GB: Raising a Mad Dog in the World of Fast Travel

The author really writes emotional scenes very delicately, and the characters are clearly established, and he completely portrays the protagonists of each small world. I almost wanted to cry when I looked at Thirteen. It is not an ordinary anecdote that only writes about physical contact, it is very detailed. [He was actually a little sad, so sad that he wanted to beg her, thank you, please don't die. But he knew clearly that this begging would be useless. It's useless to beg for help, it's useless to beg the emperor, it's useless to beg gods, monsters, monsters... It's all useless. He didn't know who to ask. But if you don't ask for something from someone, your heart will feel heavy and you won't feel at ease. It was as if there was a god in the dark, waiting for him to offer him a pious wish, and then he would wave his hand, and what he asked for would come true. It's just that he is too stupid and always has no way out. That's why she never got better. It's all his fault. ]

I really, really, really, really, really, really like the second story. It's so well written. It's so cool to write it. Oh my god, teacher, I love you! ! ! I finally changed this rating, hoping that the author will get better and better.

The heroine is very strong and versatile. The butler can fly a helicopter and has a certificate, which is really cool. Especially when he took out a bunch of certificates and pretended to be a little bit, and he didn't even know he was pretending like that haha. Charming personality [Like][Like][Like] The male protagonist only needs to have a love brain It's actually a new book with great lyrics. Please give me a good review first. I hope you won't rush into this book [face covering] I wish you a good score

I strongly recommend the second small world. The description of the life experience of the heroine's mother and the inner feelings of her brother are very good. The emotional analysis is in place, but the follow-up is concluded relatively quickly. If it can be extended to write more emotions, it will be more reasonable and smooth.

I watched two worlds. In the first world, I felt that the setting was more important than the writing and plot. The overall feeling was that the writing was rough. The setting was more interesting, but it felt like it was just a few scenes connected together. It was a rough writing world in all aspects. In the second world, the setting is very similar to that of an older brother who has low self-esteem and is sensitive. The portrayal of the older brother is much more delicate than in the previous world. But there were many flaws. The second world looked good until the heroine finished the college entrance examination and the hero figured it out. But then I thought I would continue to push the plot or design one or two more plots to promote the relationship, but it didn't end abruptly. The heroine is the perfect setting to be a heartthrob and brilliant in all aspects, but the portrayal of the heroine is mainly focused on how powerful and charming the heroine is. Compared with the male protagonist, the description of the heroine's personal emotions is too little. It seems that the heroine is a bit of a tool, and the interaction between the two people is written in a human-machine sense (the male protagonist is full of emotions, and the female protagonist looks like a human-machine). In short, the setting concept is very good, but the writing and plot have a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author can work harder.

The author's writing style is very delicate and his emotions are very natural. It can be seen that his language skills are very deep. Especially in the second world, the pull of reason and the transformation of emotions are really breathtaking. The content is also very rich, the story frame is very complete, and the hearts of those who watch it are warm. This is the first time I have read a short fast-travel novel. The world I read before could stretch to sixty or seventy chapters, but although this chapter is short, the story narrative is still very complete, and the pace is also very well controlled. It's really fine chaff, fine chaff!

I would like to be called the god of psychological description! So well written! Super delicate The second person directly poked my XP. It's so cool for this low self-esteem, wet and possessive man! Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking. Looking forward to the next dimension!

I was attracted to it by the cover. The puppy is very cute, the male protagonist is also cute, and the female protagonist's baby is very good and considers others. There is no villain in the plot, but the male protagonist is indeed a puppy, beautiful, well-behaved and protective of his master. The author's writing is getting better and better, and Xiao Fu is particularly charming! I feel that sometimes the author looks at Xiao Fu from a God's perspective, describing Xiao Fu objectively without emotion, but it reflects Xiao Fu's personality charm very well, and it can be seen that Xiao Fu himself is a very good person. Moreover, the author is very good at writing. No matter whether he is a child, a teenager or a young person, he has a distinct personal characteristic. He does not use adjectives to define and emphasize it, but it is naturally reflected in his behavior, language and actions. Xiaofu is so like the moon, beautiful and attractive. Sometimes I even hope that the bright moon will hang high and not touch the world. In the middle period, I actually questioned whether such a perfect person really existed, and I also wondered why Xiao Fu would choose a male protagonist who was not suitable for her. Later, when I saw that Xiao Fu had some minor flaws (psychological problems), I felt that this character was very full in front of me. It was not a single sun shining on the world, nor a blood bag sucked by blood. She also had desires and obsessions. Those little flaws made Xie Fu more perfect, which is simply delicious. (Actually, I personally don't feel like it's a flaw, it feels like it feels better, similar to the destructive effect of saying one is no longer young)

"He is willing to be a nourishment, a stepping stone under her feet, trying his best to lift her to a higher and farther place, even if he can only look up at her from a distance, even if he can only watch her grow farther and farther apart year after year, day after day... It doesn't matter." The author's writing is good. It simply describes the nostalgia and painful struggle of pseudo-orthopedics.

