Mecha: the School Belle's Mecha Engine Was Dismantled at the Beginning

After reading it, it's generally pretty good. It's obvious that the author has his own worldview framework and protagonist's personality framework. If the protagonist's style is maintained like this, and continues with the current story structure, it should be able to achieve a score of 9.2 Or above on Tomato. Next, it depends on how the author develops the worldview, and how to advance the plot while continuing to maintain the special personality of the protagonist. I would like to give you a 5⭐ encouragement [currently in progress] Not counting the front row tips, don't be misled by the title of the book. This book is not a college stream, nor is it about picking up a girl to have an affair with. The school beauty is just a passerby. The apprentices you take in in the early stage are just for your own goal process. Don't be misled by the long review with the highest praise. The protagonist's goal is very clear, and a series of events that occur during the goal process are simple and rough actions. Do what is beneficial and remove any obstacles. There is no procrastination.

On a certain level, this is an excellent novel that is delayed by its name. In fact, the school beauty in the title is just a sidekick. There is currently no heroine found. The overall look and feel is good, and the universe and mecha settings are also very full.

It kills decisively without leaving any consequences, with a little humor and humor. The writing skills are second-rate on the Internet, and the cool writing is second-rate. Although there are old routines and old jokes, the handling method is very clean, and the connection is very smooth. Male video contestants and cool writing contestants can directly join

It's really beautiful! It's just because of the name [face covering] I saw it a few times at first and didn't click in to read it. Later, when I ran out of books, I came in to read it and found it really beautiful! ! Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was about the main character accidentally dismantling the school belle's mecha in school and then becoming a blockbuster. After reading it, I realized that it had nothing to do with what I thought! ! The content is really beautiful! ! Even though the title of the book is a bit... The protagonist doesn't hide his name, so there won't be any plot of mistaken identity! ! Come on, author! !

Don't be put off by the title. The mecha pictures do match the description. The protagonist is very strong (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧, but the female protagonist should not be there. The description of the mecha battle process is very detailed (very good), and the mecha text is considered 👍.

Seeing Shit Yellow Button, it is the best mecha novel I have read so far. It does not have any messy extensions. It has advantages and disadvantages, and it meets the taste of some people. Although he is invincible, he is not without brains. I have never seen a similar book (even for the plot). Those who wrote about skin-changing should be the navy.

Personally, I feel pretty good about it for now, so I stayed up late to watch it. To be honest, the rating is relatively low. But I feel worse than the author. After all, I can't stand a good book with low ratings. Here are some of my suggestions for authors. Maybe the rating can be improved. First and foremost, the thing I want to complain about most is the title of the book. The promotion of this book should be good. When I first saw the title of the book, I didn't even have the slightest desire to click on it. But there are really no books to read. I happened to touch the interface by mistake again. After seeing the introduction of the author's book, I started to get into the trap with the attitude of taking a look. What follows is really exciting. Therefore, I personally suggest that you change the title of the book to one that is more attractive to readers, or that clearly indicates what the article is about, which can better attract readers who like this category. At the same time, the rating will naturally become higher. Secondly, the author should indicate in the tags no female protagonist, single female protagonist, or multiple female protagonists. Judging from the current situation, there should be no female protagonist or a single female protagonist. If the author does not clearly indicate this, some readers may not meet their expectations. This gives the phenomenon of negative reviews. In the end, the battle description in this book is a bit too long, and the author has few updates in a single day, and there are too many battles. One or even several pictures depict battles. This will lower the quality of the content of this book. It is recommended that the battle content be briefly described. Thereby improving the quality of articles. Or add a few more chapters in a single day, and use a large number of words to make up for the decline in the quality of the article caused by too many battle descriptions (of course, the quality of the content of the single page must be ensured, otherwise readers will criticize the word count or content, resulting in a decrease in the article quality score) These are my thoughts after reading it. The author's writing style is quite good. To be honest, my expectation is that this book should get a rating of 9.0 Or above. If there are any new thoughts later, I will add them. I also hope that supportive book friends will express their own suggestions to promote the progress of the book. Personally, I feel pretty good about it for now, so I stayed up late to watch it. To be honest, the rating is relatively low. But I feel worse than the author. After all, I can't stand a good book with low ratings. Here are some of my suggestions for authors. Maybe the rating can be improved. First and foremost, the thing I want to complain about most is the title of the book. The promotion of this book should be good. When I first saw the title of the book, I didn't even have the slightest desire to click on it. But there are really no books to read. I happened to touch the interface by mistake again. After seeing the introduction of the author's book, I started to get into the trap with the attitude of taking a look. What follows is really exciting. Therefore, I personally suggest that you change the title of the book to one that is more attractive to readers, or that clearly indicates what the article is about, which can better attract readers who like this category. At the same time, the rating will naturally become higher. Secondly, the author should indicate in the tags no female protagonist, single female protagonist, or multiple female protagonists. Judging from the current situation, there should be no female protagonist or a single female protagonist. If the author does not clearly indicate this, some readers may not meet their expectations. This gives the phenomenon of negative reviews. In the end, the battle description in this book is a bit too long, and the author has few updates in a single day, and there are too many battles. One or even several pictures depict battles. This will lower the quality of the content of this book. It is recommended that the battle content be briefly described. Thereby improving the quality of articles. Or add a few more chapters in a single day, and use a large number of words to make up for the decline in the quality of the article caused by too many battle descriptions (of course, the quality of the content of the single page must be ensured, otherwise readers will criticize the word count or content, resulting in a decrease in the article quality score) These are my thoughts after reading it. The author's writing style is quite good. To be honest, my expectation is that the rating of this book should be above 9.0 (The lowest expectation). If I persist, it may be even higher. If there are any new thoughts later, I will add them. I also hope that supportive book friends will post their own suggestions to promote the progress of this book. If there are some typos, please don't mind too much. After all, I typed it by voice😢😓😂

