[Two male protagonists + traveling through books + cultivating immortals + redemption]
[In the early stage, she is cold and yandere, in the later stage, she looks like Long Aotian, but in reality, she is beautiful and powerful and brutally attacked.
The introduction is in the first person for convenience of expression, and the main text is in the third person.
Check out the end of the first chapter and have something to say.
My name is Wensheng. Because I stayed up late to catch up on the exciting novel "The Proud King", I was fed shit by a dog author, and I threw my phone in anger - and the next second, I turned into the cannon fodder of the same name that I despised.
And my mission is to prevent the male protagonist Yan Xuanye from turning dark.
The system slapped the "Soul Erasure" warning sign and smiled ferociously: "Dear, do you want to survive? Please maintain the vicious character and perform 'bullying redemption' on the target~"
Me:? Did you know that bullying is illegal?
So now I repeatedly jump on the edge of OOC every day:
While maintaining the bad boy's face and scolding "ugly monster, go sweep the floor", he secretly poked at the protagonist and worried that he would freeze to death and starve to death and be chopped down by my eldest brother.
Life looks very hard.
I work hard to complete the task.
When the protagonist is hungry, I bring him food, when he cries, I wipe his tears, when he is cold, I hand him clothes, when he is tired, I move a chair.
Wait... Protagonist, there's something wrong with your eyes!
From hate to confusion to paranoia? Help! I just want to fill up the progress bar and go home and lie down!
However, when I finally completed the task, I returned to reality with "HE"...
The computer screen suddenly cracked, and a hand with distinct joints stretched out.
The man's purple eyes were deep and his smile was sick: "Young master, are you going to run away after flirting with me? How many lifetimes do you plan to repay my debt?"
Me: "... Is it still too late to run away now?"
Reader comments
I have seen chapter 59 so far, which should be considered early stage.
The emotional line of the article is naturally not blunt, with a sense of ambiguity and pull (which pokes at me), and some vivid psychological descriptions (forgive me for not speaking) that can better depict the protagonist's state.
The plot twists are relatively smooth, and it is quite comfortable to watch (for me personally, I have the urge to continue reading). The article has a visual feel and the words can make the characters come alive (personal opinion). Good writing.
In fact, what is more regrettable is that it may be goodbye to Jianghu, so we should continue to wait. If it is finished, write a long follow-up review and a systematic summary.
I read the first 12 chapters, but I'm not satisfied anymore, so I'm itching to write a book review.
1. World view: The general framework has not yet fully emerged, so let's not mention it for the time being (but the author basically said that it is about cultivating immortality, but the first ten chapters are all about the court, and it is estimated that an opportunity is needed for the protagonist to cultivate into immortality) (The main line currently looks to be to save and prevent the attack on the evil. If he cultivates into immortality, it is estimated that there will be a fierce battle later?)
2. Plot: At present, the main plot is to save and prevent the evil attack (?) Or it is redemption literature (I also like it very much) (I don't know whether it is compact or soothing, it is a long and steady stream??)
3. Character: The character is well established and consolidated (poor Xiao Yan, don't be sad, because your Wen Bao is here), although the supporting role is introduced in a few strokes, the inner soul can also be seen (I will look at it later, and then I will talk about my understanding of the protagonist's character)
4. Writing style: very good and fluent, describing scenes, people, reactions, appearance... All good (I prefer writing style, I like it very much)
5. Innovation: Routines are very common, but the description method is quite good. Hope there is "redemption" and other meanings in
Finally, the world is not only "evil", even if it is in tatters, kind people are mending it in their own way.
2025.6.13
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It's really good to watch and the plot is tight and there's nothing wrong with it except for the lack of it.
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I've been short of books for a long time, but I finally found one that I like and it's a serial [crying] It's much better, I'm so hungry! ! !
Damn, it looks good. Keep up the good work, author [Sending heartfelt wishes]
Haokan ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶зI fell in love with this book already hehehehe [admiration] [sending heart]
The plot progresses very smoothly, I hope the emotional line will also be strong [sending my heart]
This book is really well written, I must stick to it. I'm optimistic about you [blowing kiss]
This is really beautiful. You can just close your eyes and drink it.
I have seen chapter 59 so far, which should be considered early stage. The emotional line of the article is naturally not blunt, with a sense of ambiguity and pull (which pokes at me), and some vivid psychological descriptions (forgive me for not speaking) that can better depict the protagonist's state. The plot twists are relatively smooth, and it is quite comfortable to watch (for me personally, I have the urge to continue reading). The article has a visual feel and the words can make the characters come alive (personal opinion). Good writing. In fact, what is more regrettable is that it may be goodbye to Jianghu, so we should continue to wait. If it is finished, write a long follow-up review and a systematic summary.
I read the first 12 chapters, but I'm not satisfied anymore, so I'm itching to write a book review. 1. World view: The general framework has not yet fully emerged, so let's not mention it for the time being (but the author basically said that it is about cultivating immortality, but the first ten chapters are all about the court, and it is estimated that an opportunity is needed for the protagonist to cultivate into immortality) (The main line currently looks to be to save and prevent the attack on the evil. If he cultivates into immortality, it is estimated that there will be a fierce battle later?) 2. Plot: At present, the main plot is to save and prevent the evil attack (?) Or it is redemption literature (I also like it very much) (I don't know whether it is compact or soothing, it is a long and steady stream??) 3. Character: The character is well established and consolidated (poor Xiao Yan, don't be sad, because your Wen Bao is here), although the supporting role is introduced in a few strokes, the inner soul can also be seen (I will look at it later, and then I will talk about my understanding of the protagonist's character) 4. Writing style: very good and fluent, describing scenes, people, reactions, appearance... All good (I prefer writing style, I like it very much) 5. Innovation: Routines are very common, but the description method is quite good. Hope there is "redemption" and other meanings in Finally, the world is not only "evil", even if it is in tatters, kind people are mending it in their own way. 2025.6.13
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this book this book is, this book's book book's book book's book's book's book's book's book, book book's book book's book book's book book's book book's book book's book book, book book is a very well-written book book is a very nice book is a great book to read. When I saw the number of pages below, I knew I was about to finish reading it... It's so beautiful, how could it only be this little? I feel that the logic of the writing is also very smooth. The author is not allowed to say that his writing skills are not good. Ahhhhhhh, I love this book so much
It's very good-looking, and I also like the character of the male protagonist. The author's writing is really great. I haven't read a book that appeals to me for a long time. I hope you will continue to read more books. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I think it's pretty [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It's really good to watch and the plot is tight and there's nothing wrong with it except for the lack of it.
I think it's very interesting. I'd love to read more. Cheers to the author [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
Ahhhh, I like it so much [shy] It's really beautiful, please write more
Bala, bala, bala, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good (♥∀♥)
I've been short of books for a long time, but I finally found one that I like and it's a serial [crying] It's much better, I'm so hungry! ! !
Damn, it looks good. Keep up the good work, author [Sending heartfelt wishes]
Haokan ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶зI fell in love with this book already hehehehe [admiration] [sending heart]
The plot progresses very smoothly, I hope the emotional line will also be strong [sending my heart]
This book is really well written, I must stick to it. I'm optimistic about you [blowing kiss]
This is really beautiful. You can just close your eyes and drink it.