We Promised to Cultivate Immortality, but Why Is the Male Protagonist so Obsessed with Love?

It's been a long time since I've read this kind of ancient Np story. This is what us grown-up women should read [laughing]. I think about how good we ate back then~, but now there are too many foreign persimmons, clear soup and little water, and a vengeful heroine. It's not as fun as this kind of romance.

I hope that everyone in the book can coexist peacefully. I hope that I can not only be a tool man, but also get some love from the heroine. It's okay without love, the heroine is not trapped in love. But it will make people feel pity for several characters, because if they haven't seen the proud love rushing in the young man's heart, or the senior brother's struggle and ambition to endure the darkness. "My phoenix tree, please let the flowers fall more slowly. Let this awkward young man finish being awkward. No matter how hard you try, no matter how hard you calculate, you can't compare to the solemnity, the caution of love, and the cautiousness of young love. After all, love is not part of the plan" - Fox "This night, as evidenced by the vast stars and crescent moon, I am more than passionate about you." - Cat The author's writing style is touching, so although it's cool to have a guide that really takes on the heroine's perspective, I didn't see much love from the heroine, but more of joy and worry about completing the task. After all, it seems that one cannot distinguish between love and love for others if one's life is in danger. The relationship is not two-way but one-way for the male character (it feels like this at the moment). The heroine gives me the feeling that she is calculating in the relationship. There is no love, and at most she is the concern of a friend. Although her personality is quite interesting. Maybe I haven't read enough and it's still being serialized, or maybe this book has nothing to do with love and is all about career. (The following words are my personal thoughts, without any malice. If there are any mistakes, please say you are right and please forgive me) Yes, the author's portrayal of the male character is really good. Not only his personality, but his words are also vivid and his emotions are natural. It makes people unforgettable so it also creates pity. If the heroine ascends and leaves, Ai will feel a little uncomfortable. If the heroine doesn't ascend, can we just live together as a few people? It's okay to fly together slowly and one by one. Maybe it's because I don't think ascension is such an attractive reward after reading other books, because after reading other fairy tales and otome novels, there are some things that need to be cherished more, such as going home, such as resurrecting oneself or loved ones in another dimension, such as not for immortality and rights, but just for a healthy body in this life, living wantonly, and the original intention remains unchanged. The plot of this article is compact, unexpected, the language is witty, and the characters have their own characteristics. The younger sister is soft and beautiful, has a lively and cute personality, and is also a little clever. She will work hard for her own life. It would be great if the article could focus more on this aspect. Because the plot is so heart-pounding, it is easy to ignore the essential difficulty of the heroine (because of her fate), not because it is difficult to reconcile the Shura field emotionally (this aspect is also important and is one of the highlights, but it is easy for people to ignore the essential difficulty). If we could inject some more "soul" into the heroine's feelings, it would be more intriguing and heartwarming than just counting cards. The cards are like a reminder that this is just a virtual task, and it lacks a sense of "reality". Since they are all novels, then I want all the perfection, a little bit of ascending love (praying)

Four stars, I'm giving 5 stars because I'm worried that your writing is too slow. The plot is fast and it gives us something to eat. The plot is still good so far. There is nothing wrong with it overall, so please update it quickly.

Pretty good. The overall plot is mainly about the heroine's strategy, there are four people in total. The youthful and irritable Tu Shanming, the deep-minded, steady and restrained Shen Huaisha, the flamboyant and charming Ji Yelan, and the cool, gentle and see-through Yan Weizhi. The guide process is well written, mixed with pure love, bold and straightforward ambiguity, the love of hidden prying, and the heartbeat of ignorance... As for the plot at the beginning that may disgust some people - the heroine stalks Tu Shanming. In fact, I would say that stalking depends on the situation. One is an rude and disgusting stalker, who acts excessively and thinks he is someone else's partner. The other kind is stalking in a measured manner, which is just a persistent pursuit, but it is not the kind of harassing others without any sense of measure, or even touching others. The heroine is the second type, and I personally think it's okay. (Actually, sometimes chasing someone is just like the heroine. You can't expect to chase someone once or for a day, right?) All in all, it's well written, good luck to the author!ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It's really beautifully written. How should I put it? It's like what a sister in the hot review said has a bit of an old-fashioned romance feel (time travel, redemption, strategy). The emotional writing is also very drawn-out, and there are a lot of heroes. At first, I wanted to laugh when I saw the heroine acting badly, but then she suddenly changed her gender and ran after one of the male protagonists. Not to mention that he was scared to hide, I also felt very uncomfortable, so I skipped to the early stage. I really couldn't see a bit of that early stage (also when did the heroine pass through? I saw the heroine's reminiscence about being struck by lightning after upgrading and running after the man in the original book. It was so intertwined that I still can't tell the difference). But the writing of the following ones is indeed okay. The heroine is not particularly strong, and she doesn't seem to be much stronger than the others (don't mind this), but she knows her own mission and has been working hard for her mission. The back and forth pull makes the emotions in the story more obscure and difficult to endure. There are some stories that I have lost track of after following them, but this one is very interesting as I am currently following it. The author is particularly good at getting stuck at the end, which is indescribable. It just makes people eager to read the next chapter. The heroine Baobao is very charming, and the senior sister is also very nice. The relationship between the two of them is really wonderful, and I like it very much.

