I'm Just Banned for Life, Not Retired

The following is my feeling so far. 1. The protagonist is not brainless, but talent + hard work. The character gave me a kind of, emmm, the beginning of a thief's right way? (Manual dog head) 2. The characters are well developed and remind me of an old friend) 3. The plot is logical and has foreshadowing, so that some plots are not particularly abrupt. Example: "The way she looked at Lin Sheng at the moment was full of indifference and contempt that could not be concealed. It was as if all the misfortunes in her life were caused by this man." [The younger sister sees her older brother as the protagonist] It shows the dark side of the sister in contrast, and also hints that there will be a conflict between the sister and the brother later [I shouldn't over-interpret it...] This incident tells us the importance of the outline [Read carefully] But some of the foreshadowing feels like it was added temporarily because of the need for the plot. Example: My sister suddenly became able to [prevent spoilers] in order to lead to the weapon and her final destination, but I didn't see many clues before that [although I really like this kind of plot] 4. The attitude of each staff member gave me a feeling of being both an enemy and a friend. Summary: The full text gave me a feeling of online game competition, and the description of the characters is well developed. It is the second competitive text that I have the desire to follow after the Durian King. I just hope it will not be unfinished QwQ Summary: The above is just my subjective opinion! Carrots and cabbage, everyone has their own preferences.

It feels very good-looking, and it's not like you're invincible from the beginning. The protagonist is just an ordinary person, and he won the Triple Crown through hard work. The most important thing is that if you don't comment, the author will stop updating after a few days without gifts.

This is really a very novel book. The description of the whole war is very detailed, which gives people a fresh feeling. The characters are also very rich. Although the rating is not available yet, it is really good-looking. It really exceeded the original expectations! The only drawback is that the cover is a character from another game. Personally, I feel that it's a bit awkward to use characters from other games as a cover. Suggestion, really just a suggestion or it would be better to change the cover (just a suggestion, you can adopt it or not, don't criticize me🙏)

The subject matter is good and novel. There have been no new books like Full Time in recent years. This book is good. Some plots are not handled well and the dialogue is a bit immature. There is a lot of room for improvement. Five stars encourage it.

A score of 9 or above, a good one. There are flaws but I can't see them. It looks good if you focus on it. The writing is very good and surpasses most tomato novels. The fragments are also of a good level, which makes people scratch. The characterization is pretty good and vivid. It's just a little bit lacking. It's quite fascinating anyway.

I have read over a hundred chapters so far. This is the only book I've seen on Tomato that's like a meal replacement for a competitive group like Master. In addition to the fact that there are too many girls, it seems to be a harem story (although it is not considered so yet), I hope it will not be so in the future. The disadvantage is that the combat and battle scenes are not exciting enough. As a "magician", the protagonist is not very clear about the tactical arrangement of group cooperation. It is more of a general description of the mental journey of several girls and their personal strength. I hope there will be more descriptions of tactical arrangements later on, as magicians should have magic tricks. Overall, as long as the quality is up to par later, it's a good book for now. I hope you won't disappoint me later. When the book reached more than 400 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is set as a competitor who has no talent and was "abandoned" by the new particles (the fitness level is not high). He uses his careful observation, full preparation, and extreme efforts to make up for the gap with the "geniuses" and stand at the top of the world. However, apart from the tragic life experience of the protagonist that has been repeated countless times and the description of some gods and goddesses throughout the book, I can't see the protagonist's conception, layout, and wisdom in the battle situation. The protagonist's "mediocreness" in the game cannot be reversed by his own strength and wisdom. They only relied on the so-called "hostility" of the new particles and various "unfair" "plug-ins" (weapons) to turn the tables. The protagonist's teammates are set to be a group of "geniuses" with extremely high talents, but from the game, it's really hard to tell where the geniuses are. By more than 400 chapters, even one of the "chariots" is still a reckless man with a pitifully low sense of presence. Too many slots but no mouth I originally thought I would be happy to find a meal replacement book, but it turned out to be disappointing.

