After Saving the Second Male Lead, I Was Imprisoned by Him

The protagonist is a lunatic and sickly type, and the protagonist is very sunny and cheerful, which is a kind of redemption story. It's not a heartthrob plot either. I like this very much, not everyone is gay

A very touching short story. The system controls two people at the same time. I actually don't like weak redeemers very much, but An An is really just a gentle person on the outside, but he is a very gentle and strong redeemer on the inside. His life before traveling through the book was not perfect. It can be said that in his world, he has never seen the light die of a heart attack, but such a person who has never felt warmth came to the world of the novel and saved the Mu Shi who was abandoned by everyone. He said that he once felt heartbroken when he was reading the book. As the second male lead, Mu Toki might have a similarly gloomy life, which made him want to be good to Mu Toki without any distracting thoughts. In this way, he only accepted being loved by his parents for half a year and then stepped into Mu Toki's gloomy world forcefully. No matter how he used words to stab him Motivated himself, An An was not angry but just firmly chose him and trusted him over and over again. Mu Shi's experience was really heartbreaking. He had never done anything wrong yet was abandoned again and again. Every time he raised his hopes, they would be ruthlessly shattered. He has a sensitive personality and dare not trust anyone. He closes himself off and refuses to get along with anyone, thinking that he will not be hurt without contact. However, the scars all over his body are completely exposed when he meets An An, who is like the sun. Day after day, he feels the warmth that he has not seen for a long time. He will be badly injured, which makes him feel sorry for himself, but he will also stop all harm for him. No one loves An An more than him. In the six years he missed, when An An was wiped out by the system and everyone forgot about him, only Mu Shi always remembered paranoidly. He, both of them have been unhappy for the past six years. An An has been wandering alone, as if he has always been a person outside the world. Mu Shi has been confirming An An's existence and tormenting himself. The moment they reunited, they really cried to death. Both of them were stubborn and refused to leave. But the other party was tortured over and over again by the system. Maki's willpower is too strong, and his desire to survive is also very strong because there is always someone waiting for him behind him. The two distressed protagonists are really forced to go through the plot. The sadness and helplessness really make people cry. The long-lasting love is the most impressive. A book-wearer uses all his tenderness to approach the second male lead who is covered in bruises and abandoned by the whole world. It can also be said to be mutual redemption. I hope they will always be happy and super good-looking with five-star reviews! ! ! Ye Shian, Ji Mushi: Love can make people grow flesh and blood, and it can make people reborn. Ye Shian was full of passion and persistently crashed into Ji Mushi's world. "Ji Mushi, I want to make your world more lively." Instinctively, regardless of the consequences. "Ji Mushi, you are very good. You are the best in my heart." When he was struggling to support himself in the forgotten world, there was someone who was struggling to support him just like him. I can't tell you that you are a person in the book, and you are the person who wrote the words. In my eyes, you are flesh and blood, you can laugh and cry, you are not just a few words, you are a living person, someone I like and love. "Ji Mu, I always feel that I appeared in this world for you." "So thank you for bringing me back to life." I came to this world just to love you.

Looking forward to the emergence of new star novelists! ! Great author. There is a place where the name is reversed in the previous article. I suggest the author take a look at it, or I have time to take a look at it. You don't have to bother me. I will give you feedback. Regardless of the characters or emotional lines, in my opinion I can only say, great! But the ending of the Lu & Jiang incident is not very clear. I feel like I could add a protagonist and their explanation. This is just a suggestion! ! Because I feel that the original text is already very good, so it doesn't matter if I add it or not. I look forward to the popularity of this book, and Xiao Ji and Xiao An, two good babies, will be happy forever! ! ! ! The author's mother is always happy! ! Thank you for reading my book review. Have a happy life and good health!

