Redeem Him in the Fast Travel World

The writing is good, although the first world is a bit confusing, but it's not too well-written. I think Gu's love for Liu should be superficial, wrapped up in the concept of responsibility and kindness in his heart. This is Gu's "like". You should be involuntarily attracted to the heroine, someone who has just begun to fall in love, is ignorant, and subconsciously pays attention to her. If you are making a fuss about not being able to distinguish between likes and dislikes, it won't be too shocking if you write about Gu more clearly.

I am willing to give this book five stars for a story [crying] In this world of "Stepmother's Guide to Raising Cubs", I would like to call it the pinnacle of the work [Crying] It is really amazing and amazing [Adoration] It can be read as an independent short story [Adoration] The author Da Da writes that Yi Yi is sensible and has the most upright views [crying] I think Wei Wei's love for Yi Yi is "salvation". It makes Yi Yi learn to refuse, let Yi Yi know "if you want it, just say it", and let Yi Yi feel the taste of being loved... Thank you very much for still liking Wei Wei, and Jujuju also likes Yiyi! Moreover, the author's heroine (Yiyi's biological mother) has internal conflicts and even sinister feelings, but in the author's writing she does not use dirty tricks on the heroine (Wei Wei) like other novels, but chooses her own life after seeing clearly [crying] I think you don't need to read the other chapters of the story, but I invite everyone to read this story! ! ! [Crying] Please feel the delicacy of the author's writing and see the characters created by the author [Sending Hearts]

The writing is excellent, and I personally think it is a redemption story. The heroine is also very smart I recommend everyone to start watching the second world. Now the world behind is really well written

[Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one] This book is really good! Very nice! ! ! I was short of books for a week and finally found this one. Key point [shy] I recommend that sisters start reading the second world. The author of the first world may not have figured out the preferences of Tomato readers yet, so the writing is a bit frustrating, but in my opinion it is also good. The second world has taken off since the beginning. I especially like the story about the talented husband [Sending Hearts] with a novel plot, the heroine has a brain, and the basic villain is off the assembly line after just 2 chapters. Although it is a supporting role, it will not dwell too much on the plot of the original male and female protagonists, and it will basically be taken care of. Keep writing like this, I will never leave you [Bird Food Masterwork]

I like the stepmother plane very much. The writing is really warm. Who wouldn't want to have such considerate parents and a loving family? They are not blindly trying to please their stepsons, but they are also good at teaching, not just one by one. I think I can also understand it when I read it. It is a really, really good plane. Although I think the emotional line is the same as that of the male protagonist, it is not bad✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎

You have to skip the first world and start reading from the second world. Every world is very sweet and sweet (except the first world). The author writes very well and very naturally. I like this book very much. I hope to continue writing. It's not enough [crying] If anyone reads (The General's Little Green Plum) and feels suffocated and angry, don't abandon the book. There is a twist at the back~ Every small world is beautiful, I also like the warm cookies, and I am also very moved [almost crying]

I watched three or four small worlds in one go, it was really interesting! Although she knows the plot, it can be seen as an immersive fast-travel. The heroine uses her wisdom to change her own tragedy in the original plot and save the male partner in the plot. The first world gave me the impression that the heroine has her own goals and is not interested in love. It is because of the task requirements and the tragedy of her previous life. She followed her own strategy step by step to promote her marriage with the hero. After the marriage, she gradually expressed her feelings because of the sincerity of the hero. Of course, Qianqian hopes that each small world can have a few extra chapters. I love sweet love~

It took me several days to read it. There are very few quick time series that I can read completely, and there are very few quick time series that I like. However, the author's two quick time series are both to my liking. I like them very much and read them. The main author's writing is very good and very immersive. The heroine's system only involves completing tasks and settling points. The rare shopping mall purchases are all for saving people. It is equivalent to the heroine not having a golden finger at all. Every world is very exciting, but the first world is slightly inferior. I don't understand why there are so many fast-travel movies with high ratings and lots of comments. Some have good themes but poor writing, and some have good writing but constant cheating throughout. The ones I like include the author's two quick-travel movies. The writing content is obviously very exciting, but the reviews and ratings are not very good. Some fast-travel books start with 50 chapters in each world. The shortcomings of the author's two fast-travel books are that they are a bit short, and some plots are skipped over. Some of the knowledge learned by the heroine in each world of fast travel will follow the heroine and be used in future worlds when it can be used, but the heroine here will not, and each world will follow the personality of the original owner. I hope the author writes more fast-travel stories and has more chapters. It's really good to read. There is a type of quick wear where the concubine and mistress are paired up to separate the male and female protagonists, and there is another type which is dedicated to revenge. Both of them are very good. The author will consider writing about them in the future. I hope to see more works from the author.