I feel sorry for the little fox. Although he is the first person that the heroine attacks, he is always the one who is abused in the following chapters. It would be nice if the heroine could treat the little fox better. I feel that the little fox has too few scenes in the back [crying] I really like the character of the little fox, woo woo [crying] [crying] [crying] The character of Master is also very good, I like it very much [shy]

It's really beautiful! ! ! After reading Chapter 44, Super Invincible likes the little fox and is full of youthful spirit.

I finished reading it, smoothly and in one go. Overall, I think this book is very interesting, the setting is interesting, and the characters are quite rich. 1️⃣Sweetness is really sweet, the heroine sprinkles sweet sugar with every male protagonist; it is really cruel to abuse men, but there is no way, the heroine 1🆚4. 2️⃣ Just treat it as a brainless sweet story, there is almost nothing about cultivating immortals, although the heroine ascends in the end, but. 3️⃣The finale, the heroine and the master, where are our other male protagonists! Because the master is the strongest in age and strength, he is the main palace. 4️⃣👻In fact, I feel sorry for that devil the most. He is poisonous in love, has the hardest mouth and the softest heart in the whole body. He is willing to accept the love and pain given by the heroine. . 🐱Cats also cry easily and have low self-esteem and sensitivity🥺. 🦊The little fox formed a contract when he was about to die. He had the purest and most passionate love, and finally used the cat's life to save him. The master has blocked thunder disasters for the heroine once and twice. He is a very upright gentleman. I used to like this cool style very much. Thank you to the author for creating these characters. 5️⃣"When I'm close to you, I'm close to pain; when I'm far away from you, I'm far away from happiness🥺" 6️⃣There are some parts in the front that I don't like very much. This is also a common problem with current fast-paced novels. There are a lot of jokes and it's uncomfortable to read. Also, I feel uncomfortable when I abuse men.

This is my first time reading an NP article. I have lived such a hard life before. The rice was so fragrant, I ate it to my heart's content. The pulling and sour feeling made me feel so good watching it, but I'm still curious about what the ending will be like. Although I also hope that the heroine will be beautiful and become a fairy, these men are just stepping stones, but it is so well written that I just want to eat more [sending my heart]

Wow, how can it be written so well? I love it so much. The author is like a tapeworm in my heart. He is so good at writing. Moreover, the male protagonists do not fall in love with the heroine at first sight because of her appearance, but slowly get along with each other and get to know the heroine as a person. It is really well written. It would be better if there are more cars. One more thing, update soon! ! ! !

It's very interesting. The heroine gives people a refreshing feeling. The little fox is also really frank and cute. The second senior brother's forbearance and restraint are also very impressive. Please give the author more, more, more [love]

The writing is very good. Although it is an NPC system strategy article, the content is still very novel, and the characters are also very good. The emotional line is neither fast nor slow, which is exactly what I like. Hahahahahaha. The author will give it a try and update it [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

A novel with a very regular format and structure, very 'academic' and very similar to the routines of many TV dramas. It is classic but still fun. Although readers can predict the direction of the plot, they still want to continue reading. The overall content is smooth, the female protagonist is quirky, the male protagonist has his or her own personality, and the characters are all like the Demon Lord, the Fox, the Master, and the Cat, which are popular and unmistakable characters. There are almost no flaws in the full text, and it deserves five stars. The only suggestion is that the article has the feel of a perfect sample essay. The subject matter has become popular a few years ago, but now it seems a bit conservative and lacks novelty. Of course, if the author wants to practice, there is no problem, but if he wants to be more outstanding, he can try to boldly break the routine and be more stylish. [Blowing kiss]

I really like it. I think every male protagonist in it is very good. If it's a 1v1 female protagonist that can be read as a stand-alone book, yeah. When I saw a little bit left on 4/5, I thought. The female protagonist is not really happy. She feels that Zhou Xuan is between these four men. I just feel that the female protagonist is very tired. Of course, these four male protagonists have very good characters, characteristics and personalities, but I feel that there is something that makes the female protagonist feel very tired.

I rarely write book reviews, but this book really touched me. The infinitely tolerant Master, the Demon King who is confused about love but still falls in love with each other without hesitation, and the little fox who loves passionately (actually, I think the ending of the little fox dying under the phoenix tree is better. Although I haven't collected all the cards, but based on the plot alone, I feel that the little fox dying under the phoenix tree has a more fatalistic feel and is more difficult to reconcile). She practices the ruthless way and everything can't shake her heart. The Ripples in The Ripples is the only one that has done a good job in portraying every character of the senior sister that the junior sister prefers. Among these characters, I like the master the most. He is calm and self-possessed, restrained and forbearing. He has a fairy-like spirit, and he should not have much ups and downs in his heart after seeing the prosperity and warmth of the world. However, he only thinks that a clear spring nourishes spiritual fish grows in her snowy mountains. The spiritual consciousness has a tendency to rejuvenate. The flower of the high mountain setting is not broken. The author's writing is very good!