I finished it in one afternoon. [Laughs] This book is written very delicately. When I wrote about Mu's refusal to accept the arrival of Little Sun, I think it was just right so that it wouldn't make people feel disgusted. Baby Ji was so miserable and had a suffocating home and an unsociable and repressed personality. It made me feel sour and astringent, with a slightly bitter taste. Jue, the most regrettable thing is that I didn't have the chance to participate in that competition. After all, the opportunity for such a high-spirited young man to be named on the gold list failed. Baby An An is like a little sun, warming the people around him. He takes the initiative to love the people he wants to love, which makes the bitter Qing Ju come back to his sweetness, and thus saves Baby Ji. When the world lacked someone to love Ji Mu, it happened that Xu Shian came to redeem his lover with the most turbulent and sincere love. I want to kill that stupid system at the end [laughs]

The plot is very attractive! ! I stayed up all night and finished reading the book👀 I really like the character of An An's Little Sun. He gets closer and warmer to Ji Mu Shi in the dark and humid environment. ❤️With Ji Mu Shi, you will never be alone in the rainy season again because An An will hold an umbrella for you💓. The emotional line is very delicate. I especially like how Ji Mu Shi treats An An differently. Later, they were separated and the two of them couldn't help themselves. They tortured me until I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night. Fortunately, the ending was good💞 It's worth leaving tears of happiness for the young couple who have endured all the hardships💧🥰 Super Invincible hates the system in the book! ! Without this broken system, the two little bitter gourds would not have been separated for six years😭 But Ji Mushi finally got his kitten. I hope the author will have more time to spread out the daily life of the young couple! 😘

The 8.8 Rating is completely suppressed. I personally think this novel deserves a 9.9 Rating. There is not a word of nonsense in the whole story, the plot is not delayed, it is very smooth! The author's writing style is very good, and it is very enjoyable and enjoyable to read. It's really worth watching. I stayed up late to watch it. The characters of Ji and Ye are fully and fully described. No matter what time or situation the two people are, they always stride towards each other. It's really comfortable to watch. It is a prison-redemption article with three perspectives (I was not very accepting of imprisonment before, but the imprisonment in this novel is very heart-warming. Ji imprisoned Ye not to imprison and torture Ye, but because he was afraid that Ye would leave him again.) It is really good-looking! ! ! Really push push push! ! ! It won't be mindlessly sweet, and the plot will have twists and turns. This is what attracts me the most.

It was so good that I stayed up late to watch [Adoration]. The overall plot was very good. An An and Xiaoye must continue to be happy in another world! [Crying] The author's writing style is very good. I personally think the story is a bit sour. The part where the system appeared in the middle made me sad. One was forgotten by the whole world, and the other asked everyone around him and couldn't remember the existence of his lover [Crying] [Crying] Fortunately, we were together sweetly in the end [KISS] [KISS] I wish the young couple to be in love forever [Send my heart]

This book is really beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful. Two poor little poor people redeem each other. Ye Shian is really good and good, and Ji Mushi is equally good. They love each other regardless of the cost or consequences. No matter how hard the system tries to stop it, it can't stop them from falling in love. It's so good. The final result is he. The plot is particularly touching, and the writing at the end is very sad, but the result is good. The extra story is also very well written, it's nice to watch, nice to watch, nice to watch [love] [love] [love] I recommend this novel! ! ! Especially in the last extra chapter, the arrival of Xiao Ji Mushi from another parallel world showed me that they did not stop them systematically. Ye Shian has not been forgotten for six years [crying] Suddenly I remembered the sentence written in the article: "Six years ago, Ye Shian disappeared in the summer. Six years later, Ye Shian was completely free again in the summer." [Crying] [crying] [crying] Really, this book is well written. I hope that Ye Shian and Ji Mushi in another parallel world will be in love, like Ye Shian and Ji Mushi. I also hope that Ye Shian and Ji Mushi in another parallel world can always be sweet, unlike Ye Shian and Ji Mushi who have experienced hardships and joys. I hope that Ye Shian and Ji Mushi from two different worlds can grow old together and be in love for eternity. I hope everything goes well [sending heartfelt wishes]

I have read Chapter 40 now. The writing is extremely delicate and has many hints. I like it very much. Moreover, the writing is not always paranoid and dark. I can see the changes of the two male protagonists. It is really a good book and highly recommended.

I read it in one sitting. I think it is the second best novel after "Speechless Syndrome". The writing is exquisite. Looking at their daily life, I feel as if I feel the same. Two teenagers cuddling together under the warm winter sun. I haven't found any novels that interest me recently. Only this one made me read it in one sitting. What is it about? Love is worth all the difficulties, love forever, and be happy forever.

