I Thought This Was a Cultivation Story, So Why Are All the Male Leads Hopeless Romantics?

It's been a long time since I've read this kind of ancient Np story. This is what us grown-up women should read [laughing]. I think about how good we ate back then~, but now there are too many foreign persimmons, clear soup and little water, and a vengeful heroine. It's not as fun as this kind of romance.

I hope that everyone in the book can coexist peacefully. I hope that I can not only be a tool man, but also get some love from the heroine. It's okay without love, the heroine is not trapped in love. But it will make people feel pity for several characters, because if they haven't seen the proud love rushing in the young man's heart, or the senior brother's struggle and ambition to endure the darkness. "My phoenix tree, please let the flowers fall more slowly. Let this awkward young man finish being awkward. No matter how hard you try, no matter how hard you calculate, you can't compare to the solemnity, the caution of love, and the cautiousness of young love. After all, love is not part of the plan" - Fox "This night, as evidenced by the vast stars and crescent moon, I am more than passionate about you." - Cat The author's writing style is touching, so although it's cool to have a guide that really takes on the heroine's perspective, I didn't see much love from the heroine, but more of joy and worry about completing the task. After all, it seems that one cannot distinguish between love and love for others if one's life is in danger. The relationship is not two-way but one-way for the male character (it feels like this at the moment). The heroine gives me the feeling that she is calculating in the relationship. There is no love, and at most she is the concern of a friend. Although her personality is quite interesting. Maybe I haven't read enough and it's still being serialized, or maybe this book has nothing to do with love and is all about career. (The following words are my personal thoughts, without any malice. If there are any mistakes, please say you are right and please forgive me) Yes, the author's portrayal of the male character is really good. Not only his personality, but his words are also vivid and his emotions are natural. It makes people unforgettable so it also creates pity. If the heroine ascends and leaves, Ai will feel a little uncomfortable. If the heroine doesn't ascend, can we just live together as a few people? It's okay to fly together slowly and one by one. Maybe it's because I don't think ascension is such an attractive reward after reading other books, because after reading other fairy tales and otome novels, there are some things that need to be cherished more, such as going home, such as resurrecting oneself or loved ones in another dimension, such as not for immortality and rights, but just for a healthy body in this life, living wantonly, and the original intention remains unchanged. The plot of this article is compact, unexpected, the language is witty, and the characters have their own characteristics. The younger sister is soft and beautiful, has a lively and cute personality, and is also a little clever. She will work hard for her own life. It would be great if the article could focus more on this aspect. Because the plot is so heart-pounding, it is easy to ignore the essential difficulty of the heroine (because of her fate), not because it is difficult to reconcile the Shura field emotionally (this aspect is also important and is one of the highlights, but it is easy for people to ignore the essential difficulty). If we could inject some more "soul" into the heroine's feelings, it would be more intriguing and heartwarming than just counting cards. The cards are like a reminder that this is just a virtual task, and it lacks a sense of "reality". Since they are all novels, then I want all the perfection, a little bit of ascending love (praying)

Four stars, I'm giving 5 stars because I'm worried that your writing is too slow. The plot is fast and it gives us something to eat. The plot is still good so far. There is nothing wrong with it overall, so please update it quickly.