It looks good, the overall situation is based on the full-time master, but it is integrated into the current article, and all the characters are well shaped so far. It would be better if there are more [you can taste it carefully], but the character of the commander is a bit too classic, I hope there will be a personal breakthrough, otherwise this person just looks too much like the full-time master, but I am too sad for the old players. Can you arrange a highlight moment for an old player? Overall, it's very good. The eldest lady, the Italian "Wolf Girl", and the pikemen [laughing evilly] all have their own characteristics, and they don't fall into clichés. As mentioned earlier, the command is a bit facial. Xiao Taimei [Shy] has a very plump character. At first I thought she was a full-time expert Baozi type, but it turned out not to be the case. I was pleasantly surprised. Moreover, the characters and treatment of the protagonist and sister are very unique and surprising, but they are not poisonous anyway. There is nothing too toxic at the moment, except for the lack of content. But those old players are really becoming Japanese [laughing and crying]. They have been beaten up in various ways, but they still can't find any big faults. I hope they can also describe their highlights now. But the description of their past is still very interesting. The current problem is that there are too few [cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful. It has the feeling of a full-time master. I have my own thing that I love very much. However, one thing may be that the emotional change of my sister is too sudden. It feels weird, but it's okay. Then don't mess up! Don't mess up! Don't mess up! Say important things three times! The author must be happy every day~ It's so consuming! Can the author teach me how to write fight scenes? [Crying] It feels so difficult to write.

The characters are full of personality. Although there are many girls, there is currently no emotional line. It is not an invincible novel with an online IQ. It is worth reading [I understand]. So gender has never been an issue. What I am pursuing is just the romance of fighting. The early stage may be a bit long, but it is fun to start fighting in the later stage. I hope you can be patient. Maybe I didn't summarize it well, but this is a paragraph that the author describes more vividly: Lin Sheng straightened up slowly. He took out a lighter from his pocket. There was a click and the cigarette in his mouth was lit. He took a deep breath and blew out the thick white smoke. Slowly spit it out towards the ceiling. Amid the smoke, he spoke in a voice only he could hear. He uttered two words in a self-deprecating tone. "Idiot." I don't know who I am scolding. In the radiant palace, there is a badge. Represents supreme honor and belonging. In the silent darkness, a lighter. All that was left was the insignificant, fleeting light in the palm of his hand. 10.12 Attachment: I feel like I've misled others, and I'm a little scared [covering my face], because there are already a lot of competitive articles that go high and low and go crazy. This is a very good group portrait. There were more girls in the early stage, but they gradually became more established. As for the emotions between the characters, I feel more like friendship, family affection, and love. The expectations of younger generations, respect for seniors, etc., But I really can't taste love [face covering], the characters are all positive, there is no pure badness, now there is a kind of calm sea on the surface, and rough waves below, but the author's book related to the dark side is said to be the foreshadowing of this book, so you can rest assured.

The main line is clearly divided into two lines. The bright line is that the protagonist returns from suspension and regains the championship. The hidden line is the story of Shengzi fighting against capital and third-generation particles for the pure and beautiful field of Total War. Daily life is full of laughter and laughter, and the competition is also serious. I write about Lin Sheng, but not just Lin Sheng. Every professional player has their love for Total War and has their own personality charm (Shengzi is not the only one [crying]) To be honest, I have been chasing this book since the year before last (several devices Ovo, even if I am prepared, it always makes me cry. Now when I see the ending, I cry for Shengzi's journey and laugh for the wonderful life he lives now, so I write this book review. Special thanks to Teacher Huang for allowing me to discover such a profound book, such a vivid story, this group of interesting people, and this colorful field of total war.

It's very beautiful, all the details are well grasped, and the foreshadowing was quickly added, which is also very shocking. Each character has a story. According to the plot, it is the person who stood at the top of the old era and passed on his abilities to the people of the new era through the protagonist. It looks sad to me, the writing is so good It's boring again. It's a daily novel. The main character has no role at all.

The comment area says that it is a full-time master's style. In my opinion, it is higher than the full-time master in terms of narrative framework and depth, but weaker than the full-time master in terms of competition and emotion. However, this does not prevent it from being a novel worth reading. This is a novel with competition as the surface and science fiction as the core. The article has read more than 200 chapters, and the foreshadowing of the source of the third particle, the true purpose of cloud technology, the forces behind it, etc. Slowly surfaced. It must be said that the characters of Ruan Hao and Liu Sisi are very memorable, like a flower blooming in a fateful tragedy. From another perspective, these two children are more narrative. What makes me more disgusted is that the rate of having a girl is too high, it looks like a second-rate game. I hope you can tell me if this is the mainstream aesthetic nowadays.

Why is the score so low? To be honest, this book is really good in Tomato. The writing is okay, the ideas are smooth, and the pace is not sluggish. It gives me the feeling of reading a full-time master. Although it may be a little worse in all aspects, it must at least have a 9.0. Isn't this better than most of the novels written by Tomato newbies? Or is it that the general trend has now shifted towards Shuangwen, making this kind of writing less popular? Of course, there is also a shortcoming, that is, there is no description at all of the protagonist's recovery. It is just talk without action. Since it is a novel aimed at full-time masters, I hope that the details can be optimized as much as possible. I am looking forward to it! It lived up to my expectations, and the setting was very good. This third-generation particle completely pushed the entire book to a new stage, and it also included the protagonist's epoch-making breakthrough, which was the finishing touch. Hope to keep up the good work.