This is one of the few novels I have seen on Tomato that writes such a profound emotional line. The plot is not procrastinating, and every paragraph is to the point. Two little bitter gourds cling to each other and save each other. It is not the so-called imprisonment in the title of the book. This imprisonment is not only a physical imprisonment for Shou but also a mental torture for Gong. The author's later writing is really great. Gong can overcome the control of God's perspective to love Shou. His love is not a strong expression, but it is so strong that he can only express it in threads. His paranoia is An An's good medicine, and An An's appearance is Xiao Ji's sunshine. If you love each other, you will overcome all difficulties. I hope everyone can find their own preference. Finally, I would like to praise the author. Teacher, your writing is simply great! ! [Shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

The subject matter of this book is so novel! ! I've never seen it! ! In other articles, the system helps the book wearer, but this one is different! The whole story was about breaking them up and getting the plot back on track [crying]. Of course, it was not abusive at the beginning. The first 72 chapters were really sweet. Gong being a little paranoid would always get himself hurt, and then let An An feel sorry for him. Some people may think that Gong is not good. But his living environment created his character, and no one taught him how to treat him, but An An really gave him all his love [crying] and knew what he was thinking in his heart, and could give him a sense of security so that he didn't feel left behind. He knew this The only one in the world who truly loves her is An An. Later, when the system appeared, it began to abuse her. She was forced to interfere with the feelings of the protagonist Gong Shou. An An saw it and did not abandon him. She kept running towards him, and Gong also kept planning to make the system disappear. Just tell An An clearly [crying] [crying] They all go to each other in both directions and love each other. No one owes the other. Both of them have unspeakable secrets. In the end, they talked about it and changed the ending of Attack on Death. It is really good to watch. It is a type I have never seen before! ! The author's writing style is also very good! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a very good redemption story. The writing is novel, and the plot is both expected and a little unexpected. Both of them are very good babies. They must be happy (o^^o) Maybe it's not because I didn't like Manxing's words because I didn't like the later plot as I expected, but the first part really made me cry. It hurts⊙⊙Well, they are the only ones in each other's lives, and no one can stop them. An'an, please stay happy forever *^_^*!

This is the first book of the year and I am very moved. The setting of the real book is very good. Both of them are good babies. The biggest obstacle is the system, but it doesn't matter. Love can overcome all difficulties. Fortunately, they are together. The most poignant point for me is the fifth episode. There is no cliche saying that because you are Ye Shian from the parallel world in the future, I also love you, but that they all have the Ye Shian they love deeply in their hearts, and it is just the Ye Shian they know well. With the watering of Ye Shian's love, Ji Mushi is no longer the lifeless Ji Mushi he used to be. He becomes more willing to express himself. This is inseparable from Ye Shian's firm choice and affirmation every time. I hope Shi'an CP will be safe and sound all the time in the first dimension.

Overall, it was very well written. The whole story made me cry a lot. However, some of the settings are flawed. For example, Gong was tortured in his adoptive father's house. I couldn't figure it out. There were both witnesses and physical evidence. Why didn't he call the police and move out? The article briefly interspersed a sentence about wanting to take revenge, but it didn't happen at all. Instead, it kept getting hurt, which I didn't quite understand. In the extra story, the adoptive mother died and the adoptive father and son were sent to a mental hospital. What does the hardship he endured in those years count? Does it mean he has a hard life? Even if he wanted to be able to retaliate later, he could have escaped first. I couldn't figure it out. Apart from this, everything else is pretty good. The short redemption story is quite sad. Two Little Bitter Melons [smiles]

I really like the dark side of villains, who are as ambitious and charming as snakes. I have read so many fast food articles that I can hardly recall the dark attributes of such pure villains. Most of them are superficial and cannot describe the inside, making the dark villains look cheap and a bit like lunatics. This article has mastered this point very well. When I saw the classic campus life scenes of camping on the bus and sleeping on the shoulder, the undercurrent of emotions and the astringent love between teenagers, it was so good that I wrote a long praise! The core of the redemption novel is that the leash to tame the fierce dog is controlled by the weaker party. The campus novel suppresses the restricted emotions to the level of Makabaka, with some fiery emotions and impulses. Youth, oppression, lust, a contradictory combination, a stimulant for readers. [Big Brother]

Super pretty. The plot is very online and the writing is good! ! Baby Ye Shi'an appeared in Ji Mushi's world like a beam of light, illuminating him, warming him, and changing Ji Mushi's inevitable death. Their love along the way was not easy because of the existence of the system [almost crying] (s system [laugh] [smile]) However, fortunately they did not give up, and finally they were happily together [Love] Ji Mushi and Ye Shian will always be happy in their world!

