People in Martial Arts: My Disciples All Think I Am an Immortal

The one star missing is that if you don't give money for meals during this period, you would have been beaten to death before. Now it's better. If you don't give money for meals, you can't do this even if you become an immortal!

It looks good, I like it very much... When recruiting children, we should not only teach them how to practice, but also teach their character... A decent, lively and lovely apprentice can make people like... In addition, as for martial arts, since the background is written, it is recommended that students include martial arts female protagonists and decent male protagonists during their training period, such as: Xiao Huang Rong, Xiao Long Nu, Xiao Guo Xiang (if Huang Rong has a baby [smirk] [laugh]), A'Zhu, Wang Yuyan, Mu Wanqing, Qing Qing, Shangguan Haiyi... Qiao Feng... Lin Pingzhi... Not like Linghu Chong, too many people don't like White Eyed Wolf [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] Hahahahahaha doll...

In the void, a lazy sound, but with enough energy to freeze the endless chill of the nine heavens and ten earths, sounded slowly. "Alas..." Overall, is it okay? I've seen Chapter 48. You could say he was protecting the calf, but he insisted on letting his apprentice get hurt. You said he doesn't show off, right? He didn't take action until the last time every time. We don't know what to think either.

The writing is good, much better than the grinding ones of the same type. In fact, you can also do something more stylish, such as letting Yinyin fly a few tens of centimeters above the ground, which will absorb the spiritual energy anyway. Well, let the protagonist get some special effects skills, and make the whole body covered with stars, or have a halo to look more stylish!

This is a fairly good apprenticeship novel. It cannot be said to be amazing, but it is quite enjoyable to write and reads very smoothly. Under normal circumstances, it is also the best in Tomato. However, there are five or six different types of apprenticeship novels in Tomato. All of them are amazing. I am afraid of comparison. If I go back and forth, they can only be regarded as high-quality products.

I won't say anything else. I only give it five stars because the author can see the problems reflected in the comments and correct them in time. After finishing this book, the author's writing style should become better and his basic skills should be more solid. I look forward to the author's next book. Come on.

I just hope I don't get a bunch of vests.

The plot is okay, but the character of the apprentice is not good

It always feels very similar to that book! The first disciple in that book is the son of the city lord

Brother, you have to write faster, otherwise your book will be difficult, because I see a lot of the same thing

Hurry up and update. I'm doing Douyin. I've got over 10,000 likes. If it's even slower, I'll ask a hundred people to give you bad reviews [smile]

Seeing it now, it's okay.

(His name is Chen Beixuan, and like Lu Yuchen, he is a time-traveler.) Those who don't like wearing too many clothes can take a detour and withdraw first.

It's interesting, but a little short. Take care of yourself

Too many undeserving people have died, as if friends can be abandoned at any time

Great author! Don't force me to kneel down and beg you [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's so exciting, I hope it will continue to be exciting in future updates. [Sinister smile]

I think Gaga looks good, why is the rating so low [what]

Not bad, it reads smoothly and the plot is good.

It's a bit funny and a pretty good book.

It's so well written and very beautiful. It's a pity that it only has five stars. Otherwise, I would have given it dozens or hundreds of stars [Adoration]

Will there be Xiao Yan in the future? Not bad, the writing style needs to be improved

It's okay, I don't have anything to choose from.

It looks great, good luck to the author!

So far I like watching

Not bad, it tastes great!

Cocoa one-one-mao-two

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very beautiful, very beautiful

The quantity is relatively small and the subject matter is good