I Was Banned for Life, Not Retired

The following is my feeling so far. 1. The protagonist is not brainless, but talent + hard work. The character gave me a kind of, emmm, the beginning of a thief's right way? (Manual dog head) 2. The characters are well developed and remind me of an old friend) 3. The plot is logical and has foreshadowing, so that some plots are not particularly abrupt. Example: "The way she looked at Lin Sheng at the moment was full of indifference and contempt that could not be concealed. It was as if all the misfortunes in her life were caused by this man." [The younger sister sees her older brother as the protagonist] It shows the dark side of the sister in contrast, and also hints that there will be a conflict between the sister and the brother later [I shouldn't over-interpret it...] This incident tells us the importance of the outline [Read carefully] But some of the foreshadowing feels like it was added temporarily because of the need for the plot. Example: My sister suddenly became able to [prevent spoilers] in order to lead to the weapon and her final destination, but I didn't see many clues before that [although I really like this kind of plot] 4. The attitude of each staff member gave me a feeling of being both an enemy and a friend. Summary: The full text gave me a feeling of online game competition, and the description of the characters is well developed. It is the second competitive text that I have the desire to follow after the Durian King. I just hope it will not be unfinished QwQ Summary: The above is just my subjective opinion! Carrots and cabbage, everyone has their own preferences.

It feels very good-looking, and it's not like you're invincible from the beginning. The protagonist is just an ordinary person, and he won the Triple Crown through hard work. The most important thing is that if you don't comment, the author will stop updating after a few days without gifts.

This is really a very novel book. The description of the whole war is very detailed, which gives people a fresh feeling. The characters are also very rich. Although the rating is not available yet, it is really good-looking. It really exceeded the original expectations! The only drawback is that the cover is a character from another game. Personally, I feel that it's a bit awkward to use characters from other games as a cover. Suggestion, really just a suggestion or it would be better to change the cover (just a suggestion, you can adopt it or not, don't criticize me🙏)

The subject matter is good and novel. There have been no new books like Full Time in recent years. This book is good. Some plots are not handled well and the dialogue is a bit immature. There is a lot of room for improvement. Five stars encourage it.

I have read over a hundred chapters so far. This is the only book I've seen on Tomato that's like a meal replacement for a competitive group like Master. In addition to the fact that there are too many girls, it seems to be a harem story (although it is not considered so yet), I hope it will not be so in the future. The disadvantage is that the combat and battle scenes are not exciting enough. As a "magician", the protagonist is not very clear about the tactical arrangement of group cooperation. It is more of a general description of the mental journey of several girls and their personal strength. I hope there will be more descriptions of tactical arrangements later on, as magicians should have magic tricks. Overall, as long as the quality is up to par later, it's a good book for now. I hope you won't disappoint me later. When the book reached more than 400 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is set as a competitor who has no talent and was "abandoned" by the new particles (the fitness level is not high). He uses his careful observation, full preparation, and extreme efforts to make up for the gap with the "geniuses" and stand at the top of the world. However, apart from the tragic life experience of the protagonist that has been repeated countless times and the description of some gods and goddesses throughout the book, I can't see the protagonist's conception, layout, and wisdom in the battle situation. The protagonist's "mediocreness" in the game cannot be reversed by his own strength and wisdom. They only relied on the so-called "hostility" of the new particles and various "unfair" "plug-ins" (weapons) to turn the tables. The protagonist's teammates are set to be a group of "geniuses" with extremely high talents, but from the game, it's really hard to tell where the geniuses are. By more than 400 chapters, even one of the "chariots" is still a reckless man with a pitifully low sense of presence. Too many slots but no mouth I originally thought I would be happy to find a meal replacement book, but it turned out to be disappointing.

A score of 9 or above, a good one. There are flaws but I can't see them. It looks good if you focus on it. The writing is very good and surpasses most tomato novels. The fragments are also of a good level, which makes people scratch. The characterization is pretty good and vivid. It's just a little bit lacking. It's quite fascinating anyway.

The main line is clearly divided into two lines. The bright line is that the protagonist returns from suspension and regains the championship. The hidden line is the story of Shengzi fighting against capital and third-generation particles for the pure and beautiful field of Total War. Daily life is full of laughter and laughter, and the competition is also serious. I write about Lin Sheng, but not just Lin Sheng. Every professional player has their love for Total War and has their own personality charm (Shengzi is not the only one 😢) To be honest, I have been chasing this book since the year before last (several devices Ovo, even if I am prepared, it always makes me cry. Now when I see the ending, I cry for Shengzi's journey and laugh for the wonderful life he lives now, so I write this book review. Special thanks to Teacher Huang for allowing me to discover such a profound book, such a vivid story, this group of interesting people, and this colorful field of total war.

It looks good, the overall situation is based on the full-time master, but it is integrated into the current article, and all the characters are well shaped so far. It would be better if there are more [you can taste it carefully], but the character of the commander is a bit too classic, I hope there will be a personal breakthrough, otherwise this person just looks too much like the full-time master, but I am too sad for the old players. Can you arrange a highlight moment for an old player? Overall, it's very good. The eldest lady, the Italian "Wolf Girl", and the pikemen 😏 all have their own characteristics, and they don't fall into clichés. As mentioned earlier, the command is a bit facial. Xiao Taimei 😳 has a very plump character. At first I thought she was a full-time expert Baozi type, but it turned out not to be the case. I was pleasantly surprised. Moreover, the characters and treatment of the protagonist and sister are very unique and surprising, but they are not poisonous anyway. There is nothing too toxic at the moment, except for the lack of content. But those old players are really becoming Japanese 😂. They have been beaten up in various ways, but they still can't find any big faults. I hope they can also describe their highlights now. But the description of their past is still very interesting. The current problem is that there are too few 😢😢😢

The characters are full of personality. Although there are many girls, there is currently no emotional line. It is not an invincible novel with an online IQ. It is worth reading [I understand]. So gender has never been an issue. What I am pursuing is just the romance of fighting. The early stage may be a bit long, but it is fun to start fighting in the later stage. I hope you can be patient. Maybe I didn't summarize it well, but this is a paragraph that the author describes more vividly: Lin Sheng straightened up slowly. He took out a lighter from his pocket. There was a click and the cigarette in his mouth was lit. He took a deep breath and blew out the thick white smoke. Slowly spit it out towards the ceiling. Amid the smoke, he spoke in a voice only he could hear. He uttered two words in a self-deprecating tone. "Idiot." I don't know who I am scolding. In the radiant palace, there is a badge. Represents supreme honor and belonging. In the silent darkness, a lighter. All that was left was the insignificant, fleeting light in the palm of his hand. 10.12 Attachment: I feel like I've misled others, and I'm a little scared [covering my face], because there are already a lot of competitive articles that go high and low and go crazy. This is a very good group portrait. There were more girls in the early stage, but they gradually became more established. As for the emotions between the characters, I feel more like friendship, family affection, and love. The expectations of younger generations, respect for seniors, etc., But I really can't taste love 🤦, the characters are all positive, there is no pure badness, now there is a kind of calm sea on the surface, and rough waves below, but the author's book related to the dark side is said to be the foreshadowing of this book, so you can rest assured.

It's very beautiful. It has the feeling of a full-time master. I have my own thing that I love very much. However, one thing may be that the emotional change of my sister is too sudden. It feels weird, but it's okay. Then don't mess up! Don't mess up! Don't mess up! Say important things three times! The author must be happy every day~ It's so consuming! Can the author teach me how to write fight scenes? 😢 It feels so difficult to write.