I Came to the Capital to Cancel My Engagement.

At the beginning of the story, the heroine Jiang Hailan is placed in the center of the whirlpool of the disparity between a wealthy family and a poor family. She steps into the Pei Mansion with the determination to break off the engagement. This plot setting breaks the rules. There is no clinging to high status, only sobriety and determination. The male protagonist Pei Xun, as a young minister of Dali Temple and a young talent in the capital, is used to being looked up to by everyone, but is mercilessly rejected by Jiang Hailan. This gap gives him a strong desire to explore. From the initial surprise and slight surprise towards Jiang Hailan, to his gradual attraction to her uniqueness, his emotions changed naturally and smoothly. The author's writing style is delicate, the depiction of ancient life scenes is lifelike, the dialogue is concise and powerful, and the characters' personalities are accurately displayed, without falling into the clichés of ancient romance. With novel settings, full characters, wonderful plots and beautiful words, he creates a unique ancient world. Well worth reading.

The emotions are very full, and the male and female protagonists are perfect. However, there are too many female rivals, which makes the noble daughter of an aristocratic family extremely unworthy, and the vicious female supporting role is also very one-sided. However, the love between the male and female protagonists is still very vividly portrayed. It is not surprising that the male protagonist would fall in love with someone like the female protagonist. The female protagonist has a very charming personality.

It is simple and not verbose, and the emotional descriptions are very delicate. I cried while watching it, and I had a sense of the picture during the reunion. It is all because of the author's writing skills. The short dialogue did not prevent me from crying. It describes the male protagonist's heart delicately, and the self-blame and heartache after the reunion. It turns out that sometimes the plot does not require a lot of dialogue between the male and female protagonists. Simple actions reach the peak. It is very good. It needs to be proofread in the early stage. The overall feeling is good. I wish Jiang Hailan and Pei Xuan peace, health and happiness in that time and space.

It's been a long time since I've read a story with such detailed inner descriptions. The characters and inner descriptions are realistic and there is no exaggerated plot. The heroine, as a time traveler, also acts completely according to her identity. There is no advance prediction of the script. This is one of the better novels I have seen recently.

The heroine is strong and independent. After the death of her father, she decisively exited a marriage with a disparity in family status. It can be said that she is very calm. It's a pity that there is a huge disparity in status between her and the male protagonist. All the male protagonists' rotten peach blossoms can easily kill her. Even if they fall in love later, the natural chasm between them cannot be solved by any of the male protagonists. In the end, the female protagonist was killed by a rotten peach blossom on her way back home, and the male protagonist went crazy. Only then did she get rid of the love disorder, but the woman was gone, leaving the male protagonist with an empty body. It is a tragedy to write this. Fortunately, the author still arranged the ending where the heroine is rescued, reunited, and married. The author's writing is very good, a nice short article.

It's very beautiful, short and concise, but the story is cleverly conceived, logically fluent, and has a good idea. The female protagonist has normal outlook on life, is sober and independent, and is a character I like and appreciate very much. The same goes for the male protagonist. I can clearly feel the growth of the male protagonist. It's really beautiful. I recommend it [like][like][like][like][like][like]

The writing is good, short but concise. I have read too many articles and the story is really well written. I really like the sober and independent personality of the female protagonist, and I also like the calm but careless side of the male protagonist. After all, no one is perfect. Highly recommend!

Although it is short, it is a very exquisite little article. Only by not giving up on yourself will you get more respect and love. Although it is a little cruel, parting is for the joy of reunion. It is very interesting [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Worth a look. There are not many articles, but the logic is clear, the plot is closely linked, the personality is distinctive, and it is not sloppy. The heroine is independent, especially in ancient times, and strives to survive without losing her self-worth. [Praise]

Although there are some minor flaws in the book, the overall story logic is clear and the male and female protagonists are deeply emotional! The score should be higher! What I hate the most is reading endless long articles that are all repetitive!

Such a rare masterpiece! Although it is short, it has ups and downs, and the love is so true and deep! I like the young prince who knows how to respect the relationship between the two and cannot tolerate others and lets go of it with pride. I also like the young master of the Zeng family who saved Hai Lan's life and sees the facts clearly without getting entangled. What's more, Pei Xun's deep emotion makes the world move to tears. I'm immersed in the story and can't let it go for a long time! ! !

The writing is really good. I have read a lot of ancient sayings, and this one is the one that has been written into my heart (I have always been unable to read novels recently, so I want to find a kind of implicit but warm relationship between two people, without too many words, the warm love in the process of getting along). I can't express my thoughts on this article in words. The length is very short, the character introduction is not so comprehensive and concise, and the characters are simple, which is more attractive, regardless of comments. There are some minor mistakes mentioned in the forum (not important to me, I look at emotions). I like the heroine's character and behavior very much. The hero's behavior in the early stage was irritating and felt that he was not worthy of the heroine. But later he changed his opinion after understanding what the heroine wanted. This process is the male protagonist's growth... The description of the male and female protagonist's emotions, restraint, restraint, actions, and emotional pull are really too loving [Adoration] [Adoration]... I don't talk about Xu's true feelings, I just like this kind of novel... I don't express my emotions through too many words, accidents or even the actions of two people touching each other. Instead, the details of this kind of description and the inner turbulence move me more. Everyone likes it differently. Some people may think that these descriptions are a bit gorgeous and say very little, but I like this kind of detailed description. The author writes well and does not need to belittle himself. Low ratings do not mean that the writing is not good. There are always people who like to read... [Chigua] [Chigua]

Good book, well written 👌, the story is more realistic and not exaggerated. It is a short love story about a time-traveling woman, telling the true meaning of love, which is not about attachment, but about going through the ups and downs together, and being evenly matched. Although the story itself has many irrationalities, for example, if the heroine has space, why didn't she go in when she fell off the cliff? Why can a broken bone in a fall still return to normal without good treatment? But the male protagonist's deep affection and the female protagonist's independence and correct view of love can still be seen.