It's a very immersive experience. I really like the story about the stepmother's guide to raising cubs. It's not thrilling, but very warm. Every description in the text is very warm. I feel so happy that I really want to cry😭. I also like the story about being a teacher for an autistic child. The relationship with the male protagonist is also casual and smooth.

I strongly recommend you not to skip the first story Everyone seems to think that the first story is not good. The heroine's step-by-step planning is really exciting! ! The highlight of the story is all about the heroine. The heroine is very sober. She is not planning this for the love of a man, but for the man's financial background! ! What she was looking for was the benefits that her status as the second son of the duke could bring. The male protagonist was just her pawn. A low rating may indicate a sweet treat that does not meet the general requirements of Tomato readers. But the heroine is so charming. Every story can reveal different shining points of the heroine. They don't treat the mission target like a dog licking the food into the target's mouth. The male protagonists are also very good pendants for the female protagonist. Their personalities and behaviors are all beneficial to the female protagonist. It's so cool [Like] PS: Although the heroine and the supporting actress are well portrayed, some scene descriptions are still very censorious. In two or three worlds, there are parties where men are chatting and women are working.

The first one is The World Says Don't Read It, I insist on reading it. It makes me angry. I gave up halfway through reading it, but I found a new book, and it turned out to be an author. Then I came back and continued reading. The rest is very interesting [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] It's so well written. I wanted to cry to death about the Emperor's article [crying] [crying] [crying]

It looks good, it looks really good. I like the first world so much. She is strategizing step by step. She is ruthless to her enemies and even more ruthless to herself. She is a very smart and calculating heroine! The subsequent worlds don't have the "scheming" of the first world. They are all small happiness types, and there are even a few bugs... The female protagonist doesn't hurry up to deal with her enemies, but waits until she is tricked before solving them. The following worlds are too dependent on the male protagonist, which makes it uncomfortable to watch.

Eight points! The rhythm of the storyline is very good. The first world is not as bad as the comments or the author said. After all, it is impossible for every male CP to be perfect when doing tasks. The later world is also very interesting. I really like the world of the female president. In fact, I am not surprised by the reversal in the later part. On the contrary, it is a strong match between the two. The tolerant male protagonist allows the female protagonist to be temporarily confused by the wild flowers on the roadside, but in the end he is completely the right one. Haha, it is very refreshing to see the later part. I also really like the world of Stepmother. It is light and warm, giving people a very tender feeling. In fact, I feel that the writing behind it is very good. It is very suitable for reading when I am in a literary shortage. It is not particularly thrilling, but it can be read comfortably even if the flow is long [Sending Hearts]

The writing is really delicate, I really like the aspect of Chongxi [send my heart] [send my heart]

It's been a long time since I read a book word for word and I'm almost done with it! Although each plane is short, the text is detailed, and all the holes dug are filled. In the final ending, the heroine is on a fast-travel mission to save her brother. The perspective of family love is rare. Babies, please note that this is a non-fixed CP. If you want 1v1 double cleansing, please take a detour [blowing kiss]

Super pretty! ! I think both of this author's two quick travel novels are very good-looking. I don't know why the ratings are so low! And it gets better and better the further you go, you can feel the improvement of the writing style! Moreover, I feel that the writing style written by Sitting is also very stable and can echo before and after. In addition, the heroine in each small chapter is very strategic and has a very stable feeling, and there are all the plots that I love to watch hahahaha! ! Highly recommended!

How should I put it, some interfaces really love men. If the task was to conquer the male protagonist, I think my acceptance would be pretty good, but it's not the case. The author's writing style, plot, and ideas made it really easy for me to follow, but the individual interfaces were really frustrating. (The following contains spoilers) It's too tiring to name the male protagonist in the first world; I don't know how to fall in love with him in the emperor's world, so much that he is willing to give everything; the female president's poverty alleviation object is very annoying, but the novelty is acceptable; needless to say the childhood sweetheart of the general, the female protagonist is purely infatuated, the male protagonist also interacts closely with the female partner, and there are two worlds. Other worlds are still worth seeing. I like the prince and the technology boss very much.