It's a very nice mecha story. The author is very talented. The world view is grand, the scenes are described in detail, and the mecha battleships are all illustrated. It's so handsome that I was blinded. There is no female protagonist, but the male protagonist is invincible in operation, and his strength depends on the upper limit of the mecha. As of the latest chapter 276, the large model is still being repaired [crying], and the large model is also still being repaired, but it has also appeared recently, killing indiscriminately and killing indiscriminately [admiration]. The male protagonist's usual machine is one stolen from others and one made by the college professor Lao Jiangtou. The shapes of the various forces are very three-dimensional, including the aristocratic empire that is afraid of death, the decadent federation with 80% useless members, the superior front against the bugs, the academy that unites friendship and positive energy, the terrifying bug swarm that combines wisdom and combat power, and the high-tech Flame Dragon Empire on the other side of the universe [smile]. The fly in the ointment at present is that our own combat effectiveness is somewhat low, and there is no high-end combat effectiveness that can support the scene. The people who give other shots are either the Silly Spore Councilor's men or the losers who came down from the Zerg front. In the future, can the author write something that can fight side by side with the male protagonist, share the battle pressure, and be trustworthy with high combat power? I've been reading books for a long time. Next time I come back, I hope to see the big size activated [laughs]

I haven't seen the setting of cosmic mecha in a few years, so suddenly I found this book and it felt quite novel. The story is quite interesting, and the narrative is not long-winded. It maintains tension, suspense, and excitement at all times. At least it kept me watching when the main plot was clear, which is rare. I don't know if there will be branch lines or expanded plots outside the main plot in the future (for example, starting the war against Japan again or something). I hope the author can complete this work well! Taste! Bar. The author seems to be making progress like Xuanji (the artificial intelligence in the novel). From the beginning, the fighting was "boom boom boom", and then the multi-angle description was very good.

I didn't expect the content to be so good. It's a rare masterpiece. Although there are a few bugs and the author's typing problems, it is overall a very good science fiction article. It has a sense of grandeur, especially after I start to fight bugs. It is very good. The only problem is that it is not finished yet. It should be in the middle and late stages of writing. If the author can keep it steady, he will surpass 99% of the works. Come on.

It is considered a masterpiece in Tomato. The only pity is that there is no female protagonist, and there is basically no daily transition in the whole process. It would be much better to add a single female protagonist and write about daily life.

