I traveled through time and became Nagato who was carrying rice in Konoha. The original owner enjoyed carrying rice, but he left me a cauldron that would destroy Konoha. Don't panic, let's see how I create a new path for Nagato.
I'm a new writer, I hope you can read it to your liking.
Reader comments
The author, the essence of Shura Dao is the spirit of other world. With the help of Uzumaki Nagato, he can launch the Super Shinra Tensei that pushes Konoha flatly. He can also launch the Super Shura attack, channeling a nuclear bomb and unleashing a nuclear explosion on the ninja world.
To be honest, I felt weird at the front, I didn't say I liked it very much, but that's it, I felt that the interactions after the Xianxian surgery and so on were quite interesting, so I came here to give a rating. To be honest, I saw how you said it was good to see so many people who were assisting the characters, some were injured, and suffered so many injuries. To be honest, it was quite uncomfortable, but, I really want to watch it, and I want to comfort myself. I'll read it if I want to read it. I'll watch it if I want [laughing]
Although the author looks like a novice, the writing is surprisingly NB. I hope it can strengthen Nagato's strong character and leadership skills and write a little more emotional drama. The writing is very good. Come on, author.
Tsunade is a bit annoying. Although she won't kill him, Nagato lacks the power to suppress. The big villain will use the thunderous method of the big villain.
I think it's okay so far. But the author should think carefully about the heroine. For a novice writer like you, the best way is to have no heroine or only one heroine. Don't think about the harem that is easy to crash. I have read too many Naruto stories because of the heroine's harem.
Well, after reading it, it was indeed okay. Except for some minor points, um, it was harmless and still good. The future is promising
Hinata rolls her eyes, most authors who write about Nagato never thought of this, great stuff, the author is awesome
It's well written, but the premise doesn't have that much kindness in mind to read it.
The front is actually pretty average.
The plot after chapter 16 is very interesting, but there is too little.
In fact, it's quite fun to watch it without thinking. It's the first time I see one-eyed Hinata [face covering]. It's quite good, but it's just too little.
The content is very exciting. Judging from the author's progress, this book should be discontinued... It's a pity [I'm about to cry]
A very good Naruto fanfic. Much better than most on the market.
It looks good, but I got it too early [face covering]
Fortunately, I think it's quite interesting.
Come on, come on, you can do it
Okay, pretty good-looking
Very nice. I hope it will be the same later.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
[Laughing and crying] Why is the score only 5.6? It's too low. I'll give you a plus.
Anyway, I think it's okay, please support me.
There are very few books about Payne in Tomatoes, but this one feels right.
Good looking, but sometimes a bit nonsense
Beautiful and interesting, recommended
There's not much to say, it's just great, it's the ultimate invincible pleasure.
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Worth recommending, very good
It's very beautiful, so touching.
It's interesting, the author will keep up the good work
I want to accompany you year after year, decade after decade
I think it's okay, Tomato doesn't have any good Naruto fanfics
It's the first time I've seen a spirit penetrate Nagato's body [laughing evilly]
Not bad, you can use some technology later to assimilate the Samsara Eye into your own, and then you can follow the squad to attack each other in Gundam [cool]
The author, the essence of Shura Dao is the spirit of other world. With the help of Uzumaki Nagato, he can launch the Super Shinra Tensei that pushes Konoha flatly. He can also launch the Super Shura attack, channeling a nuclear bomb and unleashing a nuclear explosion on the ninja world.
To be honest, I felt weird at the front, I didn't say I liked it very much, but that's it, I felt that the interactions after the Xianxian surgery and so on were quite interesting, so I came here to give a rating. To be honest, I saw how you said it was good to see so many people who were assisting the characters, some were injured, and suffered so many injuries. To be honest, it was quite uncomfortable, but, I really want to watch it, and I want to comfort myself. I'll read it if I want to read it. I'll watch it if I want [laughing]
Although the author looks like a novice, the writing is surprisingly NB. I hope it can strengthen Nagato's strong character and leadership skills and write a little more emotional drama. The writing is very good. Come on, author. Tsunade is a bit annoying. Although she won't kill him, Nagato lacks the power to suppress. The big villain will use the thunderous method of the big villain.
I think it's okay so far. But the author should think carefully about the heroine. For a novice writer like you, the best way is to have no heroine or only one heroine. Don't think about the harem that is easy to crash. I have read too many Naruto stories because of the heroine's harem. Well, after reading it, it was indeed okay. Except for some minor points, um, it was harmless and still good. The future is promising
Hinata rolls her eyes, most authors who write about Nagato never thought of this, great stuff, the author is awesome
It's well written, but the premise doesn't have that much kindness in mind to read it.
The front is actually pretty average. The plot after chapter 16 is very interesting, but there is too little.
In fact, it's quite fun to watch it without thinking. It's the first time I see one-eyed Hinata [face covering]. It's quite good, but it's just too little.
The content is very exciting. Judging from the author's progress, this book should be discontinued... It's a pity [I'm about to cry]
A very good Naruto fanfic. Much better than most on the market.
It looks good, but I got it too early [face covering]
Fortunately, I think it's quite interesting.
Come on, come on, you can do it
Okay, pretty good-looking
Very nice. I hope it will be the same later.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
[Laughing and crying] Why is the score only 5.6? It's too low. I'll give you a plus.
Anyway, I think it's okay, please support me.
There are very few books about Payne in Tomatoes, but this one feels right.
Good looking, but sometimes a bit nonsense
Beautiful and interesting, recommended
There's not much to say, it's just great, it's the ultimate invincible pleasure.
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Worth recommending, very good
It's very beautiful, so touching.
It's interesting, the author will keep up the good work
I want to accompany you year after year, decade after decade
I think it's okay, Tomato doesn't have any good Naruto fanfics
It's the first time I've seen a spirit penetrate Nagato's body [laughing evilly]
Not bad, you can use some technology later to assimilate the Samsara Eye into your own, and then you can follow the squad to attack each other in Gundam [cool]