I have never read any novels or anime about Full Time, but only watched TV series. This is my first time reading this kind of subject. So far, this book is no worse than Full Time in my mind. Although it is about the protagonist, it is more of a group portrait. Everyone is full, every character is very vivid, and has its own story, personality, and emotions. Moment, I love this competition, and it can be considered realistic. In games, talent is more important than hard work, so if you are even close to catching up with talent, you have to work dozens or hundreds of times, and the fastest way is to innovate and be unpopular. In conclusion, this book is very good, and it also made me suddenly have a lot of interest in this genre. Great support for the author!!!

This book is really good. The emotions and shaping of the characters are very well described. In addition to the writing style, the polishing of the relationship between men and women is not very good, and it is not very brainless. To be honest, I don't know why it is rated 9.1. I think it deserves a higher score [Sending Hearts]

I have read Chapter 65 so far, let me briefly talk about it. The plot design is okay, above the passing mark, and the content is relatively novel, especially in terms of world view setting and battle setting. The character creation is also very good. The characters have their own distinctive characteristics and are not obtrusive. The writing style is reasonable, and the description of the artistic conception is also standard, without being blunt. The only shortcoming is that some events have a sudden turn without any preparation. The most prominent part is the part where Huo Qi meets his former classmate. The gangster classmate suddenly gets angry. Then there is a lack of description from other perspectives, which makes this part too failed. More should be added, such as the doubts of the protagonist group, Huo Qi's psychological description, and scenes from the perspectives of passers-by around him to make a transition. Other places are very good for the time being. Although there are some areas that cannot be handled well, they are very few. Five stars is no problem.

This book is really good to read, but there is one thing that I find very strange, that is, some people in it change too quickly, such as Su Yi. I feel that there is no foreshadowing, and then they wake up after being beaten by Liu Ziming. I personally feel that her change should not be so fast. After all, she has maintained the same life as a robot for more than ten years. Although she joined the Firefighters, I feel that there is no need to affect it. After all, she still maintains her original schedule after joining. You know, just dismissal. In my eyes, dismissal is just like a person's aura, pen edge, etc., It won't change so easily. As a result, she transformed directly because of one game. Even so, there are still flaws. The author has done a great job in portraying the characters. I also like the setting and plot very much (even the main character seems a bit mean-spirited to me...)! Come on, come on!

I don't know why the sense of déjà vu is so strong. After thinking about it, I realized that some of the character settings and emotional descriptions are a bit similar to Cang Qi. However, I still hope there can be more foreshadowing, so that the emotional descriptions written will be more realistic.

The time I spend reading may not be as long as those who spend more than 50 hours at a time, because for me, the book is over until the flashy chapter fades away, because I don't particularly like reading if lines, but this book is undoubtedly a good book. First of all, this book is a group portrait type. Almost every character who appears in it will have certain psychological problems, which are then solved by magicians in various dramatic ways on the field. And the group portrait is quite three-dimensional. The protagonist is the kind who laughs and laughs on the surface, but secretly burdens everyone. Until the last chapter of the main story that I saw, the protagonist barely showed his true side.

Very interesting, not a brainless cool article, but! It's really cool. It has written a lot of evil sides. The dark side of life, with evil deeds with good intentions, constitutes a living world. I am looking for praise from the author. I think this work is worth reading, so I recommended it.

The current progress is 552 chapters. It is a novel with a high probability of being. There is no female protagonist, but there are many ambiguous lines. I feel that 80% of the female characters appearing are ambiguous with the protagonist. If you look at it as a competitive novel, there is no concept of numerical values. The shield value, that is, the health bar, can be as thick as you want, or as thin as you want. In other words, you just follow the plot, and the blood bar is over after the plot is written. There is also the issue of the competition system. In the first article of the AB group in the summer split, it is written that the losing group can play the playoffs if they win two games. The second article is that Fengyan will play the playoffs with a score of 1-1. The first article of the playoffs is written as a double-elimination format. The second article is that the Firefly loses one game and then prepares for the World Championship. But putting aside the competitive elements, the author is very good at writing characters. Each character has its own distinctive characteristics and can leave a deep impression. They will not be the same as everyone else.

