this reminded me [laughing evilly]
The only drawback is that the combat power is too confusing and often suppresses the protagonist. The rest are minor problems.
So far, the writing is very good and worth reading.
The plot is good, but the writing still needs to be settled, or the wording is not appropriate, which makes it feel fragmented when watching it. But the cover is pretty good, it reminds me
Tomato's high-quality novel, incompetent father, cowardly sister, strong and hard-working me to defeat the ninja world
Nice looking, It looks good when held up, the fireworks are cute, Very good character
The quality is very high. It should be rated 9 or above in the future. So far, there are no big problems. It has few poisonous points, a fast pace, strong character creation, and the writing is cool.
Hinata Hanabi? Fireworks! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
It's a bit overwhelming
"It's beautiful, very beautiful."