It's really beautiful! The plot is not slow, and every plot is exciting. Although there will be imprisonment in the later stage, when An An sheds tears and looks bad (especially because she feels sorry for him), Xiao Ji immediately becomes cautious, and the imprisonment is just for fear of An An disappearing, which makes people feel soft [heartfelt]~ The style of the early stage is redemption. An An travels into the novel to save his favorite male lead. In the middle stage, the world view is gradually revealed. Parents start to stop them and a system appears. The middle and later stages are the most cruel. An An has been forgotten by everyone for six years. [I almost cry] Only An An and Xiao Ji still remember. Moreover, An An is still in a foreign country and does not know anyone who remembers him. He cannot contact Xiao Ji. I can really sympathize with their feeling of powerlessness and self-doubt [crying]! The later period was more sour and sweet, because the system couldn't say anything, so the two people just suffered in their own way. Fortunately, the plot was broken in the end, and An An and Xiao Ji also confessed to each other! The real sweetness should come in the extra episode, [Adoration] Sweet married life~ The author's writing style is also very good, and there are basically no typos. I still recommend it [Sending Hearts]! Xiao Ji and An An 99～[blowing kiss]

The teacher's writing is really good! I really like the setting of this article, I really like it! An An and Xiao Ji are both good babies! It's really good-looking! Highly recommended! Teacher, I will always support you OvO

This is the most agreeable article I have seen on Tomato in recent months. Although I know it is not good to praise and criticize, I still want to say that this kind of writing should be included in high-scoring and high-quality articles. The plot is compact and smooth, the characters are vivid and not weak, and their love for each other is strong and sweet. It is really rare to see such a protagonist with a brain. Thinking about the high-score article I was with a melon in a melon field. I thought I was hugging a big melon, but the cores of nine out of ten melons were so shocking that my vision went dark again and again. I often suspected that there was something wrong with my sense of taste, rather than the problems with the big melons marked nine o'clock that crowds of people flocked to [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The writing is okay, the feelings are very delicate, and maybe some places are not very clear, but the emotions I want to convey are conveyed, which makes me truly realize that love can overcome all difficulties. Loving someone is like growing a flower. Xiaoye watered Xiaoji until it bloomed, and the flower named "love" was also written. The protagonist's feeling of cherishing each other is the portrayal of the supporting role. It is not very profound. People can only remember the protagonist after reading it. I think the setting of the supporting role can be deepened. I feel The protagonist of the original book, Shou, was a very gentle person. He was very delicate and attentive, but this feeling disappeared as soon as it appeared. The later description of the original protagonist, Shou, still thought that the male protagonist liked him... Which was a bit inconsistent with his personality. I thought he was a thoughtful, observant, and smart person who could probably guess the feelings between the protagonists and guide them with good intentions. This is the truly gentle, kind and smart protagonist in the original book, but the writing is already very good. Congratulations.

This book is really good to read, the early part is really sweet, but the later part is a bit sour. Both of them are good babies and really love each other. Pure Love Party, it's really worth reading, it's really pure love. The author's writing style is also very good, and the artistic conception he depicts is really beautiful and warm. Ji Mushi is not anyone's second male lead, he is Ye Shian's unique male lead Lord. I thought of a CP name for them: Shi An Yuji/Shi An Yuji Anyway, highly recommended! !!

It's cruel, it's very cruel, it tricked me into killing it [crying], I thought it was some kind of sweet article when I saw the label and title, but it turned out to be cruel [laughing] and it made my heart skip a beat when I saw it in broad daylight. The rest of the feeling was fine, except that the system I purchased was so irritating, I really wanted to smash it to pieces, it was so cheap, and the ending was a bit too sudden, and I didn't watch enough, even though there was an extra qwq. . . . . . .