It looks great. The author is really good at portraying characters and describing emotions very delicately. It is precisely because of this that each male protagonist has his own personality, which is distinct and three-dimensional. I really like Tu Shanming and Mo Zun. It's a bit short. I feel like I haven't read enough. I still want to read it again. The author must write a sequel. I feel so bad after reading it. I will definitely ask me to read it next time I read the book. I can't bear to leave the little fox.

It's super good. I'm so busy now that I stay up late to read it. I can't bear to finish it all at once [Adoration] Click on the homepage to see that this author writes about my favorite subjects. The worst relationship between me and the author was when I met my best friend in the mountains and rivers [crying] [crying] [crying] To be more serious, the two male protagonists I have seen so far have distinct personalities. I especially like to see the reactions of the two people after the heroine's strategy, especially when Shen Huaisha fell in love with the heroine and became dark, paranoid and jealous but had no reputation, it was so good. Every time when an intimate interaction comes, I jump around in the software excitedly, trying to slow down and savor it [Adoration]

It looks great, it looks great. This rating is really strange. I won't lose money if I invest in it.

Overall, it doesn't have any serious flaws, and the whole book is quite relaxing and enjoyable to read. The author describes different types of emotions very delicately, and I feel like he really understands love. The ending is open-ended and HE-oriented, but there is always a touch of regret and sadness. I feel like it will feel like a non-CP novel after reading it? I feel like the heroine and the hero each have their own misfortunes... The heroine: She was forcibly abducted by the system to do a task. After completing the task, she only ascended to become a fairy in the upper world instead of going home (there is clearly a chapter about Xiaoyu still missing the Mid-Autumn Festival or something like that?) She was forced to carry out various strategies, and her plans were always disrupted, and she was trapped in the Shura field... It was quite tiring to watch... Male protagonists: They are loved to death by the guide (especially the love poison), but the emotions are completely unequal. Xiaoyu has no way to respond to them, because at most it is just like/appreciation, not love. Regarding the system, it seems that the pitfalls were not filled in the end. There seems to be no explanation why the heroine travels through time? And what happened to the upper realm to transcend the tribulation? (However, based on the previous foreshadowing, I guess the content on the card must have been played again before, or is it fatalistic? And I'm curious if the author will consider taking orders?

I have finally finished it after following it for so long. I really, really like this novel. Although it was a bit annoying in the early stage, I personally think the master's love line is very beautiful (´◊ω◊｀)! ! ! (I don't mean to think that the emotional lines of other male protagonists are not good-looking) Although it is finished now, it will always be on my bookshelf! ٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷Ո᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)و Secondly, I also hope that the author will publish another novel of this type (if the author feels too tired, it's okay to take a break!!) The author will always support you (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

The ending of the heroine's ascension was a bit hasty, with only Yan Weizhi accompanying her to immortality, while the other three remained in the human world, which was regrettable. But looking back at the early scenes where the heroine pursues love step by step and the male protagonists fall one after another, it is indeed wonderful. The sweetness wrapped in tenderness is still impressive to this day.

The writing is solid and the content is interesting. These little seedlings are worth seeing. I can't get enough of them.

Five-star praise. It's really good. Each of the four male protagonists has his own good points. The relationship is quick and sweet. Is it a good novel? Does the plot make you feel uncomfortable? [Like] This novel is good.

Each of the male protagonists is very good. There is nothing particularly sad or aggrieved. Most of them are quite dedicated. They will pick up one at a time. I can also write more about Shura Field later. I have already agreed on the final allin~

It's really good. It's been a long time since I've read the whole book. I've been halfway through it and I didn't want to read it anymore. I read it from beginning to end. It's really enjoyable. The pace is good. The Shura Field is very exciting [shy] That's why there's no extra. I want to read the follow-up (ps. I like Master the most)

It's really beautiful. Everyone has a unique color. Jujuju likes the female protagonist. She's so cute. Each male protagonist has his own characteristics. This is the first time I've read a book, especially the one above. I've already read it slowly, but I still finished it. Update soon! ! ! [Adoration]

Big Mac looks good, but I wish there were more stories about the little succubus.

The novel is very good. Among the four male protagonists, my favorites are the Master and the Demon Lord.

It's very interesting. Some of the words written by the author are very beautiful, and the scenes described are also very vivid. The heroine Baobao's character is also very distinct, and she always has her own firm goals! Very nice! Ratings are going up!

The writing is very good, and each male protagonist is honestly portrayed better than the female protagonist! To be honest, the heroine is a bit cold-blooded and rational [laughing and crying]. From the beginning to the end, she just wants to stay alive and complete the task. She doesn't love anyone, she just harvests the love of others with a purpose to achieve her goal. It's really quite powerful, a bit sadistic. Overall it's really pretty! I hope the author's books will have better heroines when he gets older