Sheng Dai: Crimson Pearl Meets the Stone

The plot is reasonable, the characters are close to the original work, and the story development is clear. It is a good Shengdai novel. The part where Zijuan gets carsick while riding on Qiong Douyun is particularly vivid. I hope the author can give Zhongshan Wolf a few more chapters to make trouble, and don't get your box lunch too early!

The writing style is very good, the artistic conception is very touching, the plot direction is also very reasonable, very interesting, and consistent with the original work. At least I think the image of Brother Monkey is very good. Except for the perpetrators, the characters who were not destined to die well have all had relatively happy endings. All in all, it's very, very beautiful! Love watching it too! Love watching! This is the first Sundai fanfic I've read, and I've already fallen in love with reading this one. As far as I'm concerned, Daiyu definitely recognized the wrong stone! For such a good person, how could his benefactor be a childish young man who spends all his time messing around with women and learning nothing? Look at how considerate, handsome and warm our little monkey is! How could the envoy of Lao Shizi and Shenying compare! The author teacher writes very well, come on! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Daiyu should have been happy

This is the first Shengdai cp novel I have read. I didn't expect that one day I would actually fall in love with the love between Sun Wukong and Lin Daiyu. The plot is quite full, but the flaw is that the ending is a bit rushed. I also want to see more of the sweet daily life between the Monkey King and Daiyu, and the previous Volume 2 is mainly about the plot rather than the emotional line. It mainly talks about how Daiyu, after her rebirth, with the help of the Great Sage, makes the good deeds of the Jia family be rewarded with good and evil, so that all the sisters have their own better endings, and at the same time, the little people who are so stubborn are given the punishment they deserve. In her previous life, Daiyu was a crimson jelly grass. When she was about to wither at the gate of Tushita Palace, she was found by the Great Sage and transplanted to the Imperial Garden. She took good care of her and gave her nectar. The two stayed together in heaven for a while until the Great Sage made trouble in the Heavenly Palace and was suppressed for 500 years. During this period, the celestial grass mistakenly recognized Baoyu's previous life Shenying's attendant as a benefactor and came down to earth to repay the favor with tears. What follows is the direction of the original work. Because of the Great Sage, Daiyu was reborn, and the Great Sage extended the lifespan of Daiyu's parents and accompanied Daiyu to grow up. The Lin family has always been harmonious and happy. Lin Ruhai eventually became the Minister of the Ministry of War, which was completely different from the final Jia family. Later, the Great Sage helped Daiyu recover her past life memories, taught her immortal magic, and helped her rectify the Jia family. Daiyu finally no longer recognized her wrong benefactor, and she and the Great Sage were in love with each other, and the lovers finally got married. The original Jia Baoyu ended up alone, impoverished, foolish all his life, dreaming about Daiyu, and finally finally let go. Because of Daiyu, the fate of many people was changed, including the Sanchun sisters, Wang Xifeng, Xue Baochai, Xiangling, Qingwen, Sheyue, Zijuan, Xueyan, etc. Of course, the bad guys also received the punishment they deserve. I gave 4 stars because I didn't watch enough of Sundae Candy. It was too unsatisfying. I should have written more sweet extras.

With good writing and sincere emotions, I will list you as my favorite (⑉°з°)-♡

I see that there is nothing dissatisfied so far, it is very restored to the original work, and it really opened my mind from another perspective: after all, the book Dream of Red Mansions came into being because Daiyu returned tears, including Daiyu's later ending because Jia Baoyu was kind to her in her previous life, so she returned his tears and died in the end. The author kills two birds with one stone directly from the root of the problem - changing the person to whom Daiyu repays her kindness, that is, changing the person who was kind to Daiyu in the first place. This not only breaks Baodai's bad fate, but also logically shapes Shengdai's past life fate and current entanglements. This stroke is really beautiful and can be called the finishing touch. It is a unique writing idea among the several articles I have read about Shengdai. It's just that Daiyu is a little bit OOC, but there are no other problems. The writing style is also very good, smooth and natural, beautiful and vivid, thumbs up. Also, there are a lot of repeated fragments and short sentences in the book. I can only say that the author can improve his writing style. It is good, but it is too repetitive and the rhetoric is flashy and unrealistic. I only realized it after reading 🤦 Overall, it's pretty good. The highlight is the novel and unique writing ideas. Come on, it can be even better 🙂

This is why I have used Tomatoes to evaluate books for so long. Please forgive me that I generally don't evaluate a book and treat it as a casual reader. After reading this book, the story inside is very close to the original text. Then Lin Daiyu came to life again and had her own happiness, which really touched the heartstrings. Especially the most regrettable thing is that Wukong did not meet the Bodhi Patriarch again in the end. It gave me a great regret, but the author made up for this regret greatly. The writing was not very "exaggerated" or "low-key", but always looked at the younger generation with kindness and concern. Oh, I wrote it in my heart. It's really Bodhi Patriarch who is Wukong's master 😘🍉

The writing is good, and the ending of Baifang in the Grand View Garden is also changed well. Everyone takes the path they want to take, which is great! And everyone is not OOC and also shows their own charm.

The writing is very good, it makes me feel that this is the life Daiyu should have had

Good writing, compact plot, and powerful promotion