The second plane is so amazing, oh my god, I couldn't stop crying. I felt so happy crying in the middle of the night. The emotional descriptions are so delicate that I could read a single book and dive right into it [Love] [Love]

It is simply a fairy product! I have to say that the author is a seasoned foodie! ! ! It feels like I was born to write short stories... Each story is just the right length. . Through the shortest possible length, a complete story background is constructed, which immediately draws people into the world of the male and female protagonists. There are also many places that have been left blank. I can only say that it is very appetizing. Many of the favorite settings are so delicious that they are almost cooked. . I also love the hostess, and I also love the puppy. Can you go faster➕Write about the world of a big-breasted male mother [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The male characters have a lot more writing than the female protagonists. I prefer the male characters. Some male characters are better at it, such as the little follower. But there are a few that are particularly good. The heroine has a kind of white knight syndrome, which I really like. But the focus must be on the heroine! ! ! I cannot accept that a man is better than my heroine! ! Men should be good interpreters for the heroine! Don't overshadow the guest. Fortunately, most boys are very well-behaved😊.

It's very interesting. The setting of each world really impressed me. The chapters are not too long, but the emotional lines are really delicately written, and the characters are full (≧▽≦)/♫(＾.＾)✌️Good reviews, it's beautiful and I love reading it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's pretty cool to watch, but it's limited to the first seven small worlds. I can't stand the rest of it. The setting is pretty good, and there's nothing particularly weird about it. I like worlds 2 and 3. It's very interesting. The seventh immortality is also good, but it's limited to the emotional line between immortality and the heroine. I don't like the rest of the small world.

It's beautiful and beautiful. The heroine is called a big devil by others, but she is not crazy and cruel at all. Instead, she is very cute and even gentle. She will consider other people's feelings. I like her, like her, like her! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flowing kiss]

Love to read this new book with big words😋

It's quite interesting🤔But after watching Mermaid, I feel that every time the author misses my mark... Such as the indifferent experimenter and the trapped mermaid... Fortunately that person is not the male protagonist. There is also the setting of a mermaid trapped on the shore... Fortunately, the heroine took the initiative to save people and was caught. It doesn't matter if she was really caught.

This is a short story. Although it is GB-oriented, it does not have detailed descriptions. You don't need to read Dahuang Yatou. It is not a very detailed article, but it is still quite interesting. It is good to read more "innocent" books occasionally for a change. Although sometimes it feels like it just ends abruptly, some of them are quite interesting. It would be great if they could be expanded into longer chapters.

I have read four worlds so far. They are good-looking but a bit strange... I like the subject matter and techniques very much, but it is too short [currently in progress] and is not very interesting to read. There is not much description of the story between the male and female protagonists. Most of them only describe how the male protagonist cannot live without the female protagonist. There is a lot of inner drama but not much else. I feel that there are not many major events that can be mainly described, the kind of major events that can make readers feel...

The writing style of Boss is very good, very natural, a little sad but also very humorous, and sometimes very cute. It contains so many emotions in a short length, which is very enjoyable for me to read, and it is not abrupt or awkward. The relationship and emotions of the two planes between my sister and Xie Shisan are beautifully written. I really can't stop my sister's sticky and wet love. He is a miserable person but he loves to give without hesitation. He is the wife for his sister! Sub-healthy but happy feelings are so delicious. Xie Shisan's personality is particularly suitable. He has been trained to be inseparable and looks very delicious. The essence of be is that love turns into an unattainable request under the support of death. Xie Shisan was helped to death and became hysterical. It is very sad. After all, he was once a rebellious assassin.

Super pretty! Very female-oriented, please come in as the female protagonist! I like every story Is the ending considered open? Will Xiao Fu return to his original world, destroy it and rebuild a new one? Tiandao didn't appear much after that, I'm very curious🥺🥺🥺

It's nice to look at, the puppy is cute, and the girls love it too. The first world is sweet, but the second world feels cruel. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

Author Author I'm sorry for you [loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving] Why do you write so beautifully? I just eat, eat, eat, eat. The teacher's mud is just like a beet! ! ! ! I will always follow Ning! Momomomomomomomomomomo

It's really super pretty! ! ! Every article shocks me. Once you come in, you can't get out. It's so addictive! Because it's so beautiful, I can't find the time to comment. Using my feelings would ruin the perfect emotion. Believe me, it's really beautiful [crying]

It's really fun for those who like watching puppies, and the heroine is also well designed, I like it

At the beginning, the heroine complains about various systems and is very venomous. The heroine is strong in every line. The setting is really exciting. There is no feeling of female competition, the heroine herself and the original heroine are both good babies! The brother and sister in the second world. Looking at my brother makes me feel uncomfortable. The emotional details and inner descriptions are very well written. The third world tends to have multiple male protagonists. Both of them are good, but in the end, Bai Yueguang died early. It was too painful. When I saw the fourth heroine who started out as a ghost, I felt that Sister Bao just wanted to destroy the garbage world and create a new one. She was not wrong at all! Boss, I am ready to follow you to the death. I will leave a review before the update is finished.

It's okay, there's nothing wrong with it, it's just that some feelings need to be felt with force, otherwise you won't be able to detect them at all, but I don't really like this kind of thing, I like the more obvious kind. The heroine is very humorous, humorous and powerful

It is really a great blessing for Tomato to have such excellent works, so happy~~ The brother and sister chapter is simply a masterpiece😋 Today is another day of waiting for the teacher to put out lunch😋＋

So cute, the wet puppy is super cute

Yummy and delicious! I dare not think that this article can appear on Tomato? The heroine Kurohara is not too tough, and she can write such a delicious love story without supporting supporting roles. I have only read the first story so far, and I am laughing so hard. If the following stories are of this level, I declare this one to be the second best love story I have ever read on Tomato!