The Girl of Destiny Next to the Devil Boy

Is it reasonable for the author to give himself five stars [shy] If readers have any comments, you can leave them and I will adopt them if they are reasonable. But please don't let the author open a harem, because I can only write about a single female protagonist, and I only want to write about a single female protagonist. Thank you for your understanding. I hope you will support me [blowing kiss]

It is intuitive and does not hide it. Killing is killing, but it can also be seen that the protagonist still has the correct three views. It is just that he may have killed too many people and is a bit numb. The setting is not very novel, but at least there are no big flaws or flaws. It may be that the language layout and the length of the sentences are a little flawed, but it is indeed a very good book.

Urban superpowers All employees' IQ online (✓) The character design is consistent (✓) The male and female protagonists are sweet (✓) The story is logically clear (✓) Little people also have brilliance (✓) Emotional scenes don't take the spotlight (✓)

The worldview is well constructed, but the plot seems to have too little shaping of other people. Also, Tomato usually eats more system articles now, especially those related to time, rules, and reincarnation. They are usually large articles. If you want to build a more perfect process outline, you can, but if you want to be able to write down this kind of complete process, the starting point is estimated to be millions of words. Especially for a book like this kind of time reincarnation, there must be a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. The logical setting in the later stage must be related to the previous text. I can only say that this type of book is still a bit difficult to write. I am very grateful to the author for giving this book an ending. I hope it will get better and better in the future. Come on, brother author [Upvote] [Upvote] [Upvote]

Support The author's switching between plot and daily life is very smooth, and the development of emotional lines is delicate and smooth. It is highly recommended because it is not embarrassing in terms of viewing. The rhythm of the plot is well grasped, neither compact nor boring, the foreshadowing depth is appropriate, and the author's writing style is interesting and very top-notch. The current plot is not toxic, the protagonist's halo is not obvious, and the protagonist's values ​​​​are normal and he will not kill indiscriminately or be a virgin. It is very praised. Just leave a book review when you see this (this is a Chinese medicine for him (≧∇≦))

It is really a good book. Mu Yong questioned it. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. This is a low-level martial world. The daily life of the protagonist and the heroine is not much, but the little sweetness revealed in the slightly solemn atmosphere amplifies the emotional impact in the final ending. It's really good to watch, looking forward to the extra episodes. Although the author's writing skills are indeed not very good, and the repeated deletions of the outline also affect the perception, it is still highly recommended to read it. The main characters are very full, the plots are interlocking, and the pitfalls are filled in. The interspersed memories are very immersive, and there are knives, but life is full of regrets and loneliness. If the author has dealt with the aftermath of life, and will publish a new book, I will definitely come and read it.

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that I can read so comfortably. The male and female protagonists are very well designed. After reading a hundred chapters, the overall feeling is good. The main plot and various branch plots are also quite interesting. Unfortunately, this book may not be very long, and the author has changed from double updates to single updates. But as long as it doesn't end unfinished and doesn't get lost, this novel is worth reading [Congratulations] Come on author

I watched it, and the ending was also expected, but the ending was a bit rushed, probably because there was no time, but I think the ending should not be like this. I believe the author also wanted to give them a good ending. In short, it was very interesting to watch. (Hurry up and make the extra story) [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It is more comfortable to read. Compared with other novels about combat, it is very good at writing about daily life. Even if you only read about daily life, this book is still quite good. I hope the author will not stop updating it.

Nice! The male protagonist is not invincible in strength, his development is reasonable, and there is no plot that goes against the sky. The way the male and female protagonists get along is very natural, and the details feel so sweet (✪▽✪)

Shuhuang found it in the single heroine tag. It has two strong characters and a single heroine. The plot is quite exciting. Keep up the good work, author.

If you use the same knife as Lan Lin's, you are waiting for Ang Laoden [smile]

There are a lot of foreshadowings. I really want to know the life experiences of the male and female protagonists, which makes people anxious. This is a good-looking book [heartfelt]. It is not too poisonous, but there are too many daily routines in the early stage. The author is also very interesting [laugh][laugh][laugh]

I like the story setting of this book very much, and I think the writing is very fresh. There may be other books of the same type that I haven't seen, but I still think it caught my eye. I think the author can slow down the relationship more carefully, and add some inner readings of the heroine in the first few chapters to foreshadow the relationship between the hero and heroine so that the relationship between the hero and heroine is not so sudden. But author, I believe you hope you can give us a better plot. [Laughing][laughing][admiration][admiration][like] If you don't like it, please don't comment. Just show your personal concerns.

It's not bad. It attracted me right from the beginning. I've been short of books for a week now, so I decided to read Urban Power High Martial Arts. This book is okay. The setting and plot are good and attractive. I prefer this kind of humorous style.

It feels more comfortable to watch. The heroine and the male protagonist give me a very light feeling. The content and ideas are also very good. Please keep writing [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

@Qingchui The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, I personally think it is good. I just need more roles for the female protagonists, and keep at it, author, I believe you can do it. This is the 5-star review I only gave because of the heroine Jiang Ying.

What's going on with the heroine's feeling of motherhood?

Can the author write an if line for a happy ending (I was stunned by the knife QAQ)

So, what is the effect of soul siphon?

It's quite sweet, I like it [admiration]

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Without her, I would like to give you a five-star review, and at the same time, I look forward to the heroine's graceful return. [Sending my heart to you] The days without her always feel like a piece is missing. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope Jiang Ying will return soon. It's a pity that I can't post pictures here

So far, it seems to be okay, and I like it better [get it]

Give the author five stars. This is a good book. It's beautiful.

Five stars are given as encouragement, but I personally feel that the plot is too urgent, there are too few daily interludes, and the overall content is too tight. This must have a lot to do with the author's mentality.

Very well written! The characters of the male and female protagonists are very good! Come on!

Great brother, great! This is too spicy for my taste! Gaowu + single female protagonist (it must be a single female protagonist at the moment)

After reading this I want to read the prequel [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]