See chapter eighty. It can be said that it is a fantasy novel about mechas. The whole book is very comfortable, and the character of the protagonist is also very popular at the moment. He is decisive in killing, has no woman in his heart, loves money, has no emotional line, is not a virgin, has a clear mind, sharp combat, and occasionally has a bit of humor. He's a protagonist who's hard to dislike. And currently there is no emotional line. The writing on mechas is not very good, because mechas have very few scenes. It's more like a fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. In it, a mecha with a higher level can crush a mecha with a lower level. However, the protagonist can break this law, just like in fantasy novels, geniuses cross levels to challenge. The way the mechas are written here is not as exciting as in Mobile Storm, so most of the time it is basically just a quick glance. But the author is still thoughtful. Basically, mechas with names will take photos, and these mechas are like holy bodies and gods in Zhetian. They basically talk about the appearance and start working on it. So if you are a serious mecha fan, you don't need to read this book, because there is really very little about mecha. The other thing is to complain about this name. To be honest, I only clicked on this book when I saw it for the third time, because when I saw the name, I thought it was Mary Suven. It is recommended that the author change his name, otherwise it will be difficult to capture effective readers.

After reading 89 chapters, I gave it a 5-star review. The author wrote this mecha genre very well, especially the character of the protagonist and the AI ​​that accompanies him. It's super fun. There is currently no female protagonist. She basically has a somewhat invincible tendency. I highly recommend it.

This book ✍🏻 is very good. The content and world view are very novel. There are no poisonous points at the moment. I hope the author will finish the book without being negatively affected. I hope the author will write a longer book. The alien world view can be slightly expanded to present the vast universe and the fascinating interstellar technology. Come on, author, I support you.

Hhh The male protagonist of this book is indeed invincible. Although he has his own high-energy-consuming mecha, he is also constantly updating his small mecha based on the actual strength and enemy situations suitable for display, from Holy Inquisition (Star Ring), to Dianxiao (Singularity) to a biological mecha "Spear Master" (Guixu), step by step to improve his display strength. The spear master among them has successfully achieved self-sufficiency and seems to have unlimited energy. Then the overall route of the male protagonist is also logical and clear. When he realizes that both countries are actually weak, he makes a decisive move and takes risks. The mechas that appear in the article also have a lot of heart and there is no repetitive content. I have read more than 400 chapters so far, and the plots and fighting descriptions are good, some are exciting, and some are emotional.

This mecha writing is awesome! The author's imagination is ridiculous, the settings of those mechas are super cool, and the descriptions of the battle scenes are so exciting that it made my blood boil. The plot is so compact that there is no nonsense at all, and each link is linked together, making people want to read it in one go. The characters are also very three-dimensional, and each character has its own shining point. It is really the best mecha novel I have read recently!

A very good mecha story with a grand world view. The author also handles the protagonist's character well. Unfortunately, due to length, the grand narrative and supporting character interactions are slightly lacking. As a result, the overall feeling of the work to me is more like watching a documentary about the protagonist's actions; when reading, it lacks some exciting emotional ups and downs. Maybe you have to wait until the counterattack against the Zerg later to see a more exciting chapter. Come on, author!

Very good. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. The protagonist's mecha Shifang Ji is at the ceiling level of the battleship World Pardon Order. After reading the 200th chapter, the ceiling is still the same. However, the energy in the previous battle with the Zerg is insufficient and cannot be used all the time. I usually use other mechas. It is very good. The release of Shifang Ji directly solves the problem.

The writing style is okay. Although it is an invincible style, the invincibility of the protagonist does not appear to be particularly abrupt. All aspects of combat power steadily advance the plot and do not look fragmented. The author is too short, and the production team's donkeys do not dare to be so idle [note]

It's invincible. Although I can't understand it, and I don't know much about the universe-level science fiction setting or some real-life knowledge, but I just think it's awesome and upscale, and the plot is compact. It would be nice if there were more science fiction novels like this. Fantasy and the like are too boring to read. They are always in the name of science fiction, and I will not write about fantasy and immortality in the future. It doesn't have the fast-food style of online writing, with a slow pace and plots about Long Aotian and Xiao Tiandi. The most important thing is that this protagonist can be regarded as both a growth stream and an invincible beginning stream.

