After Seeing the Manga Comments, I Tear Up the Cannon Fodder Script

I'm going to die if I can't find a meal replacement (whining) - Super beautiful barrage. It's really cool for ordinary people to disguise the barrage as superpowers and effectively use the information gap. The creation of the protagonist team is also super good. Everyone's abilities are very interesting, and they also use various evil cultivators' fighting methods. I like the feeling that you are so stubborn and have no lower limit the most [making faces] Personally, I especially like to read barrages/forums. The ability of the protagonist of this book is closely related to barrages. I really enjoyed reading it. Author, you are really good at writing barrages. Please write more——[Shy]

I have read more than 400 chapters in full, and I have read the four chapters in full. I am a long-time fan of the book since Chapter 50. The content contains subjective evaluations. Please treat this post rationally and use it as a lightning protection and recommendation. 1. Judging from the complete book, the pace of the book is a bit slow. There are already one million words of content, but the growth of the protagonist group is still a little thin. (Note: I have read all the author's description of the growth of the protagonist group in Chapter 0) It's not that it's not good to describe the protagonist group in great detail, but in comparison, the amount of text is not directly proportional to the growth, which makes the shortcoming of slow pace even more exaggerated. 2. It is indeed a group portrait. Everyone has their own advantages and disadvantages. It is not a simple label character. However, the main focus is still on Di Zelan and the protagonist. A large amount of space is used to describe the running-in and conflict between Di Zelan and the protagonist, which makes the group portrait focus on a pair of relationships with outstanding characteristics. It fails to describe the changes in the emotional relationships between several other colleges and even several other people in the team, which is worse. 3. From a narrative point of view, the events in this chapter are really close together. Almost before this event is completely over, it begins to lead to the occurrence of the next event. Combined with the previous 1, the book as a whole seems to be a bit confusing and requires serious thinking. - [Supplement] The gender element is not obvious (de-gendered), that is, there is no specific description of gender in this article. For example, women are inferior to men, which is objective and fair. Gender is just a role setting and has nothing to do with the development of things, etc. - Okay, so now that we are here, I want to start asking the author the following questions: a. The emotional connection between the protagonist and Di Zelan occupies a large amount of space in this article, which weakens the conflict between Di Zelan and the original protagonist (Han Fengyao). There is very little (or even almost no) ink to describe this in the article, but it is obvious that the personality of the original protagonist and Di Zelan cannot conflict with each other. I would like to ask the author what he thinks about this (continued in 2). B. Regarding combat power, there is still no obvious breakthrough in the protagonists' combat power after more than 400 chapters. As a result, the readers, who can only watch the information given by the author, cannot understand the complete combat power of the protagonist group. Can the author spend more time describing this point? (To be added...) You are welcome to discuss with me, because I don't have the habit of re-reading, so I have forgotten the initial content, so I won't make any comments. If you criticize, you are right. I hope you can use rational and objective evaluation to refute my point of view. Sorry for the error in my expression. As for question a, my original intention is to express that the author did not describe too much about the changes in the relationship between several people in the team (there are also other colleges, which does not only include the relationship between Han and Emperor) orz Part 2 I have been watching plq, feel free to discuss the entire article, please do not escalate it to a separate role & author, I will delete it if I see it, thank you

It looks good. The character design of the protagonist is also well handled. The battle of wits in the front is also good. I don't understand what the comment section said about the supporting character taking away the aura of the protagonist [face covering]. The supporting character is described in two or three lines, and then the protagonist directs a plane. Is this fun? It's better to play behind the scenes (the kind where a protagonist pretends to be various people [facepalm]) and how to solve the conflict between her and the protagonist's concepts later without shaping her in the front [facepalm] To be honest, I didn't find any place where the protagonist is belittled to promote the supporting role, and the latest update also shows that they need a failure to become a real team. Isn't this the growth of a group protagonist?

Oh my god, it made me laugh to death. The settings were added in the early stage, and there is a sense of déjà vu in the back. Oh my god, my god, the protagonist's brain is very good. Everyone has an exclusive position in the protagonist group, and there are a lot of foreshadowings in the early stage. The identity of the protagonist is a bit mysterious. If you look closely, you will feel like you are reading a comic.