I read this book three times and abandoned it twice. The first two times were too boring in the early stages and I couldn't get into it. The third time I really ran out of books and couldn't resist reading it and I found that I was really surprised. The work done on the group portraits is really good. I can remember the distinct personality characteristics of each character. I personally feel that the intertwined plot of light and dark lines is very exciting. The past of the protagonist's brother and sister is also left blank. It gives readers a lot of room for imagination (Chinese language writing🤓) Ahem, in short, regardless of some early problems, the whole work is still flawless so far, the design of the whole battle is also very good, and the sister is so delicious (Sihasha😋😋😋, ahem, I hope the author will work hard and update, I will brush it as a love generator for you! 😋😋😋❤️

The characterization is also very good. The foreshadowing and recycling seem to be recycled a little too quickly, but they are handled very well. The transition of the plot is very smooth. There is no procrastination in writing too many chapters about training or descriptions of battles, except for the occasional second grade speech, such as "Are you going to return to the battlefield?" Which will give me goosebumps [face covering]. So far, the latest chapter has not had too many poisonous points. It can be said that it is above the level of food and grass, and it can be at least a 9.0 Book. As for the names of the characters, I can't remember them for an old bookworm like me. The appearance of the characters is also a bit sketchy. There are almost no shortcomings (if there are any shortcomings, they won't make me stay up late to post a comment at 4 a. M. After reading it) [Check it carefully]

Ah, when I read this book, it reminded me of The Age of Machine Girls, but there are quite a lot of differences. What makes me think the difference most is that The Age of Machine Girls is more of an excellent and enjoyable novel, while the characters in this book are more three-dimensional, there are many foreshadowings, and the foreshadowing is more natural, and the reversal during the battle is still very exciting to watch ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

The writing is very good, with shadows of a full-time master, and the characters are more three-dimensional. But there is a problem with 56. Whether it is the protagonist or other members of the team, it is too late to stand up when teammates are in trouble.

At the beginning, I was just reading it as a substitute for a full-time expert. The quality of the articles was not bad, so I continued reading. At first I thought the subject matter was very novel, but there was a short section in the middle that felt a bit ordinary. Now that I have read more than 400 chapters, I feel it is exciting again. Lin Sheng's unique brain circuit and dialogue with others are a major feature of the book, which brought a lot of laughter to the reading process. The main storyline of the story is quite exciting. The only flaw is that the description of the battle process in the full battle field is relatively boring (or in other words, the battle process is rarely written well). I usually just glance at the battle process and rarely read it in detail. I would give the overall score about 9.2 Points. One more thing, the update speed is very fast, there seem to be 7 chapters in one day? (I'm not sure about the specifics, but there are more and better ones than ordinary novels anyway)

This is another piece of gold that Ji Niang and I have encountered since we have already tasted many stones. In other books, you can cultivate immortality even if you can't escape the longevity theory, you can cultivate immortality even if your combat power collapses, and some of the plot connections are very inexplicable. The characters in this book are very delicate, and the first 150 chapters alone are very attractive. The plot is compact, not procrastinating, repetitive, or cliche. The plot is so immersive that sometimes just listening to it can make you imagine the scene just like a movie. It's really exciting. After more than a year of digging around, I finally found something that I think is gold. I have finally finished reading this book. After seeing the ending of more than 700 pictures of Yingbao, I feel that it is almost finished. It's very interesting, beautiful, and the setting is novel and immersive. Some withdrawal

It's a very good novel. Although I read most of the battles described by the author at a quantum speed, I can still understand the basic emotions. If I were to set a tone for this novel, it would be frustration and growth. However, this book is basically joy-oriented. (Maybe it's just me, but I think) this book has a lot of words describing the characters, both the protagonist and the supporting characters. Therefore, when reading the book, you can feel the mood of each character (even if the character is a gay character, you can feel a little bit). The plot is very smooth and can attract people to continue reading. The author has put a lot of thought into it. However, I still feel that some parts are a bit deus ex machina, maybe because I am in the reader's perspective, but it doesn't hurt in the whole book. Now that I have seen the top four of the World Championship, I am going to read it first and look forward to reading it in one go. At the same time, we would also like to thank the author for creating such a work for us.

Needless to say, it is great. It is a rare excellent group portrait article by Tomato. The ending probably begins in Chapter 710, and then adopts the form of multiple ending if lines. It's very comfortable to watch CP with various girls in the forest area. Don't worry about the writing style. The author has written several books on 7cat and they are all excellent. (What am I talking about on Twitter? Obviously I just want to see how long it takes to read) The second part is also delicious😋

I feel that the writing is quite good, especially the combat. It is imaginable and I can feel that the author has put in the effort. However, the combat of some weapons is a bit sloppy. After all, it is a relatively unpopular weapon (I have never heard of it in real life, and it is not in the game). In terms of emotions, It is written with a combination of character and personality, especially the interaction between Lin Chu and Ying Bao, and the world view is not much to say, it is quite satisfactory. Finally, there is less foreshadowing and more daily writing, which can give an individual between the best and the top. There are few e-sports articles that can be read by Tomato