This is the best technological style I have ever seen. One of the main features is that the two civilizations are somewhat illogical in the initial setting and the middle and later stages, but the explanations about technology, celestial bodies, and various cosmic phenomena are quite adequate. Oh, the good thing is that the male protagonist and Chen Xi use mechas of the same level, but there is a point later that she can only drag the bugs in the void dimension (the combat power under the aggregate) and cannot kill them. The setting here is very contradictory. She felt that she was chasing the aggregates before, but now she said she can only hold them back, but the male protagonist can indeed kill them, and the combat power is a bit messy. However, this is indeed a rare masterpiece. The author still needs to further develop the setting. You can look at the previous plot to avoid being unreasonable.

You don't need to pay attention to the title of the book, it's purely eye-catching. This school beauty is basically an NPC who leads the way to unlock the plot. A plot was paved for her later on. She may be the trump card to completely defeat the Zerg, or it may be a landmine. The heroine's words are 56 The heroine only appeared in Chapter 100. The heroine is the pilot of Yanlong's magic machine. However, the emotional scene has not been described in detail yet. After more than 600 chapters, the hero has only slightly responded to the heroine's feelings (meaning that he started to care about the heroine's safety after being betrayed by Xuanji). It is estimated that they will be together in the finale.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a "pleasant" novel, so I'd like to give it a thumbs up Secondly, is there any fellow fan who can understand that feeling? With the relevant theoretical knowledge base and the taste that has been cultivated by orthodox science fiction, it is really hard to describe some so-called enjoyable articles. There are also people who complain about the heroine, which is really useless; there are really some humanoid creatures who want to complain mindlessly and they will not care about you. Besides, this is not a flaw at all... The author continues to work hard to maintain the standard. It is so difficult to find a book that I feel is not poisonous at all these days [blowing kiss]. So now that there is a book shortage, I have to read books from 15-16 years ago. Let me ask you, that was a few years ago... You don't have to show pictures, the current level of AI is completely fed by humans, and I really don't have any hope for the level of domestic science fiction dramas. Therefore, the description must be detailed and can be polished slowly, but the updates must be quick [blowing kiss]

The author's writing style is really great. In this novel, the author's description of mechas perfectly matches all my fantasies about mechas. The author should update it quickly. It's too little and it's not enough to read.

I have read more than 600 chapters, and overall I feel good about it, and I found a song that is very suitable for listening to while reading, "Judgment Hour" by the director. Personally, I think it is very suitable [Learned]

I have always liked this kind of mecha novels in the early years, but few authors can write them to the end. In my impression now, I only remember the one written by Tomato🍅, which seems to be called Devouring the Starry Sky, and the Super God Mechanic, which is more interesting. Personally, I like this kind of novels that have a big trump card at the beginning, and some that are wretchedly developed in the early stage, strong in the middle stage, and killing randomly in the late stage.

It's good to read. The plot in the early part of this book is not very smooth and a bit boring. In the middle and later stages, it is quite interesting. But now when I write about the game with the empire and see the emperor directly forcefully taking action, it feels a little different from the previous characters and decision-making. Other aspects of the writing are okay.

The adventure of a super invincible single offensive battleship without self-repair function and an invincible mecha that consumes huge amounts of energy. (PS: Combat power is not calculated like this. The impression is okay at 4-star level, 5-star encouragement)

I can't say it's fine, but it's pretty good. The combat and mecha technology are pretty well written. The front development direction looks a bit uncomfortable. It's a kind of suppression of the growth rate. (Invincible is definitely invincible, but the author's writing is not very transparent, which gave me a weird feeling.) As for the heroine, I only saw the suspected heroine later.

This is what the Zerg should look like. I read a book about raising bugs in Naruto World before and it was based on the Zerg. The bugs that were raised either eat stones or drink blood. They grow as big as fleas. The evolution of bugs depends on the system. In a world with a cultivation system, bugs are not as powerful as the technology system, and they can make money to death.