[Two Male Leads + Transmigrate into a Book + Cultivation + Redemption]
[An aloof man who turns obsessive later, seemingly a domineering protagonist but actually beautiful, strong, and miserable × A sunny, easygoing type in public, a jokester and sarcastic commentator in private]
The synopsis is written in first person for convenience. The actual story is in third person.
For content warnings, see the end of Chapter One and the author’s note.
My name is Wen Sheng. I stayed up late binge-reading the trashy wish-fulfillment harem novel Proud Heaven’s Rampage, and the dog of an author fed me nothing but garbage. I angrily flung my phone, and the next second I transmigrated into the identically named cannon fodder I despised.
And my mission? Stop the male lead, Yan Xuanye, from turning evil.
The System grinned maliciously as it held up a warning sign reading “Soul Erasure”: “Dear Host, want to stay alive? Keep up your villainous persona and ‘redeem’ your target through bullying~”
Me: ? You do know bullying is illegal, right?
So now I spend every day dancing on the edge of going OOC:
On one hand, I keep up my spoiled-young-master act, yelling, “Ugly freak, get out and sweep the floor!” On the other, I secretly worry that the protagonist will freeze, starve, or get chopped up by my big brother.
My life sure is hard.
I diligently carry out my mission.
When the protagonist is hungry, I bring him food. When he cries, I wipe his tears. When he’s cold, I give him clothes. When he’s tired, I bring him a chair.
Wait... Why are you looking at me like that, protagonist?
Hate, confusion, and now obsession? Help! I just want to fill the progress bar, go home, and lie flat!
But just as I finally finish the mission and get my “Happy Ending,” returning to reality...
The computer screen suddenly cracks, and a long-fingered hand reaches through.
The man’s purple eyes are deep and mysterious. His smile is unhinged. “Young master, you flirted with me and ran? How many lifetimes do you plan to spend paying back what you owe me?”
Me: “...Can I still make a run for it?”
I have seen chapter 59 so far, which should be considered early stage. The emotional line of the article is naturally not blunt, with a sense of ambiguity and pull (which pokes at me), and some vivid psychological descriptions (forgive me for not speaking) that can better depict the protagonist's state. The plot twists are relatively smooth, and it is quite comfortable to watch (for me personally, I have the urge to continue reading). The article has a visual feel and the words can make the characters come alive (personal opinion). Good writing. In fact, what is more regrettable is that it may be goodbye to Jianghu, so we should continue to wait. If it is finished, write a long follow-up review and a systematic summary.
I read the first 12 chapters, but I'm not satisfied anymore, so I'm itching to write a book review. 1. World view: The general framework has not yet fully emerged, so let's not mention it for now (but the author basically said that it is about cultivating immortality, but the first ten chapters are all about the court, and it is estimated that an opportunity is needed for the protagonist to cultivate into immortality) (The main line currently looks to be to save and prevent the attack on the black. If he cultivates into immortality, it is estimated that there will be a fierce battle later?) 2. Plot: At present, the main plot is to save and prevent the evil attack (?) Or it is redemption literature (I also like it very much) (I don't know whether it is compact or soothing, it is a long and steady stream??) 3. Characters: The character is well established and consolidated (poor Xiao Yan, don't be sad, because your Wen Bao is here). Although the supporting role is introduced in a few strokes, the inner soul can also be seen (I will look at it later, and then I will talk about my understanding of the protagonist's character) 4. Writing style: very good and fluent, describing scenes, people, reactions, appearance... All good (I prefer writing style, I like it very much) 5. Innovation: Routines are very common, but the description method is quite good. Hope there is "redemption" and other meanings in Finally, the world is not only "evil", even if it is in tatters, kind people are mending it in their own way. 2025.6.13
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I think it's very interesting. I'd love to read more. Cheers to the author 😘[Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
Ahhhh, I like it so much 😳 It's really beautiful, please write more
Bala, bala, bala, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good (♥∀♥)
The plot progresses very smoothly, I hope the emotional line will also be strong [sending my heart]
This book is really well written, I must stick to it. I'm optimistic about you 😘