Pretty good. The overall plot is mainly about the heroine's strategy, there are four people in total. The youthful and irritable Tu Shanming, the deep-minded, steady and restrained Shen Huaisha, the flamboyant and charming Ji Yelan, and the cool, gentle and see-through Yan Weizhi. The guide process is well written, mixed with pure love, bold and straightforward ambiguity, the love of hidden prying, and the heartbeat of ignorance... As for the plot at the beginning that may disgust some people - the heroine stalks Tu Shanming. In fact, I would say that stalking depends on the situation. One is an rude and disgusting stalker, who acts excessively and thinks he is someone else's partner. The other kind is stalking in a measured manner, which is just a persistent pursuit, but it is not the kind of harassing others without any sense of measure, or even touching others. The heroine is the second type, and I personally think it's okay. (Actually, sometimes chasing someone is just like the heroine. You can't expect to chase someone once or for a day, right?) All in all, it's well written, good luck to the author!ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It's really beautifully written. How should I put it? It's like what a sister in the hot review said has a bit of an old-fashioned romance feel (time travel, redemption, strategy). The emotional writing is also very drawn-out, and there are a lot of heroes. At first, I wanted to laugh when I saw the heroine acting badly, but then she suddenly changed her gender and ran after one of the male protagonists. Not to mention that he was scared to hide, I also felt very uncomfortable, so I skipped to the early stage. I really couldn't see a bit of that early stage (also when did the heroine pass through? I saw the heroine's reminiscence about being struck by lightning after upgrading and running after the man in the original book. It was so intertwined that I still can't tell the difference). But the writing of the following ones is indeed okay. The heroine is not particularly strong, and she doesn't seem to be much stronger than the others (don't mind this), but she knows her own mission and has been working hard for her mission. The back and forth pull makes the emotions in the story more obscure and difficult to endure. There are some stories that I have lost track of after following them, but this one is very interesting as I am currently following it. The author is particularly good at getting stuck at the end, which is indescribable. It just makes people eager to read the next chapter. The heroine Baobao is very charming, and the senior sister is also very nice. The relationship between the two of them is really wonderful, and I like it very much.

I feel sorry for the little fox. Although he is the first person that the heroine attacks, he is always the one who is abused in the following chapters. It would be nice if the heroine could treat the little fox better. I feel that the little fox has too few scenes in the back [crying] I really like the character of the little fox, woo woo [crying] [crying] [crying] The character of Master is also very good, I like it very much [shy]

I finished reading it, smoothly and in one go. Overall, I think this book is very interesting, the setting is interesting, and the characters are quite rich. 1️⃣Sweetness is really sweet, the heroine sprinkles sweet sugar with every male protagonist; it is really cruel to abuse men, but there is no way, the heroine 1🆚4. 2️⃣ Just treat it as a brainless sweet story, there is almost nothing about cultivating immortals, although the heroine ascends in the end, but. 3️⃣The finale, the heroine and the master, where are our other male protagonists! Because the master is the strongest in age and strength, he is the main palace. 4️⃣👻In fact, I feel sorry for that devil the most. He is poisonous in love, has the hardest mouth and the softest heart in the whole body. He is willing to accept the love and pain given by the heroine. . 🐱Cats also cry easily and have low self-esteem and sensitivity🥺. 🦊The little fox formed a contract when he was about to die. He had the purest and most passionate love, and finally used the cat's life to save him. The master has blocked thunder disasters for the heroine once and twice. He is a very upright gentleman. I used to like this cool style very much. Thank you to the author for creating these characters. 5️⃣"When I'm close to you, I'm close to pain; when I'm far away from you, I'm far away from happiness🥺" 6️⃣There are some parts in the front that I don't like very much. This is also a common problem with current fast-paced novels. There are a lot of jokes and it's uncomfortable to read. Also, I feel uncomfortable when I abuse men.

It's really beautiful! ! ! After reading Chapter 44, Super Invincible likes the little fox and is full of youthful spirit.

A novel with a very regular format and structure, very 'academic' and very similar to the routines of many TV dramas. It is classic but still fun. Although readers can predict the direction of the plot, they still want to continue reading. The overall content is smooth, the female protagonist is quirky, the male protagonist has his or her own personality, and the characters are all like the Demon Lord, the Fox, the Master, and the Cat, which are popular and unmistakable characters. There are almost no flaws in the full text, and it deserves five stars. The only suggestion is that the article has the feel of a perfect sample essay. The subject matter has become popular a few years ago, but now it seems a bit conservative and lacks novelty. Of course, if the author wants to practice, there is no problem, but if he wants to be more outstanding, he can try to boldly break the routine and be more stylish. [Blowing kiss]

Wow, how can it be written so well? I love it so much. The author is like a tapeworm in my heart. He is so good at writing. Moreover, the male protagonists do not fall in love with the heroine at first sight because of her appearance, but slowly get along with each other and get to know the heroine as a person. It is really well written. It would be better if there are more cars. One more thing, update soon! ! ! !