Readers, please don't skip the chapter because it is too short. The reason why the rating is not improved is probably because the chapter is too short. In fact, the author has a wonderful writing style. The short chapter depicts the love entanglement of the male and female protagonists, which perfectly reflects the vivid and three-dimensional image of the characters. The story is not procrastinating. It is really interesting. I hope the author will work hard and write more good works.

The rating is too low. It is a short and beautiful article. I think the final score is 9.5. There are too few articles that can move me with the deep affection of the male protagonist. The author's writing style is delicate, the characters are vividly portrayed, and the emotional description is perfect. The infatuation of the male protagonist is very touching. Come on, I look forward to all the works.

It's quite brief and shows the heroine's perseverance, like a cedar tree. She has her self-esteem and her pride. The male protagonist is very good. At first, he thought he was protecting her. Later, he learned to let go and grow with her. Xie Persimmon is also good, but the female supporting role is really bad. The two have gone through thousands of sailings together and are moving forward hand in hand.

Really, really, super beautiful. This short and concise book expresses ambitions in writing, and a woman who is free, independent, progressive, tough, brave and yet tender comes to life on the page. The transformation of the male protagonist Mr. Pei is even more amazing, stubborn, affectionate and powerful. Although the writing style is sometimes immature, the flaws do not hide the good points. Five stars encourage you!

This novel tells the truth, the writing is delicate, short and concise The heroine remains sober even when she is deeply in love. She does not care about power but only the righteousness in her heart. When facing high-ranking dignitaries, she remains sober and does not cling to the powerful or take it as a threat. She has a wise heart and a steelyard in her heart. She will not offend others unless they offend me. I completely finished watching it and stayed up late to catch up.

It's enough to feel the author's intention and to lay out the ideas. I would like to make a small suggestion. Some things can be subdivided. The wording does not need to be too gorgeous or repeated. Some of them can be passed on in one go. After all, I have a higher education. After time travel, I think the bullying from the ancestors and elders can be solved. You can refer to other types of articles. This article can really be a high-scoring article if you think about it! Sorry to "leave" first.

Although the story is short, it has endless aftertaste. The male protagonist's deep love and the female protagonist's determination are very attractive. How deep is the love? Love never depends on what he says, but on what he does. The male protagonist protects the female protagonist in his own way from beginning to end. This thought is the most touching...

It's a very interesting short story. The author's writing style is very good, the text is beautiful and delicate, and many scenes are vivid and vivid, such as being on the spot. The writing is also very realistic. People who travel through the past have no background, no money, and no growth. They are just ordinary people at the bottom of society. They will also be bullied and even lose their lives. Recommend

It's very touching. I haven't seen a high-quality work for a long time. Pei Xuan's love is deep and Hai Lan's love is rational. They rely on each other but are independent. They are both the most beautiful aspects of love. 2025.08.14 22:48

The author's first time, it's not bad. It can be seen that he is very attentive and a little cautious. Some of the logical time interleaving of ancient titles needs to be improved. The heroine's family is in decline, she has a modern soul, she is courageous but has no background, and can be stepped on by anyone. It is very realistic. The hero is not strong enough to protect her, and the heroine pays the price with her life. In the end, I still have to hug the eldest princess' lap...

Full marks! The author's writing style is delicate and fluent, and the plot of the story is exciting and vivid. The male protagonist does not care about family status, and his love is stronger than gold. The female protagonist does not cling to powerful people, and is rational and independent. The two experienced life and death and finally achieved perfection!

The heroine has a distinctive character, neither humble nor arrogant, does not seek power, does not envy luxury, is self-reliant and stands out among the noble women who hope to have a good life by marrying a good husband, making men look up to her. Worth a look.

Although it is a short story, it is very interesting. Although the female protagonist is reborn as a modern female military doctor, she does not have any golden fingers. She saves countless lives with her medical skills. The male protagonist is handsome, powerful and capable, and goes both ways.

The writing is good, the emotional description is very delicate, and the sense of empathy is strong. The author should be a liberal arts student [laughing]

The writing is smooth and sharp, and the inner description is very detailed. Although some plots are not well thought out, the flaws are not concealed. Let's see how happy enemies come into each other's hearts. Support one [like] [like]

Unlike other time travel stories, there is space or system. The author uses delicate brushwork and witty words to describe how the male and female protagonists went through hardships, life and death, and finally came together. A very interesting short article [Like][Like][Like]

The story and character settings are quite attractive and very encouraging to the author. The only drawback is that some plot details are described with excessive force, which makes people feel redundant and wordy, and some words are out of touch with the ancient background. Although the flaws are not concealed, it is still very interesting.