It's so delicious. I rarely write book reviews. Really, I really can't find such a perfect meal replacement. I think the rating can be a little higher. This group of people really made me feel hot all over. Everyone is a good boy. I agree with what the author said. There will definitely be quarrels in a friendship. When I read those books, they basically just go along with it all the way without much quarrels. On the contrary, there is not much feeling of friendship. If you understand step by step like this, that is the real friendship! Our father-son team must have a good time, it's so cute! ! 😆Xiaojiu is so handsome! Beibei is so cute, just like a ball of dessert! The eldest lady is not a tsundere in the traditional sense. She has her own opinions and calm thinking. I have basically never encountered such a character! 999 Is the same, it's so cute😋, I like to read so many articles like Tomato without CP image, the author will always support you, okay! ! ! ! ! [Sending Hearts] ? If you look at the tags, it's just that the group portrait is slow to gain popularity, and you've just read dozens of chapters and made random comments. . Some people gave it one star and asked what it meant to mark it. If you don't like it, just quit. Not everyone has to write [what] around your XP.

Personal advice, because I can't stand some of the words in the comment area, so it's as written First of all, the most important point is that this book is a real group portrait that requires a high-quality outline and a biography of the characters. So I like this book very much. He controls the rhythm well. And each character is well-written and promotes the plot. Yes, what I like is the author's writing style. It's not about how good the literary talent is or how beautiful the words are, but that the author is very good at writing the characters, and then let the characters move by themselves, and then refine the characters through barrages. Each character has its own logic of action and style of doing things, rather than facial makeup. If you like group portraits or like diverse characters, I recommend taking a look. The work is not rotated for the protagonist, but the feeling of a small world. Why are the comment area full of weird people? It's fun to watch, but I saw a short paragraph that I didn't understand. In this inconsistent debate, see for yourself whether what you said conflicts with the previous one. In addition, after reaching more than 1.4 Million words, I gradually watched it. It's still the same as what I said before. The rhythm, arc, character, and concept are all on point. It's still so immersive. The most touching thing was to see the collision between 999 and Sister Lan's ideas about the "world" before coming to school, and then the death of the school girl who "had a similar fate" Another time line Mu Yang joins the restart Sister Yuan Yuanlan's different reactions after learning that her relatives were undercover agents I don't think it's like what those in the comment section said. This is a story with no growth and insufficiently obvious characters.

The writing is okay, the early plot is a bit slow, and the characters are well developed. I like Zelan Yanyu Jiuxiao Beibei Muyang Fengyao Yin Ling Yuanyuan Huahua Xiao Qiao Yuyu... (Are you on the registration list?) Everyone is slowly getting better, and Jiuxiao doesn't treat herself as an outsider like she did at the beginning. You must all live well. Some people don't like to see group portraits, please quit and find cool articles about the leading male lead and heartthrob. Thank you.

So far I actually like it, and there's nothing too bad about it, but as some readers have said, it's not satisfying enough. The main author's setting of the protagonist has no superpowers. Apart from being a good brain, he has no ability to protect himself. In a setting like this, fighting still relies on superpowers. Whether it's killing animals or fighting against people, you just don't have enough firepower. Original sin, your teammates have to be distracted to protect you during the battle. I personally think that relying on fighting and weapons is not enough and can only be used as an auxiliary. It is not that the brain power is not powerful and it is not important. It is just that it is definitely not more satisfying than the force value. Readers will understand it when reading the book. Of course, I hope that the protagonist is as powerful as possible, regardless of brain power or force. But having said that, the author's writing is really good. Except for the setting issues just mentioned, everything else is very good. The plot is also very interesting, the characters are more fleshed-out, and the group portraits are well written.

I've only read Chapter 40, and there's nothing interesting except for the eldest lady Di who thinks very highly of herself, is superior and has no emotional intelligence. But the author loves it so much. Judging from their abilities, the rest of the protagonist group either only have names or are mentioned in one stroke. She first "covered hundreds of meters∽" and then "analyzed it completely~". The barrage the male protagonist saw praised others one by one, but praised her directly to dominate the screen. The male protagonist also keeps trying to make up for her. I love her so much, why not give her a separate movie😊 Be quick, give me more

The story about the male protagonist of the team campus is quite interesting. The male protagonist has no miracles and uses barrage to collect information and achieve his "prediction". Entering the protagonist group as a supporting role without miracles is a major flaw in itself. For a person with miracles, he is very fragile. He can choose and play an important role in the team, except the commander. Indeed, he has also moved towards the direction of command at present, which is very good. From entering the simulation warehouse and seeing other people's miracles, the intangible changes to the tangible, we can already see the direction of future ability improvement. If you can clearly see the range and movement of other people's miracles in reality in the future, coupled with the superb command ability, it will basically be the standard for male protagonists.