It's very beautiful. I can't find any problems with the writing and plot. The heroine completes the task strategically, but at the same time she has a very soft heart. She is not an emotionless task machine. I like this setting. I will always support you, author!

The low rating is probably because everyone likes this kind of Long Aotian-style strong and invincible heroine, but I like this article very much because the heroine is the kind of principled heroine who can control people's hearts. To put it bluntly, she is the type who uses her brains without the invincible cheats.

This article is truly a treasure! It's so beautiful. The rating hasn't come up yet. It should go up to 9. The more I read, the more reluctant I am to leave it. I want to keep it and read it slowly. I finished it in one glance. [Crying] [Crying] The article is very interesting.

The length of each plane is very appropriate, and the layout is unconventional. Of course, the most praiseworthy thing is that the logical line of the story is very smooth [I almost cried]. Some worlds may be a little dull to read, but they feel very narrated. After all, plainness is the real thing hahahaha. The author should be a very wise person in life. I have been happily healed by Zhiwei ~ I like every story starting from "The Return of Emperor Protector" [Sending Hearts] The author has gradually become better.

This book is very good. The detailed sentences, as well as the characters' demeanor, movements and psychological language are really attractive. In addition, it has the psychology of different characters in different worlds, the pull of the characters and the reversal of relationships. It is really worth recommending [Adoration] [Adoration] The most tender words are about Xiao Zai Yiyi, but the chapter about the female CEO is the most exciting one. There are very classic words (ten CEOs, nine stomach problems), and the most fulfilling plot is about protecting the emperor~. Really worth recommending

Good. The first world is not very nice and can be skipped. The world becomes more and more interesting as we go to the back, and the title says it is about redeeming the male protagonist, but in fact, some of the later worlds are more about redeeming oneself. I like this very much.

Every world is quite interesting, but in the end, it turns out to be Yuan Ling when we return to reality. The non-fixed CP in the previous small world makes Yuan Ling and the emperor in the real world less difficult to fight. The stepmother's world of raising cubs is very interesting. The only thing that bothers me is that the female is clean and the male is unclean. The female protagonist can't stand it. I can tolerate the unclean female and the male uncle, but overall it's okay.

It's really good~ It was finished before I knew it. I rarely read novels that are updated, but I finished this one without any pain. I didn't want to comment at first, but I recently read another serialized fast-travel novel by the author. It's also very good, but the ratings of the two novels are so low [what], so I thought of commenting to support the author [shy], it's really good. I hope the author will write more and love more [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I think it's a very interesting quick-travel story. Each story has a different style. I really like this kind of story with logical and smooth actions. The female protagonist can calculate a relationship to help her family like in the first world (although many people are unhappy with the male protagonist, but I am quite happy to see the female protagonist scheming), or she can sense something wrong and withdraw decisively like the idol male lead in the world, or she can buy a son for her husband like the stepmother (laughs), or her sweet love can end. Some of the supporting characters in it are also a bit intriguing, but overall it's a good quickie.

Immersive fast-travel. Each short story is good, very warm, with tears in the warmth. Secondly, I thought there would be foreshadowing in the world of cultivating immortals, hahaha. The story is more emotionally delicate, and adding a few extra chapters should be even better. Overall, it is very good, and the pace is fast. You can watch it. Hey, why is there a side story? I didn't see it yesterday. It's really good. It was successfully completed 🌹🌹🌹

Every story is very interesting and interesting. The author's writing style is very good. It is not like many fast-travel novels. The male and female protagonists fall in love at first sight until death, and the supporting characters are all evil and do not end well. These stories are all down-to-earth and reasonable [Like][Like][Like]

It's so good. Every story makes me feel very interesting. There are different endings and stories in different genres. The author is so good at writing. I got into this book from another one. The author will update it quickly. I want to continue to read block-wearing and this kind of stuff. I can't get enough [Adoration] @AYA I hope the author will continue to write in this genre. Do you family members have any similar recommendations? Is there anyone with the heroine strategy type who ends up together?

The penultimate world: The stepmother's guide to raising cubs, very well written! The writing is very delicate and warm. It's true that everyone is trying to live a serious life, which is very colorful and full of life.