It took me two days to read this book, and my biggest feeling is: the author's character is well created! The writing is relatively good, there is room for improvement! In my opinion, the plot and character activities are also logical and not seriously OOC for any plot reason. Compared with some of the novels in Tomato that I randomly clicked on and read (I didn't step on a handful!! I just told my personal feelings), this novel does not focus on depicting the welfare plot of "kissing, hugging and lifting high", but focuses on the description of characters, activities, dialogues, environment, etc., Making the images of Ye Shian, Ji Mushi and others three-dimensional and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. The plot is also long and thin. I really like watching this kind of movie, and I didn't just fall in love with it out of nowhere. Because of this, I have always been confused about the plot at the beginning. Why did it feel like Ye Shian liked Ji Mushi from the beginning, which was very strange. Only later did I see... It turned out that Ji Mushi was recommended by him, so, that's why it was like this (maybe I missed reading it at the beginning, haha, I usually don't read books too carefully). It only made sense when I suddenly realized it. (Maybe people who have recommended it will be more sympathetic (?)) Another point, I don't know if I will be beaten to death if I tell you. As mentioned in the previous paragraph, Ji Mushi was recommended by Ye Shian. After realizing this, I thought of another angle. Isn't this book a bit dreamy? Ye Shian is Ji Mushi's dream boy (just kidding)! However, I have seen the saying "No one loves Ji Mu Shi, so Ye Shian came", which is very warm and cute. Of course, the article also has shortcomings. The biggest one is that there are many words and missing words. This requires the author to pay more attention. After all, if he becomes a well-known writer in the future, this small mistake will not be enough! Every time I see the "The author has something to say" content at the end of each chapter, I can't help but sigh that the author is really a lovely person! At the end, I also quote a sentence from a reader in the book review section, "Looking forward to the emergence of new stars as novelists" (I think this sentence is very, very good, and I quote it without permission. I apologize in advance, because I really agree with this sentence)! Looking forward to more and more good works, and looking forward to seeing the growth of the author!

Sour wind, looking for sugar in the knife [almost crying] Gong is a classic miser, and thanks to the love that cannot be driven away, Gong gradually gets better. The full text feels like there is no sweet plot [face covering] The extra story is the daily life of two people after they are together. It was during the school days. The two of them finally wanted to be together, but they were wiped out because of the system. Then the whole world doesn't remember me (suffer), only you (attack) remember me (suffer) When they meet again, Gong has to complete the task and follow the original plot because he wants to gain control of his body, and then the little sadistic sadomasochism begins. [Laughing] Hahahaha, I really can't do it anymore The author's writing style is good. If you like reading sour things, feel free to read it! If you want to read sweet stories, I don't recommend [Send Heart]

Although there are not many obvious emotional lines in the front, it is still very interesting [Send Heart][Send Heart] It's just that there are too many plots in the plot where both of them are injured, and it is a bit repetitive. I don't know if it is because of the interference of the world system in the plot, but Xiao Ji's character really poked me! ! At the end, I felt that the ending was a little rushed. Can the author write more woo woo woo in the extra story? I want to see them kiss [crying]

It's so beautiful, it's so cruel [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] My heart has been crying since I didn't go to the game. I stood back and tortured me. I feel like I want to kill all those people and the system [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] But it's really good-looking, so cruel, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's very interesting. An'an is really like the little sun. It's such a warm and heartwarming plot. This book is very interesting. I don't have the words to describe it in my mind. Only after reading it can I realize how youthful it is. It feels like youthful excitement. Looks good, looks good, looks good. May An An and Mu Shi be happy⊙∀⊙!

It's sour and sad, but the emotions between the protagonists are really touching, very delicate and real. I like the protagonist's character very much. Ye Shi'an is very cute and sincere. His love is unrequited and unreserved without asking for anything in return. Although Ji Mushi looks cold and hard and has a body of spikes, he is kind and soft in his heart, and he will remember the good things others do to him in his heart. For a long time, the more I read about it, the more I felt sorry for him. I even sympathized with him to the point where he really locked up Ye Shian and forced me to understand it. But the reason why he locked up the person was so heartbreaking. He was just afraid of that person's disappearance. He did nothing. Ye Shian's love was what he deserved. He lacked too much love, so God wanted to compensate him with Ye Shian. Although there were many moments of heartache, pain, and helplessness while reading, in the end it was complete and I had no regrets. It was like soaking in a hot spring after being wet and dirty after going through a storm. It was calm and comfortable, and my resentment towards the system also dissipated lightly. This book gets a 9.5 Rating from me. It's very interesting and deserves to be seen by more people.

Ji Mushi and Ye Shi'an are really two little bitter gourds. They are bitter and haha. The whole story is about redemption, but the ending is he. I sincerely wish them happiness forever. Great article, recommended.